Alternate endingšŸ„²

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(Truthfully I had an alternative ending but I wanted to make them all happy. But then I guess I should share it I changed 6th chapter it was supposed to be like this please don't hate me remember this is just a Fiction)

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It was next morning and Minho was very angry he had lost both Kibum and his Child which was Jinki's fault but meanwhile Jinki seemed to be happy with Jonghyun which was making Minho very angry. His Kibum had already left the house without telling him and it was all Jinki's fault. Minho was burning with anger. He went to Jonghyun and Jinki's room. He overheard their conversations in which they were planning their future with the baby which made him even more angry it was HIS it was supposed to be with HIM and he went inside their room.

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"Oh wow so after ruining my life you are busy loving each other like this" "Don't you know you shouldn't enter anyone else's room without knocking the door and asking for permission to enter. Don't you have basic etiquettes." "Knocking oh yes I want to knock you out right now" Minho was so angry he went towards Jinki and grabbed him by his neck "Leave my Jinki alone you will hurt him" "Bingo you got that right that is my intention right now to hurt him as much as he has hurt me." Jonghyun was trying to get Minho off Jinki but Minho was not budging.Ā 

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In the end Jonghyun ended up biting his hand and went to hold Jinki. "Are you insane? He is pregnant you know. Do you want to kill him and YOUR child." "If both of them are going to end up with you then yes I want to kill them." "What?" Jonghyun couldn't believe what he was hearing. "I hate you the most in this world you took my father away from me only person I had to begin with and now Jinki decides to be with you out of all people taking my and Kibum's child away from us. Who gave him right to choose you?"Ā 

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"Are you even listening to yourself? Jinki doesn't belong to you. He is a person not a thing." Jonghyun saw that Jinki was breathing hard and he was also shivering. Jinki was shocked would be such under statement. He was scared out of his wit. He never thought that there was a possibility that Minho could harm his own child even indirectly when he was thinking about getting his revenge and teasing Minho but then he was not in his right mind and was controlled by his anger.Ā 

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Jonghyun was trying to calm Jinki down by patting but that made Minho even more angry. He went for Jinki again after punching Jonghyun in the head and this time he slammed Jinki against the wall. Jinki's Ear piercing scream was the only thing that could be heard throughout the house.

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Mr. Choi who heard the scream started running towards Jonghyun and Jinki's room. Meanwhile Minho was brought back to reality with that scream, he realised what he had done. He took a step back but it was already too late he saw unconscious Jinki falling down and pool of blood forming. Jonghyun was trying to keep Jinki awake while calling for the ambulance.Ā 

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Mr. Choi had reached and saw what had happened. He went ahead and slapped Minho "I will deal with you later" he went towards Jonghyun who was crying hard and hugged him "they'll be alright don't you worry" but Mr. Choi was not sure of it himself.

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tokkidubo
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Chapter 7: Hubiera querido que Jinki y Jonghyun se quedarán con el bebé así fuera más dramático
SHINee_2508 #2
Chapter 2: Story line is good since my otp is onho can't see onho fighting šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ yet my here for your story it's really interesting..