Myumeful - Follow the river and you'll find the sea.
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Follow the river and you'll find the sea.
Title; [5/5]
Description; [9/10] There's a cliff-hanger effect, but it's too short.
Graphics: [10/10]
Character Organizing; [10/10]
Plot; [8/10] Generally nice, but you may need to specify what illness Minhee was suffering from.
Flow; [10/10]
Style; [5/5]
Originality; [10/10] As far as I have read, very little fanfictions include illnesses in their plots. Good work.
Captivation; [9/10]
Grammar and Spelling; [10/10] Good for a non-native speaker, I’ll say.
Ending; [7/10] The ending was abrupt; you can add on, like a sequel to the story. What happened to Minhee? Where was she? These questions need to be answered.
Total; [93/100]
review by OnJong
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