Death

Blindly

When Jongup woke up the next day, he was still tired.  He swung his feet over the edge of the bed and sighed.  Jongup was relieved to find that his ankle didn’t hurt as much now. 

He walked around his room a little and was satisfied that he was well enough to go over to Yongguk and Zelo’s house today. 

After pulling on his hoodie, he started walking towards Yongguk’s house. 

The ground was a little damp, but nothing else indicated that it poured last night.  The near black clouds that appeared out of nowhere just hours ago had gone as quickly as they had come.  The air was chilly again; Jongup shoved his hands into his pockets and shivered.  

From some distance away, Jongup heard a car rev its engine.  Thinking nothing of it, Jongup rounded the bend and kept walking towards the house.

A huge truck came out of nowhere and barreled straight towards Jongup.  He stepped off to the side of the road, initially figuring the driver hadn’t expected to see someone walk along this road and that he would keep going.

But the truck sped up and turned to keep going at Jongup.  Thinking quickly, Jongup jumped and climbed into a tree.  The automobile crashed violently into the same tree, causing it to topple over onto the hood of the truck. 

Jongup desperately clung onto the trees branches and hung a short ways up from the top of the vehicle.  Carefully he dropped down and off of the roof of the truck. 

The driver of the truck had his head on the steering wheel.  A piece of glass that broke from the impact was lodged in the man’s side.  He groaned in pain. 

“Hold on, I’ll get help!” Jongup assured the man.  Thinking quickly, he rushed over to Yongguk’s house.

When he reached the front door, he started ringing the doorbell and knocking.  He got no answer. 

Jongup figured that they were away and turned to go back to his house to call for help.  In the corner of his eye, however, he saw a pool of red through the window. 

Stepping closer to the glass, he peered inside.  It was blood.  He could smell that stomach-churning coppery scent even from outside.

Jongup’s own blood ran cold.  His hands found the doorknob and he tried the door.  It was unlocked. 

“Z-Zelo?  Hyung?” Jongup called warily.  Streaks of blood led Jongup to the kitchen.  He was met with a traumatizing sight. 

Zelo’s body was lying on the cold kitchen floor.  He looked like he was thrown carelessly on the ground and he had lacerations all over his body.   A knife was sticking out of his torso.  The boy’s curly blonde hair was matted with dried blood.

Jongup rushed towards Zelo’s body.  He wouldn’t hear the bright, always-smiling boy speak ever again.   If not for the blood, Zelo would’ve appeared asleep.  He looked peaceful, like he had not been expecting this attack at all.  Jongup felt tears falling again. Zelo was already cold.

One thought flashed through his head.  Yongguk.

“Hyung!” Jongup called again, rushing through the rest of the house.  When he reached the bedrooms upstairs, he found Yongguk.

Yongguk was lying in bed, sleeping.  Relief flooded through Jongup.

“Yah, wake up!  Zelo, he’s really--!” Jongup reached the bed and shook Yongguk.

He turned Yongguk over, and jumped back when he saw what had happened to his hyung.  Yongguk was shot multiple times in the chest.  Once in the head.  Blood and unidentifiable stuff stained the pillow.  Jongup couldn’t see it at first because of the covers, but Yongguk was lying on top of a large, now dried, blood stain. 

Jongup gulped. When had this happened?  Why? 

He reached for the telephone by  Yongguk’s bed and with shaking hands, he called 1-1-9. 

“What’s your emergency?” A voice asked from the other end of the line.  It seemed like it was so far away.  Jongup couldn’t think straight anymore.

“Hello?  Are you okay?” The voice said.

“My friends...they’ve been murdered.  There was a car accident outside, too.” Jongup heard himself speak the words, but it didn’t feel like he said it.   His heart felt like it had stopped beating.

“What is your location?” Jongup told the operator Bang and Zelo’s address.

The operator paused a moment, probably writing the address down. 

“Police will be there soon.  Please remain calm and try not to touch anything.” The operator said, but Jongup didn’t hear her.

Slowly, Jongup hung up and walked back down the stairs.  He turned away so he wouldn’t see Zelo’s body. 

The smell of blood was thick in the air still, so Jongup went outside and sat on the porch.  He stared blankly ahead of him.

