Moving

Blindly

"How do you like the new house, son?" Mr. Moon said, patting Jongup on the shoulder. 

The house in front of them was huge.  It was two stories tall and had an endless expanse of forest behind it. The beautiful green trees swayed slightly in the wind.  Out here, the houses were few and far between.  There was only one other house within a mile of theirs.

"It's...nice." Jongup said, not even looking up.  He fiddled with a strap on his backpack. 

The only reason they could afford the house is from his mother's money.  She had been killed, and no one knew who had done it.  The insurance they had and the money his mother had saved up had gone straight to Mr. Moon.

Jongup couldn't help but to think that his dad had something to do with his mother's murder.

Mr. Moon was an alcoholic.  He didn't work at all and just lived off of his late wife's money.  It was just too coincidental that his father went "out of town" the same weekend his mother was killed and that he had just increased her life insurance. 

"Well, let's go see inside, shall we?" Mr. Moon strode past Jongup and went towards the house.  He turned the key and pushed the door open.

Their short exchange must've seemed like a normal father-son interaction, but Mr. Moon didn't seem like a father to Jongup.  He beat him each time he drank, and never remembered it the next day.  Jongup couldn't remember a time he didn't have bruises covering his pale skin. 

Jongup's mother had taken a few beatings, as well.  Every time Mr. Moon came home drunk, he'd walk straight to Jongup's room.  One time Mrs. Moon came home from work early and saw her husband beating their only child.  In order to "keep her quiet," Mr. Moon had beat her as well. 

The harsh memories still stung, and the pain still felt unbearable.  Subconsciously, Jongup touched his shoulder where a few bruises still colored his skin.  He cringed and suddenly did not want to enter this house, which was in the middle of nowhere, with his abusive father.

Jongup hung back a little, slowly following his father inside the door.

"It's nice inside, too!" His father called, "Come in, son." Irritation and impatience tinged his voice.  Gulping, Jongup quickly went inside the house.

He looked around the empty house.  It only had basic furniture--the movers were supposed to bring their belongings this weekend.

Of course, his father was by the refrigerator, marveling at its size.

"We can fit a lot in here!" Mr. Moon said happily. 

"...You mean you can fit a lot of your beer in there." Jongup muttered under his breath, glaring at his father's back. 

"I'm going to get the cooler from the car.  Go and choose a room." Mr. Moon went back outside, leaving Jongup alone.

Jongup walked through the kitchen and saw the stairs.  They creaked with every step he took.  That meant he wouldn't be able to sneak out of the house going this way.

Upstairs, there was a hallway with two doors on each side and one at the far end of the hall.  Jongup figured his father would take the one at the end so he peeked into the one closest to the staircase, which was coincidentally the room furthest away.

It was a normal bedroom.  A plain bed, a bedside table, a desk, and a small closet.  A small lamp was on the table, but other than that the room was empty.  He pushed the door open a little more and walked in.  Immediately he went to the window and looked out.  There was only forest outside.  A branch, perfect for climbing down, went up right against the window. 

Jongup smiled.  If he ever needed to escape his abusive father, he could climb out and flee into the woods.

"You like the room?" Mr. Moon questioned from the door.  Jongup turned towards him and nodded, the smile gone from his face.  "The bathroom is right across from this room and I'll be at the end of the hall." He looked at Jongup one more time, then left the room. 

Jongup sighed.  He tossed his backpack onto the bed.  It only had clothes and a picture of him and his mom inside.  Carefully he propped the picture up on the table.  His fingers lingered over the frame. 

"Mom..." He whispered, tears threatening to fall down his face.  She was the only one who could protect him from his father. 

Now that she was gone, Jongup didn't have anyone.

 

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Short ; o ; Mian~

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sujushineegg #1
great story
sweetjellyvelly
#2
HIMCHAN KILLED BANG AND ZELO?!?!?! I WAS LIKE AJOSIJSKFEIDHDKDFHFCUFCBDI!!!!
mintflavorturtle
#3
...after death, then if you do, then Jongup's finding the flower would have been real /in some way or another/, and his wishes would have become real /again, in swoa/, and Himchan would have died right there on the spot as Jongup wished for his final wish, because then Himchan would no longer have his earthly life; rather, he'd be in heaven with Jongup, who wished him to be there with his and/or heaven's blue flower!! (omg what a mouthful)
But then if you don't believe in heaven/lad then I guess chapters 11&12 never happened/were insignificant in the whole scheme of things because then there'd be no afterlife for them to happen in, right? Yes. And then Himchan would have lived Blindly ever after!!~
I kinda like my first conclusion more though, even though it's so akgakjdldfgja all over the place . _ . You do understand what I'm saying though, right? If you don't just ask me whenever I log on in the next few days ^^" or when we meet in person? Idkkkk BUT NO. SOBBING SIXEVER MY FAVORITE FIC AND ONE OF MY FAVORITE FICS JUST RECETLY ENDED (well, yours ended a while ago but w/e I just read it now) AND SADNESS FOR LIFE.

