i heard what you had just thought...

Hey Say 7 VS. Hey Say Best

 

 

one year after the plane accident, Keito was staying in an old apartment all by himself...since he's cold towards other person, he has no friend in their neighborhood...

 

Keito: another day has arrived...(comes out of his apartment)

little kid: ohayo onisan..!

Keito: (just stare at the kid)

old lady: don't talk to him...(whispers to the little kid) he might beat you if he didn't like your attitude...(takes the little kid inside)

Keito: what was that old lady was saying...me...?beat a little kid...tss...i guess i have to go get fresh air outside...

 

=as Keito was walking outside, he passed by the playground...he sat at the bench and watched the little kids as they play=

 

little girl: hey ojisan, can you play with me..?

Keito: what did you say...? (looks at the little girl)

little girl: (startled when Keito looked at her and began to cry...)

Keito: hey, chotto...why did you cry all of a sudden...?

mother of the little girl: how dare you make my daughter cry...! come on dear, let's go home now...

little girl: ok...

Keito: (sigh) it's always like this..

Karina: (walks through the playground) ohayo..! oh, why is it that you look like badtrip...?

mother of the little girl: it's because there's a guy who made my precious daughter cry...! (points at the direction of Keito and walks away...)

Karina: hontou...? (walks to where the lady was pointing) oh, so you were the one who made that girl cry...

Keito: nani..?

Karina: hmmm...if i examine you carefully, you doesn't seem to look like you can hurt that kid...(walks forward to Keito)

Keito: hey, hey..! chotto matte..! who are you by the way...?

Karina: oh, gomen, i forgot to introduce myself...i'm Karina Kurosaki...and you are...?

Keito: Keito, Keito Okamoto...

Karina: yoroshiku Keito-san...!

Keito: why is it that she's already feeling close to me...?

Karina: hey Keito-kun, may i sit here..? (points at the side of Keito)

Keito: i guess so...

Karina: (tooks out her ipod and puts the earphones in her ears...) (starts to pretend that she's playing the drums..)

Keito: what a weird girl...but i think i like her...because she never judge me and even wants to be friends with me...

Karina: (turns off the ipod and looks at Keito) say Keito-san, why does the mother of the little kid said that you make her daughter cry...?

Keito: nevermind her...all the people are like that...they always judging me that i might do something bad...you know Karina-san, it's just that i only wanted to be alone so that's why i seldom greet people and even smile at them...

Karina: oh, soka...you know Keito-san, i think we had the same experiences, some people also judge me that i have my own world and everything...! i don't get them...and i dont care what they would say..as long as i got my ipod with me, then i'm already happy...(smiles at Keito)

Keito: you know what Karina-san, i think you're cool...(suddenly hears something in his ears...) i think you're cool too Keito-san...(giggles) did you say something Karina-san..?

Karina: nani...? i didn't say anything...

Keito: that's strange...(start hearing things again...) (holds his ears)

Karina: Keito-san, daijoubu...?

Keito: (looks around the people at the playground...)what is this...? why am i hearing all of your thoughts...?!

Karina: what did you say Keito-san...? you can hear our thoughts...?

Keito: hai...let me try it on you...you are now thinking on what is happening with me right...?

Karina: (shocked) you really can read people's thoughts...!

Keito: matte, i...i think it stopped...i can't here people's thoughts anymore...

Karina: (holds Keito's hands) you know what Keito-san, i think you have a super powers..! sugoi ne...~..!

Keito: do you really think it's cool..?

Karina: of course...! having a super power was awesome...!

Keito: oh, i...i guess you're right Karina-san...(looks at the clock) oh, i gotta be going now Karina-san...see you tomorrow...!

Karina: ok, jaa Keito-san...!

 

 

by: momohoshi

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Rei_24
#1
LOVED IT!!!!! Very good story, always keep me on the egde of my bed lol =D
Satomi-chan
#2
AWWWW!!! What a happy ending ne ^_^ sugoii!!

So it was the power of love after all that is needed to save the boys from Jun's curse. I am glad that Jun was finally able to realize things ne and Nino still remained to be a good friend despite everything that happened, he did not let revenge, hatred and anger get into his senses.

Each of the pairs are sooo cute! they all became happy and that was so sweet of them all.

I also like the pictures you made ne ^_^ kakkoi :D
And now they are back to being friends and JUMP came back ^_^v
cool!!!!

I am happy to be part of this story ne ^_^ I am looking forward for more from you guys :D

I noticed some errors in the grammar here but basing it and comparing it from your first chapters, you guys are improving ne ^_^ more and more polishing and you will be better and better!

Gambatte ne!!! thank you once again for sharing this story with us ^_^v
ReiEdeline #3
Love Happy ending~!
Omedetou for finished it!
It's really nice story~ :3
springjasmine91
#4
SUGOIIII! HAPPY ENDING! Ugh am so late at commenting again~ oh btw one u put "went" when it suppose to be "go"

love the ending! really great! Love the pictures! so nice! Omedetou on writing a great fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Karina-Ai #5
Sugoi!!! Happy ending ^^
Satomi-chan
#6
Good thing that the girls are safe and I hope that the others will be able to get back into their senses already :D haha!!! At least 7 was able to reunite with the girls :D

So Nino (I still am not used on calling him Ino :D lol!) and Jun were actually good friends and there was a love triangle involving Mao. I don't understand yet what Jun means by history happening again ne?! haha! Nino... please make Jun come back into his senses and make him realize things... Mao died because of that Y_Y Jun!!! why you so selfish here Y_Y

This is getting more and more exciting :D looking forward to your next update :D
springjasmine91
#7
Fuhhhh~ so thats what happen.....nino really have to keep JUMP safe....not make them repeat the history!really great chapter!! love it! gambatte for the next chapter na!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
danjirouriyoko
#8
Uwaaa thanks for the comments and thank you for reading our fic :))) hontou arigatou gozaimasu <3<3<3
springjasmine91
#9
Oh God! this is getting intense~!i'm shaking.........what will happen next! Update soon! gambarre!
pockypenguinmonster
#10
i hope they are safe.....