- Severely Heartbroken -

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Sometimes, the most beauitful love, is the saddest love you will ever feel

 

Kang Ji Young | Lee Hong Ki |

Park Gyu Ri | Choi Jong Hun | Jung Nicole | Lee Jaejin | Han SeungYeon | Song Seung Hyun | Goo Hara | Choi Min Hwan

 

f e a t u r i n g

❋ kara & ft island ❋

Foreword

3 years ago, he broke her heart and she vowed to never think about him again

But their paths are destined to cross

He left her, but that doesn't mean he loved her any less

He had always loved her and he will always protect her even if he can only watch her from afar

 

I hated you so much but then I started missing you

The days I spent weak because I couldn't hold onto you are so pitiful

But I'm losing my strength beside you too

How do you think I felt, watching that?

We shouldn't have started at all, I shouldn't have looked at your eyes  that first time

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Letterofspring #1
Chapter 5: reread this again, tears almost bursted out. ouch, no mercy and the last part made me squealing in joy. at least jiyoung will have another one to rely with.. aww, never thought of pairing Jiyoung & jonghoon will make me feel joy >.<

i admire ur writings ~
Letterofspring #2
what??? Hongki died?? its one of a sad fanfic ever
primadonna888 #3
I was really sad while reading it... i cried... i cant imagine hongki died though....ah that was jus too sad!!:'(((
chartreuse #4
Author-nim, you were saying about your fic didn't grab attention? Well, it's their loss! I think this is a beautiful masterpiece. You, with your sad stories. I can't even.. You would always trigger my heart strings and bring tears in my eyes. The way you write, your word flow and everything; just breath taking! I admire your writing, I really do.
And this fic, I love it so much. The ending, was unexpected, but I wouldn't have it any other way. It was perfect!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story <3
shuhadaramli #5
Seriously. One of my favourite stories ever. Loved the ending! But Jiyoung's reaction caught me off guard. Hmm. I wished for a continuation, though, from the ending. Hehe!
Anyway, you did a great job! Made me howl with tears in the previous chapter, which was excellently written by the way. Thanks again for your efforts, and we (your fans) are most certainly looking forward to more of Inseperable, and perhaps a sequel of this fic. *wink wink*
baelee #6
So that was what actually happened? It's really sad, the way Hongki died. It must be hard for Jiyoung too...
But the ending... it's quite a happy ending. But, I couldn't imagine how FT Island would be without Hongki though... lol x)
Can't wait for your other stories, unnie! ^^
loveternallyou #7
Hey guys, it's come to an end and I want to thank you for taking the time to read this story of mine ^_^ Even though there were not much readers and you guys didn't really leave me any comments >.< it's okay. I actually had fun (and sadness) writing this. FTI is really killing me with their sad songs ;~;

Anyway, remember to support the boys with their new song 'Severely' and the girls too with their first concert!

KARA-Island ♥
shuhadaramli #8
Of course we want you to go on! Also, please write about how she finally moves on. Please? Thanks! *sobs*
shuhadaramli #9
Sorry, the Jonghun/Jiyoung fan in me was screaming with joy, despite the fact that it's actually Hongki/Jiyoung. :P I personally would've wanted the chapter to be longer, because it is so GOOD! Thanks for the update! Great job!
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