05

Sunflower

chapter five;

 

 

As soon the bell signaling the dismissal went off, I felt my phone in my pocket vibrating. I waited for the teacher to leave first before answering, not even bothering to check the ID as I knew only one person would call me right after the bell rings.

 

“What’s up?” I said while stuffing my books into my backpack.

 

“You have practice today, right?” asked Jongin without a hello as usual.

 

“Yup. Why?”

 

“Because I need to rush home,” he replied, then added, “Stomachache,”

 

I chuckled. “It’s okay, go on. You don’t have to wait,” I told him. “Besides your stomach is more important than me, right?”

 

I heard him laughing over the phone. “I’ll come back to pick you up,”

 

“Okay. Be careful not to do your business halfway on the streets,”

 

“Yah!” he yelled before bursting into another fit of laughter.

 

After hearing the beep, I shoved my phone into my bag and slung it over my shoulder as I made my way out to head to the gym. Just as I was about to turn, I felt my shoulder bumping into someone, causing a book I was holding to slip off my hand and fall to the floor. I sighed and hunkered down to pick it up, but that person beat me to it.

 

“Here,” he mumbled as he handed the book back to me. “Sorry,”

 

“It’s fine,”

 

“Hey, it’s you!”

 

I looked up and finally met his eyes. It was the same boy I saw that day when Jongin and I went out for patbingsoo. I opened my mouth to speak, but realizing I did not really understand why he would recognize me since we had never spoken before, I closed it back and frowned.

 

Perhaps he noticed my confusion, because he immediately cleared it up. “That day, it was my ball,” he said. But seeing that it did not really help, he went on. “I was the one who knocked you off with my ball,” he explained further. “And I carried you to the infirmary,”

 

My eyes widened. “Oh, so it was you! I was wondering who it was since you left before I woke up,”

 

“Are you mad?” he raised an eyebrow. “Is your head okay? The nurse said it was fine so I left. Plus your brother was there,”

 

“No, no, it’s not that I’m mad. I just wanted to thank you,”

 

“Thank me?”

 

“For bringing me there,”

 

“Ah,” he nodded, revealing his smile. “In that case, you’re welcome,”

 

I smiled back, shifting my weight from one foot to another, not knowing what else to say. I remembered then that I was supposed to head to the gym, and he was not supposed to be in my classroom. “What are you doing here by the way?”

 

“I was looking for someone,” replied him, cocking his head to one side to peek inside the class. “But I guess she’s already left,” he shrugged.

 

“Who?” I blurted out.

 

He smiled again, but somehow I saw a different type of smile from the previous one. “Doesn’t matter,” he returned. “Let’s go. We have practice now, don’t we?” He turned around and started walking away, but paused after a couple of steps and glanced back around. “I’m Minho by the way,”

 

Another smile crept up, gracing my lips. My gaze at him softened, and somehow I felt my heart warmed at the sound of his name. Minho. “I’m Suji,”

 

“Suji,” he repeated, his eyes trailing at the fluffy white clouds in the side. “That’s nice,”

 

-

 

I didn’t realize how poor I played that afternoon. Even my coach’s hollers were inaudible to my ears.

 

But I remembered stealing glances, and that was all, until the final whistle blew and I heard a warm voice calling my name. “Ready?” Jongin asked, my bag already hanging on his shoulders.

 

I smiled at him yes, but as we both headed off, I stole another glance back, deep down hoping that he’d do the same.

 

But he didn’t.

 


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hottest148 #1
Chapter 20: I just stumble upon this story. It is really good. No. It is AMAZING. I like the you write it. Jongin is really wonderful big bro that everyone wish for. Many years had passed yet there is no final chapter. But for me, its still cool that Suzy can accept it and Jongin was there for her. I can take the ending like that.
alcyonne
#2
Chapter 20: This is one of the best curious clicks I've taken. I don't even ship the couple or anything, but I managed to read all of this in one sitting without straying my eyes from the screen. You easily got me hooked, just like that. I love the way you write, it's so simple yet leaves a great impression each time. The flow, pace and everything was just well done. The portrayal of the sibling relationships between Suzy & Jongin was so pure and beautiful...realistically written that it was not hard to adore it. And Riah's name deprived from Dahlia got me like whoa! That was pretty cool, like I didn't expect it. This story was just heart-warming overall and I wonder what will happen to Minho and Suzy's relationship after they cleared out things between them. Looking forward to the finish! <3
adiezty #3
Chapter 20: I'm new reader and i love this story ..Waiting for this story to update :'(..
ellehzier #4
Chapter 20: Hello author! I am looking forward for the update and for the one shot :) Hope you can finish it soon :) and thank you for continuing this story :)
kirakira-
#5
hello! i'm not sure how to make an announcement that can be seen by everyone (there's a word limit for the story feed), so i hope you guys can read from here! i'm not dropping this story so don't worry! i promised i wouldn't stop writing, and i'm still keeping that promise. as most of you probably already know, there's only one chapter left, and that kind pressures me because i want to write an ending that i wouldn't regret later. i ended up taking a long time figuring out the best ending, so i'm really sorry for that :(
that aside, i'm actually in the process of rewriting this fic into a long oneshot. it's basically the same storyline but i removed and added some details and scenes. i've been working on that for a while and i hope i can finish it soon enough along with the final chapter for this one. i'm sooooo sorry for making you guys wait for so long :( and i'm also thankful that some of you still stick around and messaged me about this. i will do my best T__T
anyways if you want to talk to me and ask me about this fic or others, i can be found here ask.fm/kansha :)
Luzyhan
#6
When will update this? Please..i want to see kaizy together TT TT Its been years already but I am still here..
SkullMaki
#7
Chapter 20: New reader and I love it please update soon^^
kimdeyya #8
I'm still waiting for your update, literally your story is the only story that I've been waiting for it updates now, I don't read ff as much as I used to but I still comeback to see this ff, I hope someday you will update authornim :) fighting!
kkamjongzy
#9
ive been reading this story since two years ago, and just subscribe it now im sorry hehe your story is amazing i think this is the first story i read seriously in aff keke i hope it will end up with kaizy please update soon:)
denisaoi #10
Chapter 20: keep waiting for the next update, u're amazing, i really love your story!! i keep smiling when read your story, really great!! update soon authornim, thank youuu :)