Soon he heard the wail of a police car.  After parking, two police officers rushed up to Jongup. 

“You the one who called, son?” The first officer asked, bending down to talk to Jongup.  He was a bigger man with a bushy mustache.

Jongup nodded, tears threatening to fall down.  He felt numb.

“What’d your name, kid?  I’m officer Han.”

“Moon Jongup.” Jongup’s voice sounded foreign to himself.

“Where do you live?”

“Down the street.  The accident is a little ways down that way too.” Jongup said, pointing towards the direction of his house. 

Another police officer, a much thinner, clean shaven man shot Jongup a pitying glance before walking inside the house. 

“I’m going to need to ask you a few more questions.” Officer Han said, patting Jongup on the shoulder.  Jongup nodded mechanically.

He answered the mustached officer’s questions robotically.  Jongup felt like he was in a nightmare that he just couldn’t escape. 

A while later, crime scene investigators were collecting evidence.  Jongup remained on the porch, head buried in his hands.  He didn’t know what to think.  All he knew is that his old friends and his new friends were gone forever. 

Time blurred by for Jongup.  He saw various officers and investigators going in and out of the house.  He felt cold and alone. 

He saw the driver from the truck being pulled to an ambulance.  A sheet was pulled up over his face.  He was dead, too. 

Officer Han walked up to Jongup again.  “Son, let me drive you back home. There’s nothing more you can do here.” He helped Jongup up and led him to the police car.  Jongup simply nodded and followed him.

It didn’t take long to drive the quarter of a mile back.  When they got to Jongup’s house, the officer walked him to the door.

“Take care, son.  We’ll contact you and keep you updated.  I’m sorry you had to see all of that.” Officer Han frowned, patting Jongup on the shoulder comfortingly. 

Jongup only nodded in response.  He closed the door behind him and dragged his feet upstairs.

It was early in the evening, but Jongup just wanted to go to sleep.  Maybe when he woke up, he’d be freed from this nightmare.

Jongup barely closed his eyes before he was interrupted. 

The phone rang, so Jongup rushed downstairs to pick it up.

“Jongup.” It was his father.  Mr. Moon never called Jongup by his name.  Something was wrong.

“Father?”

“I’m not coming back.”

“W-What?”

“I’m at the police station.”

“What happened?” Jongup asked, concerned.  Although his father definitely wasn’t father-of-the-year material, he still worried about him.

“I think you know why, son.”

Jongup  knew what his father was talking about right then and there.

“Why?” Jongup asked.  All feeling was gone from his voice.

“I’m sorry.” His father said.  The line went dead. 

His father’s lack of an answer confirmed Jongup’s initial suspicions.  He had been the one that killed his mother.

Jongup got his truth. 

But somehow, now he felt even more alone.

 

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...I've decided that this won't end happily.

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sujushineegg #1
great story
sweetjellyvelly
#2
HIMCHAN KILLED BANG AND ZELO?!?!?! I WAS LIKE AJOSIJSKFEIDHDKDFHFCUFCBDI!!!!
mintflavorturtle
#3
...after death, then if you do, then Jongup's finding the flower would have been real /in some way or another/, and his wishes would have become real /again, in swoa/, and Himchan would have died right there on the spot as Jongup wished for his final wish, because then Himchan would no longer have his earthly life; rather, he'd be in heaven with Jongup, who wished him to be there with his and/or heaven's blue flower!! (omg what a mouthful)
But then if you don't believe in heaven/lad then I guess chapters 11&12 never happened/were insignificant in the whole scheme of things because then there'd be no afterlife for them to happen in, right? Yes. And then Himchan would have lived Blindly ever after!!~
I kinda like my first conclusion more though, even though it's so akgakjdldfgja all over the place . _ . You do understand what I'm saying though, right? If you don't just ask me whenever I log on in the next few days ^^" or when we meet in person? Idkkkk BUT NO. SOBBING SIXEVER MY FAVORITE FIC AND ONE OF MY FAVORITE FICS JUST RECETLY ENDED (well, yours ended a while ago but w/e I just read it now) AND SADNESS FOR LIFE.

