Sweet Sky [One~Shot]

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               Sandeul entered the café. He casually walked to the counter and quickly looked at the impatient girl standing there.

               — Good morning, sir. Welcome to Sweet Sky, can I take your order? — the counter girl asked with a kind smile.

               — Yah, will you really take his order before fixing mine? — she almost shouted making the counter girl jump a little.

                — Who are you? — Sandeul looked down at the little angry girl.

                — Who are you? — she replied back.

 

 

 

 

Foreword

Important!

This is about you and B1A4's Sandeul.
 He's not famous, but it's not very important ^^
 As stated with the title, this is a One~Shot, keke~

 

Note!

Hiiii ^^ So, guys, this is my FIFITH Kpop fanfic in English, yaaay :3  As you may imagine, English is not my native languague OTL so please forgive my terrible grammar mistakes and be kind to me, right? :3 Thank you~

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Comments

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kpopaddiicted #1
awhhh this is so cute >.< I love it ^^
SugarSystem
#2
a sequel to Sweet Sky? o.o
OMG, I never thought that someone would ask for it x.x but, hm, I'll try, okay? (:
ILoveStrawberries
#3
Omo! please do a sequel! pretty please *POUTS* ^^
SugarSystem
#4
Aaw, thank you so much *-* I didin't know I could write something so cute, but you told me I can :D I'm so happy *-* Thank you again (:
macaronisalad10
#5
CUUUUUUTE!!!!
This Fanfic was Very...
I dont know how will i say it..
but it's so great...
SugarSystem
#6
WAAAH, THANK YOOOOU *-*
OMG guys, your excited comments make me so happy OTL
keke~ I know, right? That was the point where I got the whole idea from. I mean, the first thing I thought was this "scene", then I wrote the rest of the story ^^
mayahyukie
#7
WOOAAA....
GREAT STORY..!!
Especially when Deullie peck her lips.. Hahaha.. XD
SugarSystem
#8
YES I AM, yaay \o// keke~ sorry, I grow overexcited ^^
OMG, you spazz reading my poor creativity T-T I'm more than happy now :D THANK YOU so much ♥
StrawberryCake98
#9
Waaah you're brazilian too? ^^
The story is so cute I can't take it, I was spazzing while reading. All of it. It's amazing T.T
SugarSystem
#10
KYAAAAH! Thank you so much, people! You don't know what your comments mean to me, it's good to know you enjoy my writing~ *-*

About the dash/quotation thing; as I once said, I don't know about other countries, but here in Brazil, when we have to write an essay that contains dialogues (for school, of course), that's the right way to write, and that's also the structure used in books. I read a lot of books, and I've made a lot of essays, I got so used to it that quotation marks for dialogues confuses me x.x But this is the third time people ask me do to it, and if you're so willing for me to change, I will, don't worry. I'll do anything I can to make my writing more understandable for you guys. Thank you so much once again, I really appreciate your comments and opinions ♥