😁 Black Mamba

Author: JamieStardust 

Labels: fut, actionau,

Description: 

In a post-apocalyptic, lawless world, Winter lives in one of the largest remaining civilizations on Earth, the city of Pharus. Seeking to become a Moonlight
Guardian, she undergoes a harsh training regime alongside her older sister, Giselle. Upon completing their training, they are finally allowed to leave the
safety of the city gates, where they seek adventure at the risk of becoming consumed by the Great Evil that lurks beyond.

Link: Black Mamba

My thoughts:

Very unique world were Guardians are trained to use their Crest as a weapon/enhancer. I love that it draws on the Savage teaser photos where the silver headpieces are the Crest. The main drive of the story is when newly graduated Moonlight Guardian, Winter, stumbles upon a wounded warrior during one of her explorations. In the mist of fighting the Evil chasing Karina, Winter gets injured and Karina's attempt to heal her results in them bonding. The readers follow as this bond changes their relationship and abilities. Ft Seulrene as Jiminjeong's mentors.

Improvements: Honestly, just the length. The plot is too early to tell yet. If I had to nickpick, then I would say that the world building aspect itself is very lightly done. It's just enough to get the reader to understand the world. It would be better if more details were added.