Neighbors

Blindly

From downstairs, Jongup faintly heard the doorbell ring. 

"Get that, son.  I'm unpacking." Mr. Moon yelled from the other room.

Jongup rushed downstairs to the front door and peered out of the peep hole.  Two blonde boys were outside, holding something in their hands.  Jongup smoothed his clothes then opened the door. 

"Hey neighbor!  We heard you moved in today, so we wanted to give you a moving-in present!" The one with curly hair said excitedly, pushing a plate of cookies into Jongup's hands. 

"I'm Bang Yongguk and this is Choi Junhong." The other one said.  His voice was deep and Jongup figured he was in his early twenties. 

"Call me Zelo!  We live just up the street.  You should come over sometime.  Gets lonely up here sometimes.  How old are you?"

"...This kid talks fast.  He could be a rapper." Jongup thought, just staring blankly at him. 

"Yah, calm down." Yongguk hit Zelo on his head, "I hope you and Zelo can get along.  Feel free to come over any time."

"T-Thank you for the cookies, Yongguk-ssi." Jongup wasn't used to interacting with people, especially people this friendly to him. 

"Call me hyung," Yongguk gave Jongup a gummy smile.

"Let's talk informally, okay?" Zelo said happily.  Something about this kid made Jongup smile too.  His excitement was contagious.

"Sure." Jongup smiled. 

"Come over for dinner tomorrow, okay?  We're just up there!" Zelo bounced up and down, pointing to his left.  Jongup looked out where he was pointing, but only saw trees. 

"It's less than a quarter mile up the road.  Hope to see you there," Yongguk said, pulling Zelo back.

"Thanks again." Jongup waved as the boys walked away.  Still smiling, he closed the door and went to go put the cookies in the kitchen.  Suddenly he bumped into something.  Unluckily for Jongup, it was his father.  His smile immediately disappeared.

"Who was that?" His father asked, taking the cookies away from Jongup. 

"O-Our neighbors." Jongup said quickly.  He fidgeted and wanted nothing more than to bolt upstairs into his room.

"Ah.  What did they want?" Mr. Moon walked over to the kitchen and placed the plate of cookies on the counter.  Jongup frowned.  He knew his father wouldn't let him even think about touching those.

"They invited us to dinner tomorrow.  Their house is up the street." Jongup immediately regretted telling his father.  He feared that Yongguk and Zelo wouldn't want to be his friend if they found out what his father was like.

"I guess you'll have to go for us." Mr. Moon said, taking a cookie and eating it. 

After seeing Jongup's questioning look, Mr. Moon continued, "I'm going out to the city to get a job.  We need to get more money."

Jongup felt relieved. Suddenly he was looking forward to tomorrow.

His father opened the refrigerator and grabbed a couple beers.  Jongup's eyes widened.  He didn't expect that his father would get drunk the day they moved into their new house. 

"Is there a problem?" Mr. Moon said slowly, walking past Jongup into the living room.  He the television and placed the beer on the table next to him. 

After excusing himself, he quickly jogged up the stairs to his room.

 

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It's slow.  Sorry (sorry sorry sorry~) ; o ;

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sujushineegg #1
great story
sweetjellyvelly
#2
HIMCHAN KILLED BANG AND ZELO?!?!?! I WAS LIKE AJOSIJSKFEIDHDKDFHFCUFCBDI!!!!
mintflavorturtle
#3
...after death, then if you do, then Jongup's finding the flower would have been real /in some way or another/, and his wishes would have become real /again, in swoa/, and Himchan would have died right there on the spot as Jongup wished for his final wish, because then Himchan would no longer have his earthly life; rather, he'd be in heaven with Jongup, who wished him to be there with his and/or heaven's blue flower!! (omg what a mouthful)
But then if you don't believe in heaven/lad then I guess chapters 11&12 never happened/were insignificant in the whole scheme of things because then there'd be no afterlife for them to happen in, right? Yes. And then Himchan would have lived Blindly ever after!!~
I kinda like my first conclusion more though, even though it's so akgakjdldfgja all over the place . _ . You do understand what I'm saying though, right? If you don't just ask me whenever I log on in the next few days ^^" or when we meet in person? Idkkkk BUT NO. SOBBING SIXEVER MY FAVORITE FIC AND ONE OF MY FAVORITE FICS JUST RECETLY ENDED (well, yours ended a while ago but w/e I just read it now) AND SADNESS FOR LIFE.

