indielokimin - Sundown at Six
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author; indielokimin
story; Sundown at Six
Title
[5/5]
Plot
[19/20]
I haven't read that many fanfics, and even though this was a story with a war plot, it was still really good. I found the plot captivating, and sad, like when Minho dies. The story has a lot of suspense, like the ending- we don't really know what happened to Yoong.
Originality
[20/20]
The story line was very interesting and original.
Character Personalities
[9/10]
There are so many characters, i don't know how you stay true to the characters, but you do. Some parts seem out of place, but mast of the characters are true to their nature, and do what would be expected of them.
Fluency
[8/10]
Some parts were a bit choppy, and didn't make a lot of sense to me. But, all in all, it flowed pretty well.
Captivation
[12/15]
I don't really like stories set in the past, but this was one of the few that really held my attention. There were a few points where it wasn't very captivating, but the entire story was entertaining.
Lingering/Pacing
[8/10]
The story was well written, but some parts I thought went too fast for my taste.
Grammar/Spelling
[9/10]
There were a only a few spelling mistakes that I saw, and no grammar errors.
Overall Grade: 89
review by fyresword
PS. Sorry for the long wait =_= and this reivew is up to part 2 :D
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