Chapter 17: I' m interested, though I think your writing style is good. It's actually okay to see from one's perspective and focus to a character. Maybe a change of perspective would be nice but you shouldn't force it if you're uncomfortable with it.
Chapter 14: Noooo Dami :( So I guess now that she’s decided to stop treatment there is only one way this can end... I hope she can enjoy the time she has left with her members ..
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