Jealous

Forever [My Version of Cinderella]

(Gui Gui's POV)
"What?! Mom's in the hospital?!"I yelled at my maid.

"Ye..Yes Ma'am." she said

I drove to the hospital to see my mom. When I got in she was perfectly fine. When I was about to go back I saw YaLun in a room with the new kid.

"Why is my YaLun with her?!" I yelled at the nurse then left.

(Hebe's POV)

I heared a loud person yell which woke me up. I got up and saw YaLun.

"Why am I in a hospital?"I questioned.

"Someone pushed youand you got hit on the head.

"Aiya! I have to go!"I said.

I stood up and ignored my head.

"You can't go you're hurt!" he said.

I ignored him and try to leave but he suddenly grabbed my hand and coldly said,"I told you you're hurt so stay!"

I pulled my hand back and took off the bandages on my head. I ignored YaLun and ran home. When I got in I quickly ran to my room and saw Danson.

"Danson get out!"I shouted

"Why should I? We are engaged right?"he said looking at me.

"What happened to you?"I said trying to change the subject.

He looked at me then left. I thought about YaLun why he was beaten then Danson. I remember when I walked home there was a guy that looked like Danson. I was thinking this through and I should stay away from YaLun. I laid on the bed and went to sleep.

*Ring Ring Ring*

"Wei, Anita I heared what happened, everyone's coming over okay, Ella."I heared the answer machine say.

(Aaron's POV)

*Ding Dong*Ding Dong*

"Im coming!"I shouted.

"YaLun! Why aren't you ready?!"Ella yelled at me.

"Ready for what?"I asked.

"Aiya!! You didn't get my message did you? Anyways get ready we're going to Anita's house and you have to apoligize."Ella said.

"What?! Why should I when I saved her from a...."I stopped right there.

"From a what?"everyone said.

"Uh......forget it lets go."I said putting on my shoes and left.

(Gui Gui's POV)

I went to YaLun's house and saw him going somewhere so I followed him. I saw him going inside a house. I went to a window so I could check on him.

"Anita are you okay?"YaLun said.

"Anita? Isn't that the new girl?" I questioned myself.

I got angry so I went inside.

"Aaron Yan Ya Lun! Why are you always with her?!"I yelled. I grabbed the new girl and slapped her. As I was about to slap her again YaLun stopped me.

(Aaron's POV)

"Aiya! Gui Gui! Why are you always following me! And stop hurting people! Apoligize now!" I yelled at her.

"I'm sorry Anita"I said touching her face.

"YaLun I'm okay."Anita whisperd.

Gui Gui then pushed Anita and kissed me on the lips. I pushed Gui Gui then yelled at her,"Gui Gui get out now!"

"Fine!"she yelled back and slammed the door.

Genie, Ella, and Selina was there next to Anita comforting her.

"Hey YaLun what happened?"Jiro said coming through the door,"And what happened to Anita?"

"Nothing. Hey could everyone get out? I need to talk to Anita."I said.

"Okay then lets go you guys!"Ella said telling the others.

(Aaron's POV)
"Anita I'm really sorry. If I had'nt ignored you, you wouldn't be like this now."I said looking down.

"YaLun it's okay, okay?" Anita said.

"Okay then. I got to tell you something. The reason why I'm so cold to girls is that when I was about nine years old I ended up in a hospital with a little girl name Hebe. We were so close then one day she had to leave to America. We made a promisewith each other that we'll find each other one day."I said with my eyes almost teary.

"Aiya Aaron you just found her." Anita cried.

(Author's Notes)

Hebe is now using Aarons real name now and so everyone is usinng the real name now. now back to the story.

"What?!"I said with some hope.

"I'm Hebe, Aaron"she smiled.

I hugged her tightly,"I thought you forgot me."

"I would never forget you." Hebe said.

(Ella's POV)

*sniff sniff*

"Wow it's so sad and sweet.

It's wrong doing this but it's so sad and sweet.

"Hey Ella why are you crying?"Selina and Genie questioned.

"SHHH....Be quiet you guys!"I shouted.

"Oops sorry."I whispered.

Aaron opened the door and caught us next to the door.

"Why are you guys there? And not with Jiro, Wu Zun, and Calvin?"he questioned.

"Uhh...they're in the car and we had to use the restroom."I said with some hope that he would let us go.

"Haha okay then go."Hebe and Aaron laughed.

As I was about to enter a guy pushes me to enter.

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zeroxzero-
#1
Omfg. I love Aaron Yan in this.
But it's so sad. ;w;
jgloryj
#2
tragic ending .. ^^ hehehe
Hasya_Izya #3
LOVE THIS~!
d0rkii #4
Great story !!!! Loved it !
SharShar #5
Ayooo, it ended! Anyways, thanks for writing this story!!
mtrueninja
#6
you do sound lazy.. you finally finish YOUR FIRST FANFIC!..<br />
lol.. :DD
YmiNgo
#7
why did they have to die? T^T and lol i agree with ninja hahahaha
mtrueninja
#8
UGHH! CURSE YOU NANCY! it's happy, that they're together.. but they're DEAD!! ughh!<br />
&& btw, Gui Gui went to live with Wang Zi !!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDD
katkeota
#9
awwwwwwwwwwwww it's ended! grrr crazy! grrr! lol :D
SharShar #10
Ahhh! shot AGAIN?! OH MY GOSH. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!@