Breakdown

Sting (A Wheesa Story)
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Hyejin's POV

I was sobbing so hard and I know people are looking at me. Then I felt someone standing in front of me. I know this person so well without looking at her face. Jung Wheein.

Few minutes ago

We will be releasing our new album soon so we have a recording schedule today. I came late so I wasn't able to look at the lyrics yet. Our staff are still preparing things and all. I was about to scan the lyrics when my phone received a message. I opened and read it. I was suddenly lost. My hands were shaking but suddenly I was called to enter the recording room.

"Hyejin, you go first." While my mind was still blank, I walked slowly towards the room. I tried to forget what I read and tried to calm myself. I can hear oppa telling me some instructions but honestly, I can't process any of it. I heard the music started.

"Read the first verse, first."

~ With only you missing from my life,
I thought I would be just fi---

I choked up. The lyrics just hit so hard and I can't control my emotions anymore. I look up to the people on the opposite side... they were staring and waiting for me to continue... but I saw Wheein staring at me with a worried eyes. That was the moment tears fell down my eyes and I just ended up sobbing.

He broke up with me through a text message.

A glimpse of Hyejin's relationship

It's been almost a year that I am officially in a relationship with Henry. Henry is my boyfriend... I mean ex. We had a great relationship at first. He was always sweet to me and loving. There were times when I craved some food after our late schedule, he suddenly appeared outside my house delivering them. He is just a simple office guy. 

But...

He feels inferior always. When having dinner dates, I sometimes offer to pay the bill but he always gets angry and refuses. Of course, I understand him. We argue about little things and he is sometimes sensitive and jealous. There is one person he is always jealous of.

Jung Wheein.

Wheein and I love going trips abroad.

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lexp07
This is my first fanfic. I hope everything is making sense 😅
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_JungHyejin_ #1
Chapter 5: Hello author-nim <33 this story is so goooddd! Will you still continue it? I enjoyed reading it, i still would love to know what will happen to them, how will it end. Please update if you have time🥺, thank you for writing this story ❤️
NoNeyme #2
it was a great story. don't abandon this please.
moomoojeez #3
Chapter 5: when will you write back. please dont abandon this story
Wheeinemily #4
Chapter 5: OMG.... waiting for the next one ❤
Nemophile
#5
Chapter 5: That's so good! I like that we switch between both of them but without going back in time. We don't have double events, just the story progression and it works so well.
moomoojeez #6
Chapter 4: pleaseee write moreee im dying
nanoko #7
Chapter 4: Omgggggg I’m in loveee
Wheeinemily #8
Chapter 3: I'm in love with this
Nemophile
#9
Chapter 2: Hi! Nice to read you!

We got alternating pov! It will be interesting! Comparing the two pov of the protagonists is the best since we got to understand why and how everything happens!

Little to no dialog is great too ➡ More world building, less noise! We can visualize the scene better like this. The spacing is great too, I didn't get lost while reading (that happens a lot...). Maybe the transitions between the chapters are a little bit dry, but it can be expected with a multi-pov story.
Sometimes I got the feeling you make them talk/think to us, it's weird to me because I prefer full immersion and not feeling like I'm "intruding" the story. Again, with a 1st pov it can be tricky to avoid and it's not really a bad thing.

I'm excited about this work! Wheesa is soft and deserves the best ಥ_ಥ Also, I will rip my heart out if needed, but I hope we got a happy ending.

Thank you for sharing this with us! Have a great day!
ydirir #10
Chapter 1: I really liked the story, but since there was no clear sign when a flashback started and ended it was a bit confusing to read at first.