Chapter 6

My Heart With You

A/N: Double update. ^^


Hyukjae resurfaces, awaiting Heechul’s return.

 

The water ripples around him, and he waits patiently for his friend. It scares him that the moon dips so lowly, and so fully, and he thinks of Donghae, his sun who brings so much light into the dark underwaters he calls home.

 

He hears the water swish, and spots a shiny red tail. There was no else like Heechul in his world.

 

“Where in the world did you find him?” Heechul demands, his blackholes glaring, threatening to swallow Hyukjae in.

“In a storm,” Hyukjae simply replies.

“You shouldn’t be out and about, Hyukjae,” Heechul reminds his young friend. “The human world is dangerous.”

 

Hyukjae looks down at the black waters, and brings a luminescent arm up. “He is kind hearted.”

 

Heechul sighs heavily. “I know. He saved me from dying.”

 

Hyukjae swims closer, and searches Heechul’s eyes. “Really?” An excited smile spreads on his ethereal features. “Did he mention me? Is he okay? Is he still fishing, is he still as tan, and broad and-”

 

Heechul claps a hand on Hyukjae’s mouth. “All right, you. Enough. He’s fine,” Heechul spits. “He misses you a lot. What have you done to that poor boy?”

 

Hyukjae looks away, a bit ashamed. “Nothing! I promise. I never charmed him, or anything.”

“He looks for you nightly.”

 

“I do too,” Hyukjae interjects sadly. “I want to go to him so badly.”

Heechul studies his younger friend. He is really too naive. “I’m not going to forbid you to see him or anything, but he’s human, Hyukjae. He will die of old age in time.”

 

Hyukjae bites his lip in an effort to hold his tears. “I gave him my heart.”

“And I’m certain he will hold it with an intention to take care of it and to pour his life into it.”

“But?”

“But nothing. He cannot be like us, and you cannot be like him.”

“I know that.”

“Be careful, Hyukjae. You have a pure heart, and it can die from pain.”

 

The moon shines on Hyukjae’s face, and it touches his eyelashes softly. In his eyelids he can sense the sun-his sun, and he is so bright that Hyukjae cannot forget him. Then they submerge into the only world that welcomes them.

 

~

 

And Donghae waits.

 

Even when so many storms came, and even when the village decided to pack away their lives to put it in another place so it can flourish. Leeteuk decides to accompany his son, he was getting old and did not want to be away from him, so the two of them stayed. Donghae fished for their food, walked for miles to get wood, and even bartered so they can have clothing to make it through the winter.

 

Hyukjae’s pearls saved them many times from starving, and Donghae continues to think of him. The sea is his solace, and he waits again. He knows that Hyukjae is also waiting, and had a feeling that he’s patiently counting the days until they could meet again. The storms still come, but Donghae could decide to count them if it brings him closer to Hyukjae.

 

~

 

Leeteuk and Donghae continue to age.

 

Donghae builds his own boat, while Hyukjae’s voice pleads in his mind: Don’t forget me, Donghae. With just those words, he breaks his sweat and gives blood to his efforts. He will make the best boat to roam the seas. He works from day to night, while taking care of his aging father on breaks. Once, Sungmin visits them with his expecting wife. Donghae will be an uncle, and Leeteuk comes with his eldest son to be a grandfather.

 

Donghae is left alone again, with only the sea as his companion. He seeks the shores for Hyukjae, to show him the boat and ask him to travel the world with him, but he doesn't show up. He starts to get restless, and he works through the night.

 

His boat is almost finished, and he collects the supplies that will be enough for his journey.

 

Then he sets off to find the owner of his heart.





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crescentbunni
#1
Chapter 10: It was so cute watching them learn and explore different worlds of their kind. Their love was so tender my heart really clenched in the feels, and then the last few chapters really did hit me in the feels but the sad kind. Donghae willing to wait for Hyukjae and Hyukjae loving Donghae despite him aging, then they die almost at the same time for them to find each other again in the afterlife. I love it ;-;
byeolnim_
#2
Chapter 10: Really really beautiful, thank you authornim<3
lilachortensia #3
chapter 9 & 10 made me cry really hard... really, thank you for your writings, you're good at this! :)
lunaticJTW
#4
Chapter 10: Your works are always so well done! From a study in minor... Now this... Ah I'm still crying
lunaticJTW
#5
Chapter 4: Im crying too
lunaticJTW
#6
Chapter 1: Every time I see "my name is Donghae" I automatically think 'let's party tonight'
ddohaedalnim
#7
Chapter 10: the story is bittersweet, but as long as they two live happily im content, thank you for writing it :")))
FelixLegion
#8
Chapter 10: This is so sad TT They had a very difficult life. Every one of them. But still they loved each other. And it's natural to die in the end of your life, but it's still so sad, that Hyukjae had to see his love dying 8___8 I cried for two chapters. And then he ended like the foam, just like the little mermaid 8____8
But the story is a fairytale beautiful.
Thank you for sharing!
eunhyuksgal
#9
Chapter 10: Once again; to me its a sad ending urgh I think I'm not cut out for your stories haha....but touching on the supernatural/creatures is something difficult and I really liked how you managed to make it relatable, understandable and generally easy to picture. This story literally depicts an everlasting love.
felineminseok #10
Chapter 10: Ahhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Sometimes you could be so cruel, writing something so forlorn and solemn, but without it being actually sad at all-- because they still ended up together-- but I guess my childish side just hates the concept of time and aging, so it still leaves a bittersweet taste in me no matter the ending. It's so inevitable and sad but they're together now but still!!! TT my heart aches for them. Also, I really really really am in love with mermaids, you got my heart for this. Thank you for writing and sharing this one!!! ???