OUR LAND

I WITNESS
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PRESENT TIME

 

 

Both of them are just standing on the Platform.....

 

 

looking at each other....

 

 

People walking back and forth through them....

 

 

 

5 steps...or maybe 10 to reach Nakyung.....

 

 

 

How do Eli have to describe Nakyung?

 

 

 

She’s not really different with Kyu......

 

 

She talks cute......she’s small....sometimes she’s annoying.....

 

 

but then it doesnt matter if she talks cute...if she’s small.....if she’s annoying.....coz.....

 

 

She always makes her feel that she’s not alone.....that she have importance.....that she can be who she is.....

 

 

if she took those 10 Steps will she see who Nakyung really is?

 

If She’s the ruler of this land?

 

If she came from a different time?

 

 

Why did she have to be here?

 

 

”Chaengie”

 

 

that soft voice had snapped her thoughts away....

 

Eli turn her eyes to Nakyung.....

 

 

”What are you thinking about?” she asked when she took a step.....

 

 

 

somehow her mind had counted those steps....

 

 

“10” that just coice out making Nakyung look at her...

 

”hmm?” Nakyung had look at her...

 

She had to smile....

 

”It’s nothing” Eli had said scratching her nape....

 

 

Nakyung just smile back....

 

”okay” she sway herself while standing in front Of Eli.....

 

 

”What are you doing here?” She ask 

 

 

“Just walking around with Kon” and thats when Eli remember that she’s with Kon....

 

”where is she?” 

 

 

Eli turn herself to look for the kid...

 

but then she realize some writings on her hand that she stop for a second to look at it....

 

 

Ill be leaving First Master Eli....youre with Nakyung already so its fine...

 

 

it really puzzled Eli...

 

how in the world there’s this kind of writings on her hands....

 

”So Kon went ahead already” 

 

that made Eli jump out when Nakyung is already behind her and also reading the writings on her hand....

 

Before Eli could say something Nakyung held her hand....

 

 

 

the people are already going in The train as it arrive.....

 

 

Eli just didnt know where Nakyung is pulling her to.....

 

 

they just skip through every people walking to get to the train....

 

 

 

’ You Dont have to say anything ‘

 

 

 

Eli felt the wind rush through them as they both run through the platform....

 

 

 

’ If you want to tell me you already did but...’

 

 

She just look at their hands that touch each other....

 

 

They both stop at the back of the train.....

 

 

”Hey what are you doing?” She just look up while Nakyung climb up.....

 

 

the latter didnt reply and just laid out her hand to Eli when she’s already above the roof of the train.......

 

 

’ You had stay still and thought that maybe you should keep it to youreself ‘

 

Eli just took Nakyung’s hand and pull her up that they are now both on the roof of the train....

 

 

 

”Ya!! what are the two of you doing up there??” it was the guard.....pointing at them.....

 

 

he tried to make them go down but the train just started to move.....

 

 

nakyung and Eli just wave their hands at the guard.....

 

 

The guard realize that it was Princess Chaeyoung......

 

he was not shocked anymore......

 

 

 

Nakyung just kept laughing while dancing on the top of the roof while Eli just look at her.....

 

 

 

the view of the place as the train moves....Eli can see it.....

 

Is this the land where she lives?

 

it already change......

 

Rain....how the weather became cold.....

 

Apples Being the source of livelihood for people....

 

 

Kon Saying that she’s the one who made all of this...it’s quite hard to believe....

 

 

 

”what are you thinking Chaengie?”

 

 

That made Eli look at Nakyung who stood still looking ahead.....

 

 

as the wind blows through....

 

Eli can see How beautiful Nakyung is.....

 

 

”Nothing” Eli said simply and look away....trying not to look at Nakyung....

coz looking at Nakyung brings something at her chest.....

 

 

’ The Pain is deep....i dont have the right to dig it up so i can be satisfied on knowing you...i want you to be the one to say it....ill wait.....until you want to say it....maybe i can help ‘

 

 

Eli just look around.....

 

How did i made this land the way as it is now?

 

 

 

she took a glance at Nakyung....

 

 

Maybe the answer is here......Maybe youre one of the reason why im here....

 

Eli thought as she look at Nakyung....

 

 

 

 

 

 

+++++++++++++++

 

 

”What are you looking at?” that made the passerby move away on an instant as she walk through...

snarling on every people that he pass by....

 

he thinks he still rules the place that he walks in...

 

 

Won went in at the men’s room....

 

 

 

he was confident walking in.....

 

 

 

Every Guys inside are all looking at him....

 

 

he went at the urinal...

 

the one beside Won had cover himself and

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ven_lai22 #1
Chapter 33: this is so good
franz_pz
#2
Chapter 18: Jiheon can travel through the timeline like Oh Sun? Wow, and she’s here to avenge for her father which is Jang Yu.
franz_pz
#3
Chapter 15: This is so good!! I’m really enjoy it.
Human18 #4
Chapter 33: Need youre update
dumbbeargi
#5
WOOOH UPDATE! SALAMAT AUTHORNIM!
dumbbeargi
#6
Chapter 32: Update authornim UPDAAAAATE!!!
Fromisyou
#7
Chapter 32: Isn't won and eli are the only rulers of the land therefore one of them fell inlove with the bearer. Hayoung is also a point right i think she was the one who abused her power and made mistakes in the past that's why seoyeon stabbed her when she knew the truth that the bearer said to her. I'm kind of confused which book seoyeon is reading eli or bearer?
Lcyfromis #8
Chapter 31: Itan= natty lol my mom haein is also here now! Love triangle again? Saerom is a lucky girl she have gyul, hayoung and haein lol.
So the one who stabbed hayoung is also the one who stabbed her before i dont remember what chapter it was.
Thank god seoheon arrived omfg i dont want chaeyoung or nakyung die.
Jiwon forever hopeless lol most tragic ship in this fic, i dont think he is the savior
In the chap 30 first part who was that? I thought won is only the cruel one here hmmm
Fromisyou
#9
Chapter 30: Is that eli who ordered to kill everyone coz it was "she" so it's not won..but why did she do that?. Kyu is in danger someone will gonna shoot her? And it was oh sun's order is she a threat to her and won?. She found eli's diary I'm excited to know what is really on it. Kinda confused to hayoung's part did she the one who got stabbed? From her vision. I'm starting to like seoyeon and jiheon ship they look cute together.
Lcyfromis #10
Chapter 29: There are 3 points kon, jiheon and oh sun.
Did eli slept for a long time and when she woke up kyu isn't there anymore? Maybe after she witnessed nakyung's death she fell asleep .
Eli, won and young the 3 idiots are so funny, won is different from being an arrogant to a soft cutie haha..