My world fell apart

Sting (A Wheesa Story)
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Yongsun's POV

Hyejin's cry is all over the room while the music is still playing. 
The people in the recording studio just froze up. I saw the panic in Woosang-oppa's eyes. I am also shocked that I don't know what to do. I stared at Byul... mouthing her "What to do?"

Byul also mouthed, "I don't know"

I turned to my left side and about to ask Wheein. As I turned to her, I can't help but noticed the panic, worry and sadness in her eyes... like she is just waiting for a signal.

I, then, realized what to do so I tapped Wheein's shoulder.


Wheein's POV

Hyejin choked up.

My heart suddenly stopped. "Is she crying?"
And my world just fell apart.

My mind just went blank looking at her at the other side of the mirror. Hyejin is sobbing hard. I feel like my heart was stabbed by a knife. My chaotic mind keep on asking... "What happened?" "Who hurt her?" "What's going on?". For seconds, I was just staring at Hyejin blankly. 

"I need to go to her. I need to be with her." My mind is telling me but my body has just frozen up.

I felt a tapped in my shoulder and as I looked up, I saw Yongsun unnie nodding at me and mouthed, "Go".

I opened the door. I don't know why I'm shaking. I entered the room and stood in front of Hyejin. She looked up and I saw her eyes. Her eyes that are filled with tears. I felt anger. Who the hurt my Hyejin.

Flashback

Hyejin is a very special friend to me. I still can remember our middle school days. I was an introvert so I really don't have many friends. Of course, I already noticed Hyejin. Who won't notice her when she basically just sing all over the place. One time, I heard her singing in the locker room. She has the most beautiful voice I ever heard. I was shy so I hide when she turned around.

I was just doodling in my notebook while waiting for the next teacher when suddenly I felt someone leaned on my chair. 

She looked at me and I looked at her confused.

"Hey" said a female voice.
I'm like whats up with this girl but I ended up saying "hey" too.

"Would you be my friend?" said the female voice.

I was speechless... so i ju

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This is my first fanfic. I hope everything is making sense 😅
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_JungHyejin_ #1
Chapter 5: Hello author-nim <33 this story is so goooddd! Will you still continue it? I enjoyed reading it, i still would love to know what will happen to them, how will it end. Please update if you have time🥺, thank you for writing this story ❤️
NoNeyme #2
it was a great story. don't abandon this please.
moomoojeez #3
Chapter 5: when will you write back. please dont abandon this story
Wheeinemily #4
Chapter 5: OMG.... waiting for the next one ❤
Nemophile
#5
Chapter 5: That's so good! I like that we switch between both of them but without going back in time. We don't have double events, just the story progression and it works so well.
moomoojeez #6
Chapter 4: pleaseee write moreee im dying
nanoko #7
Chapter 4: Omgggggg I’m in loveee
Wheeinemily #8
Chapter 3: I'm in love with this
Nemophile
#9
Chapter 2: Hi! Nice to read you!

We got alternating pov! It will be interesting! Comparing the two pov of the protagonists is the best since we got to understand why and how everything happens!

Little to no dialog is great too ➡ More world building, less noise! We can visualize the scene better like this. The spacing is great too, I didn't get lost while reading (that happens a lot...). Maybe the transitions between the chapters are a little bit dry, but it can be expected with a multi-pov story.
Sometimes I got the feeling you make them talk/think to us, it's weird to me because I prefer full immersion and not feeling like I'm "intruding" the story. Again, with a 1st pov it can be tricky to avoid and it's not really a bad thing.

I'm excited about this work! Wheesa is soft and deserves the best ಥ_ಥ Also, I will rip my heart out if needed, but I hope we got a happy ending.

Thank you for sharing this with us! Have a great day!
ydirir #10
Chapter 1: I really liked the story, but since there was no clear sign when a flashback started and ended it was a bit confusing to read at first.