Write more plox? ^^ I'll try to think of something new; something fresh, like iced tea!!~ Just give me a base, just something reaaaalll simple, like, who you want your characters to be (so I can build the plot better based on that), and/or what genre of fic...? idk or I'll just give you some random that comes to mind that I think you'll do well idk I'm tired . _ .
mintflavorturtle
#4
omg the face I just made when I read that Himchan killed Bang&Zelo... omg you would've pissed yourself laughing. I felt the stupid all the way in my stomach. It was like, it was like a Sunggyu supa singa face. (Y'know those, those Sungkyu faces where he's singing like -0- but then mine was like that but with D.O eyes oml)

omg wait not done with the chapter yet but I THINK I GET IT. (I'm at the part where Himchan pretty much was thinking about the dead body fertilizer OTL) BUT DID HE KILL THEM BECAUSE THEN, Jongup would have experienced true pain, and then! then he would have the wishes and everything would be perfect again!!
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OMG WAIT WAIT WAIT HOLD THAT UP. SO JONGUP IS... IS OMG YOU MARO. DIS I GIVE UP I WILL NOT BECOME THE ANGST QUEEN OF BLINDLY. gdi

OMG LEAKING. MY HEART IS LEAKING BUT MY EYES WON'T FOR NO REASON AT ALL OMGGGGGG ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER READ AWARD OMGGGGG. OMG Y'know that ing ANNOYING feeling you get in your throat why you cry and it's like really tight and constricted and w/e the yes I sure hope you know what I'm talking about because I CAN FEEEEEEEEL it rn omg
What in the s, yo? Ugh.... So much cry.


WAIT HOLD THAT . X2. OMG. I GET IT. (Or i'm over-analyzing like usual and you really didn't mean it like this but IDEK/IDGAF I'LL SAY IT ANYWAY.) IMO, since w/e happened and it's pretty clear but w/e idc, and in a way, Jongup did really get his wishes, or what would've been his wishes had he not been dead (but now that I think about it this conclusion is making less and less sense the more I think about it since he never woke up to FIND the flower in the first place ugh here we go back to stage six) but omg... I feel like... I feel like Himchan should die in the end end end, and I guess even though his feeling for Jongup were like little to nothing, he'd still be with Jongup because Jongup did find the flower, but he found it in heaven, and depending on if you believe in heaven/life (cont)
mintflavorturtle
#5
oml
ing beautiful
this 's so ing perfect omg I'm never going to finish mine (trying to finish it before I post the first chapter) HOW DO I EVEN MATCH THIS OML
DAEJAEEEE AND BANG&ZELO AND OMG CREEEEYYYY
I'm thinking though... I'm planning on making mine more of a tragedy; is it alright if I use the wish idea too? It definitely won't be the same things, oh nonononono, definitely not. (Not like yours is bad; I lurve it, but I just don't think I have the ability to rewrite it, with a style of my own or w/e, y'know?) I'm thinking of erasing someone's existance completely, how does that sound?

(btw still reading Chapter 12 rn)

lol Zelo u so silly! They don't show music Videos on Music Bank! What a cutie.
""That Man Opposed" by Dalmatian started to play." face rn--> -OoO-

omg no you're going to(/you have written it already) make it really sad? ;; But but but I was supposed to write the really angst-choke-on-your-own-leaking half of the plot, while you write the happy-fluffy-wonderfur ending version!! ;; (no, kidding, but y'know... I can't write happy happy and I was expecting you to idk wae)
I'll read the final and comment on it after this. ^^
Hime504 #6
But, but, he wished to be with Himchan..! What about Channie? :( pout.
Anyways, I LOVED it. Like really, I'm subscribing you <3
sherilyntheeurasian
#7
....... '_' why ? Why !? TT.TT i tot jongup was gonna have a happy ending TT.TT
sherilyntheeurasian
#8
Yayyyyyy !!!! But ... What about bang n zelo ? And himchannie?
LiliLee #9
OHH I GET IT NOW! Hahahahahaha I feel so accomplished :D
OH MY GOD YOU KILLED OFF EVERYBODY AND MADE JONGUP MISERABLE AND SENT HIM BACK IN TIME.......This is a damn cool fanfic xD
sherilyntheeurasian
#10
bring bangzelo and daejay back with a wish please ~~