Dystopian Nightmare

GreenGardenPop
Just because you are offended does not mean you are right. In many if not most cases, if you are offended it is likely because the truth was stated and you are in denial.

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honeykem
#1
i didn’t read most of your “story” since i don’t care for it, but do you honestly think people will read this when it is barely legible? Ideas and your “truth” aside, almost every paragraph is 900 words long and filled with jargon. This is just rambling. Not to mention, no one is sitting around to read a 20000 word chapter that is a regurgitated cacophony of research papers. If you’re going to present research, at least do it competently. It’s embarrassing that you think you’re enlightened but can’t even format a story to something digestible. 99% of aff readers are not researchers.
PuffTedEBear
#2
Chapter 1: I have to say the author is on the brave side to be putting this fic out there for bid hoping more people will read and comment. Of course the majority of comments are negative, which is to be expected. Too bad. The author has put a lot of research into this.
It is not for people who are political at all. If you believe how the majority of the world has been acting since 2020 do not read, save your blood vessels from popping. However, someone went to effort to write something they felt strongly about, is it the correct platform? Maybe...Maybe not but it's here. If you don't like it don't be an unkind person and say unkind things just skip on by to something you like.
Ghad20
198 streak #3
Chapter 10: Congratulations on the bid
predilection
#4
Chapter 1: You write good. Seriously I like your writing style and the grammar is all good but like @pandapurin said maybe this isn't a platform for you. This is asianfanfics and for you to write something as serious as this and offensive to some is totally not cool. I respect your view on the matter tho and everyone is free to be opiniated. But yeah try to write on other platforms, more suitable one for your topics because this is asianfanfics where people write imaginative stuff of their favorite kpop idols, nothing offensive, nothing heavy and trigger warning will be marked for any triggering topics (like death, suicide, rated content).

Idk find other platform before you get tons of hate comment and possibly reports for this. Fighting! Again this is just a kpop fanfics website ^^
meowzwrites
#5
Chapter 8: I had a good laugh. This ain’t the platform for you tho, maybe you should write for the Epoch times.
arwaisanidiot #6
Chapter 7: lol wtf is this?
fiftymiles
#7
Chapter 2: Is this fanfic just you being an anti masker, getting ostracized/ called out for it and then writing a whole fanfic to comfort yourself
fiftymiles
#8
Chapter 1: AFF really needs to at least vet through fanfics before allowing them to take the home page, else we get this kind of weird garbage - idk are antimaskers finding new ways to spread the rhetoric through nct fanfiction
Number2elf #9
Chapter 2: Lmao tf is this? A fanfic about being an antimasker?