Sweet Sky

Sweet Sky [One~Shot]
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                — On, no! Is this really happening again? — _____ asked, clearly impatient.

                — Sorry, miss, but what’s the problem? — the counter girl asked, hesitating a bit.

                — This is the third time you guys do it. I ordered my waffles with red fruits jelly, not honey.  Can you, please, change my plate and give me the right thing this time? — she said furiously.

                The exact time _____ gave her mistaken plate to the girl, Sandeul entered the café. He casually walked to the counter and quickly looked at the impatient girl standing there. A few seconds later, the counter girl came from the kitchen.

                — Good morning, sir. Welcome to Sweet Sky, can I take your order? — she asked with a kind smile.

                Sandeul opened his mouth to say what he wanted, but was cut by _____.

                — Yah, will you really take his order before fixing mine? — she almost shouted making the counter girl jump a little.

                — I’m sorry, but there’s nothing more I can do. They’re preparing another plate of waffles in the kitchen.

                — Who are you? — Sandeul looked down at the little angry girl.

                — Who are you? — she replied back — Can’t you see she’s doing something for me here?

                — What’s your problem? Couldn’t you hear she can’t do nothing more for you unless wait? Now if I may… — he turned back to the counter girl, who was a little shocked, and was about to start ordering again.

                — YAH! — _____ shouted, now with her arms crossed.

                — Stop shouting. You’re not at home — he said simply, making her even angrier.

                —Sir, do you mind waiting a bit? If my boss comes, I’ll be in trouble — the counter girl whispered to him.

                — I’ll wait just because you’re the one asking, not this brat here — he said, sighed and rested his arms on the counter.

                A few moments later, the counter girl went inside the kitchen and came back with a new plate of waffles.

                — Here it is, miss. We’re very sorry for the inconvenience.

                — Hold on a second — _____ said.

                She took the plate, got some jelly on her index finger and it to make sure it was right this time.

                — It tastes like strawberry — she said between her teeth.

                The counter girl gave her a confused look while Sandeul rolled his eyes.

                — I-I’m sorry, but wasn’t it what you ordered? — she asked.

                — I ordered red fruits jelly — she said and put the plate back on the counter.

                — Be quiet for a moment, you already had your celebrity time. You will wait now — Sandeul protested suddenly.

                _____’s eyes widened. Sandeul turned to the counter girl and smiled

                — So, I’ll have mocha coffee and waffles with...

                — YOU CAN’T ACT LIKE THIS — she shouted.

                Sandeul looked at her, grabbed her wrist, pulled her closer to him and kissed her, a quick peck on the lips, then he his own lips.

                — It tastes good. Waffles with strawberry jelly, please — he said and smiled to the counter girl, who was completely shocked, so was _____.

                —Y-yes, sir — she typed something on the machine.

                — Actually, order just the coffee, I’ll have this plate here, but do me a favor, please? I’ll pay for this plate and the other she’ll have.

                — Sir, you don’t need to. Our mistake isn’t your fault.

                — It’s not your either. Do it for me, please? — he asked gently.

                — Are you sure you don’t want me to take another plate for you?

                — It’s okay, this one is still warm, I’ll have this — he smiled.

                —YAH! — _____ burst out finally — YOU CAN’T KISS PEOPLE LIKE THIS AND TAKE THEIR PLATE OF WAFFLES AND ACT LIKE NOTHING HAPPENED!

                — I told you already; you’re not at home, so stop shouting — he rolled his eyes —First; I didn’t kiss you, I was tasting the jelly. I’m not like some people who change their mind halfway and create a scandal later…

                — They really took my order wrong! — she cut him again, he sighed.

                — Second; — he said louder — that plate left your possession the moment you put it back on the counter. Third; nothing really happened.

                — I didn’t change my mind halfway — she said between her teeth — And, nothing? Waaah, you’re really some ridiculous guy.

                — At least I’m not an attention seeker.

                — THEY GOT MY ORDER WRONG! —she shouted again.

                Almost instantly, Sandeul grabber her arms and got so close her face that their noses were almost touching.

                — You shout one more time and you’ll see what a kiss is — he threatened.

                —If you want a kiss so bad, why don’t you do it like every normal guy would do? — she asked, confronting him. He smiled sarcastically and let go of her.

                The counter girl came with the new plate and a cup of mocha.

                — Miss, we apologize once again. Sir, you too. You really didn’t have to — she bowed.

                — Never mind. Thank you, anyway — he smiled sweetly.

                Sandeul took his meal and went to the nearer table, the only available one, only to be followed by _____.

                — You kidding me, right? — she said after putting her plate on the table.

                — What now? Didn’t I explain myself enough? — he asked. She rolled her

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kpopaddiicted #1
awhhh this is so cute >.< I love it ^^
SugarSystem
#2
a sequel to Sweet Sky? o.o
OMG, I never thought that someone would ask for it x.x but, hm, I'll try, okay? (:
ILoveStrawberries
#3
Omo! please do a sequel! pretty please *POUTS* ^^
SugarSystem
#4
Aaw, thank you so much *-* I didin't know I could write something so cute, but you told me I can :D I'm so happy *-* Thank you again (:
macaronisalad10
#5
CUUUUUUTE!!!!
This Fanfic was Very...
I dont know how will i say it..
but it's so great...
SugarSystem
#6
WAAAH, THANK YOOOOU *-*
OMG guys, your excited comments make me so happy OTL
keke~ I know, right? That was the point where I got the whole idea from. I mean, the first thing I thought was this "scene", then I wrote the rest of the story ^^
mayahyukie
#7
WOOAAA....
GREAT STORY..!!
Especially when Deullie peck her lips.. Hahaha.. XD
SugarSystem
#8
YES I AM, yaay \o// keke~ sorry, I grow overexcited ^^
OMG, you spazz reading my poor creativity T-T I'm more than happy now :D THANK YOU so much ♥
StrawberryCake98
#9
Waaah you're brazilian too? ^^
The story is so cute I can't take it, I was spazzing while reading. All of it. It's amazing T.T
SugarSystem
#10
KYAAAAH! Thank you so much, people! You don't know what your comments mean to me, it's good to know you enjoy my writing~ *-*

About the dash/quotation thing; as I once said, I don't know about other countries, but here in Brazil, when we have to write an essay that contains dialogues (for school, of course), that's the right way to write, and that's also the structure used in books. I read a lot of books, and I've made a lot of essays, I got so used to it that quotation marks for dialogues confuses me x.x But this is the third time people ask me do to it, and if you're so willing for me to change, I will, don't worry. I'll do anything I can to make my writing more understandable for you guys. Thank you so much once again, I really appreciate your comments and opinions ♥