Sting (A Wheesa Story)

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Description

A story of two people walking the same path together, discovering each other's feelings.  A story about friendship, dreams and love.

Foreword

With only you missing from my life,
I thought I would be just fine 
Similar to the feeling of losing a ring that I wore daily
But in the midst of meeting someone new,
strangely I called for you
I really thought I erased all memories of you

You woo woo woo
What are you, that still,
I am full of thoughts about you

Once in a while when my eyes sting,
I know it’s just the wind blowing
But it feels like you are calling me and I cry
And when my heart stings like this,
By then I realize it is you
who I still love

Wheein's POV

All members gathered in the recording studio to rehearse and record our song called Sting. I was so immersed practicing my part that I didn't notice Hyejin came in. Woosang oppa called Hyejin to go inside the recording room since she is assigned to open the song. All members weren't really paying attention and were so busy doing their own thing. The music is now playing and waiting for Hyejin to deliver the first verse.

~ With only you missing from my life,
I thought I would be just fi---

She choked up.

My heart suddenly stopped. Is she crying?
And my world just fell apart.

Author's Thoughts
lexp07
This is my first fanfic. I hope everything is making sense 😅
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_JungHyejin_ #1
Chapter 5: Hello author-nim <33 this story is so goooddd! Will you still continue it? I enjoyed reading it, i still would love to know what will happen to them, how will it end. Please update if you have time🥺, thank you for writing this story ❤️
NoNeyme #2
it was a great story. don't abandon this please.
moomoojeez #3
Chapter 5: when will you write back. please dont abandon this story
Wheeinemily #4
Chapter 5: OMG.... waiting for the next one ❤
Nemophile #5
Chapter 5: That's so good! I like that we switch between both of them but without going back in time. We don't have double events, just the story progression and it works so well.
moomoojeez #6
Chapter 4: pleaseee write moreee im dying
nanoko #7
Chapter 4: Omgggggg I’m in loveee
Wheeinemily #8
Chapter 3: I'm in love with this
Nemophile #9
Chapter 2: Hi! Nice to read you!

We got alternating pov! It will be interesting! Comparing the two pov of the protagonists is the best since we got to understand why and how everything happens!

Little to no dialog is great too ➡ More world building, less noise! We can visualize the scene better like this. The spacing is great too, I didn't get lost while reading (that happens a lot...). Maybe the transitions between the chapters are a little bit dry, but it can be expected with a multi-pov story.
Sometimes I got the feeling you make them talk/think to us, it's weird to me because I prefer full immersion and not feeling like I'm "intruding" the story. Again, with a 1st pov it can be tricky to avoid and it's not really a bad thing.

I'm excited about this work! Wheesa is soft and deserves the best ಥ_ಥ Also, I will rip my heart out if needed, but I hope we got a happy ending.

Thank you for sharing this with us! Have a great day!
ydirir #10
Chapter 1: I really liked the story, but since there was no clear sign when a flashback started and ended it was a bit confusing to read at first.
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