Write more plox? ^^ I'll try to think of something new; something fresh, like iced tea!!~ Just give me a base, just something reaaaalll simple, like, who you want your characters to be (so I can build the plot better based on that), and/or what genre of fic...? idk or I'll just give you some random that comes to mind that I think you'll do well idk I'm tired . _ .
mintflavorturtle
#4
omg the face I just made when I read that Himchan killed Bang&Zelo... omg you would've pissed yourself laughing. I felt the stupid all the way in my stomach. It was like, it was like a Sunggyu supa singa face. (Y'know those, those Sungkyu faces where he's singing like -0- but then mine was like that but with D.O eyes oml)

omg wait not done with the chapter yet but I THINK I GET IT. (I'm at the part where Himchan pretty much was thinking about the dead body fertilizer OTL) BUT DID HE KILL THEM BECAUSE THEN, Jongup would have experienced true pain, and then! then he would have the wishes and everything would be perfect again!!
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OMG WAIT WAIT WAIT HOLD THAT UP. SO JONGUP IS... IS OMG YOU MARO. DIS I GIVE UP I WILL NOT BECOME THE ANGST QUEEN OF BLINDLY. gdi

OMG LEAKING. MY HEART IS LEAKING BUT MY EYES WON'T FOR NO REASON AT ALL OMGGGGGG ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER READ AWARD OMGGGGG. OMG Y'know that ing ANNOYING feeling you get in your throat why you cry and it's like really tight and constricted and w/e the yes I sure hope you know what I'm talking about because I CAN FEEEEEEEEL it rn omg
What in the s, yo? Ugh.... So much cry.


WAIT HOLD THAT . X2. OMG. I GET IT. (Or i'm over-analyzing like usual and you really didn't mean it like this but IDEK/IDGAF I'LL SAY IT ANYWAY.) IMO, since w/e happened and it's pretty clear but w/e idc, and in a way, Jongup did really get his wishes, or what would've been his wishes had he not been dead (but now that I think about it this conclusion is making less and less sense the more I think about it since he never woke up to FIND the flower in the first place ugh here we go back to stage six) but omg... I feel like... I feel like Himchan should die in the end end end, and I guess even though his feeling for Jongup were like little to nothing, he'd still be with Jongup because Jongup did find the flower, but he found it in heaven, and depending on if you believe in heaven/life (cont)
mintflavorturtle
#5
oml
ing beautiful
this 's so ing perfect omg I'm never going to finish mine (trying to finish it before I post the first chapter) HOW DO I EVEN MATCH THIS OML
DAEJAEEEE AND BANG&ZELO AND OMG CREEEEYYYY
I'm thinking though... I'm planning on making mine more of a tragedy; is it alright if I use the wish idea too? It definitely won't be the same things, oh nonononono, definitely not. (Not like yours is bad; I lurve it, but I just don't think I have the ability to rewrite it, with a style of my own or w/e, y'know?) I'm thinking of erasing someone's existance completely, how does that sound?

(btw still reading Chapter 12 rn)

lol Zelo u so silly! They don't show music Videos on Music Bank! What a cutie.
""That Man Opposed" by Dalmatian started to play." face rn--> -OoO-

omg no you're going to(/you have written it already) make it really sad? ;; But but but I was supposed to write the really angst-choke-on-your-own-leaking half of the plot, while you write the happy-fluffy-wonderfur ending version!! ;; (no, kidding, but y'know... I can't write happy happy and I was expecting you to idk wae)
I'll read the final and comment on it after this. ^^
Hime504 #6
But, but, he wished to be with Himchan..! What about Channie? :( pout.
Anyways, I LOVED it. Like really, I'm subscribing you <3
sherilyntheeurasian
#7
....... '_' why ? Why !? TT.TT i tot jongup was gonna have a happy ending TT.TT
sherilyntheeurasian
#8
Yayyyyyy !!!! But ... What about bang n zelo ? And himchannie?
LiliLee #9
OHH I GET IT NOW! Hahahahahaha I feel so accomplished :D
OH MY GOD YOU KILLED OFF EVERYBODY AND MADE JONGUP MISERABLE AND SENT HIM BACK IN TIME.......This is a damn cool fanfic xD
sherilyntheeurasian
#10
bring bangzelo and daejay back with a wish please ~~