Write more plox? ^^ I'll try to think of something new; something fresh, like iced tea!!~ Just give me a base, just something reaaaalll simple, like, who you want your characters to be (so I can build the plot better based on that), and/or what genre of fic...? idk or I'll just give you some random that comes to mind that I think you'll do well idk I'm tired . _ .
mintflavorturtle
#4
omg the face I just made when I read that Himchan killed Bang&Zelo... omg you would've pissed yourself laughing. I felt the stupid all the way in my stomach. It was like, it was like a Sunggyu supa singa face. (Y'know those, those Sungkyu faces where he's singing like -0- but then mine was like that but with D.O eyes oml)

omg wait not done with the chapter yet but I THINK I GET IT. (I'm at the part where Himchan pretty much was thinking about the dead body fertilizer OTL) BUT DID HE KILL THEM BECAUSE THEN, Jongup would have experienced true pain, and then! then he would have the wishes and everything would be perfect again!!
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OMG WAIT WAIT WAIT HOLD THAT UP. SO JONGUP IS... IS OMG YOU MARO. DIS I GIVE UP I WILL NOT BECOME THE ANGST QUEEN OF BLINDLY. gdi

OMG LEAKING. MY HEART IS LEAKING BUT MY EYES WON'T FOR NO REASON AT ALL OMGGGGGG ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER READ AWARD OMGGGGG. OMG Y'know that ing ANNOYING feeling you get in your throat why you cry and it's like really tight and constricted and w/e the yes I sure hope you know what I'm talking about because I CAN FEEEEEEEEL it rn omg
What in the s, yo? Ugh.... So much cry.


WAIT HOLD THAT . X2. OMG. I GET IT. (Or i'm over-analyzing like usual and you really didn't mean it like this but IDEK/IDGAF I'LL SAY IT ANYWAY.) IMO, since w/e happened and it's pretty clear but w/e idc, and in a way, Jongup did really get his wishes, or what would've been his wishes had he not been dead (but now that I think about it this conclusion is making less and less sense the more I think about it since he never woke up to FIND the flower in the first place ugh here we go back to stage six) but omg... I feel like... I feel like Himchan should die in the end end end, and I guess even though his feeling for Jongup were like little to nothing, he'd still be with Jongup because Jongup did find the flower, but he found it in heaven, and depending on if you believe in heaven/life (cont)
mintflavorturtle
#5
oml
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this 's so ing perfect omg I'm never going to finish mine (trying to finish it before I post the first chapter) HOW DO I EVEN MATCH THIS OML
DAEJAEEEE AND BANG&ZELO AND OMG CREEEEYYYY
I'm thinking though... I'm planning on making mine more of a tragedy; is it alright if I use the wish idea too? It definitely won't be the same things, oh nonononono, definitely not. (Not like yours is bad; I lurve it, but I just don't think I have the ability to rewrite it, with a style of my own or w/e, y'know?) I'm thinking of erasing someone's existance completely, how does that sound?

(btw still reading Chapter 12 rn)

lol Zelo u so silly! They don't show music Videos on Music Bank! What a cutie.
""That Man Opposed" by Dalmatian started to play." face rn--> -OoO-

omg no you're going to(/you have written it already) make it really sad? ;; But but but I was supposed to write the really angst-choke-on-your-own-leaking half of the plot, while you write the happy-fluffy-wonderfur ending version!! ;; (no, kidding, but y'know... I can't write happy happy and I was expecting you to idk wae)
I'll read the final and comment on it after this. ^^
Hime504 #6
But, but, he wished to be with Himchan..! What about Channie? :( pout.
Anyways, I LOVED it. Like really, I'm subscribing you <3
sherilyntheeurasian
#7
....... '_' why ? Why !? TT.TT i tot jongup was gonna have a happy ending TT.TT
sherilyntheeurasian
#8
Yayyyyyy !!!! But ... What about bang n zelo ? And himchannie?
LiliLee #9
OHH I GET IT NOW! Hahahahahaha I feel so accomplished :D
OH MY GOD YOU KILLED OFF EVERYBODY AND MADE JONGUP MISERABLE AND SENT HIM BACK IN TIME.......This is a damn cool fanfic xD
sherilyntheeurasian
#10
bring bangzelo and daejay back with a wish please ~~