filipino-korean - Lost My Sanity
come at me bro ♡ request shop oneauthor; filipino-korean
Title; [ 4/5]
Description; [9/10]
Graphics: [7/10]
Character Organizing; [6/10] - Don't let characters pop out unexpectedly; it'll confuse the readers
Plot; [6/10] - A little confusing; the purpose behind the story was vaguely understood.
Flow; [7/10]
Style; [5/5]
Originality; [8/10]
Captivation; [7/10]
Grammar and Spelling; [9/10] - Have a consistent use of tenses. Never vary between present tenses and past tenses.
Ending; [9/10]
Total; [73/100]
review by Onjong
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