Eight Gems and the Messengers
There was this house, on top of the high hill in Eunioa. In that house there were eight gems, also known as maidens. These maidens were the most beautiful maidens in the kingdom, so people called them jewels. Yet, they themselves called each other gems. Since their worth was more than just a jewel. Under that hill there was a castle, which had a wonderful and loving king who took care and greatly appreciated these gems, King Taeil. King Taeil had six messengers who he treated just like his sons and he sent them out to talk about the marriage between a maiden in that house, or also known as palace of maidens, and his nephew. This way, the six handsome boys and these beautiful maidens were about to clash, in the best way possible.
Eight Gems and the Messengers
Hello all! I'm back at you guys with another one of my lovable Nct stories. And I promise you, this will not disappoint. It's kinda based off of Barbie and the 12 Dancing Princess's. So um, yeah. I'm kinda childish. This will have so much adorable romance and stuff like that in it. So stay around if you love yourself some good fluff! And you will get every otp, no is main. So please wait as this plot develops. I hope you will love this story, and please try to comment, subscribe, and upvote if you can. It really increases my want in writing the story if you guys do that stuff. Especially comments. ( :
Recent Update: Chapter Three is up! Doyoung is even more confused plus a lot of fluff!
Parings: Hansol x Yuta; Jungwoo x Taeyong; Yukhei x Ten; Doyoung x Jaehyun; Johnny x Winwin; Jeno x Mark; Jisung x Haechan; and Renjun x Chenle. King Taeil and Bodyguard Kun are side characters(pretty main though, not shipped together).
Warning: The characters don't belong to me, but the plot does. So, if you see anything close to this, then please tell me. It's an original idea that I got when watching a pakistani drama, lol. PS: Not based off that drama. I was just thinking while watching. Past based au thing. Like basically in the past, or placed in Barbie and the 12 Dancing Princess's.
Colors: All of them have colors. Like, of clothing they wear. Only the maidens and the messanges are colors, the bodyguard just wears black and the king doesn't really care. Some people have the same colors, only because some maidens are messangers have the same colors.
Hansol - Messenger - Green Johnny- Mesenger - Purple Taeyong - Maiden - Pink
Yuta - Maiden - Purple Doyoung - Messenger - Tangerine Ten - Maiden - Bright red
Jungwoo - Villan- Dark Red Jaehyun - Maiden - Yellow
Winwin - Maiden - Dark Green
Lucas - Prince - Gold (Au) Mark - Maiden - Teal Renjun - Messenger - White
Jeno - Messenger - Orange Haechan - Maiden - Dark Blue Chenle - Maiden- Black
Jisung - Messenger - Blue
Review by Charlot1081
Your grammar is really good. There are some points where you can make the sentences a bit more clear. Some words seem like they're accidentally omitted. Nothing a little re-reading won't hurt!
I liked how you described the rooms. It felt like if I opened my bedroom door, I could see what you wrote. I also think that wearing gold to bed would be very irritating.
All around Enjoyment: 50/50
I really enjoyed reading the two chapters. I do believe this is the first NCT story I ever read. I'm not a fan of the group, but I've become formiliar with Johnny due to Sehun's little 'accident.' I really think that Doyoung and Taeyong need to stop flirtign if they're not goign to wind up together though! It's too cute! I like how Taeyong always thinks of his other maidens, it's so motherly. Doyoung must find him to be more motherly.
Enough spoilers, I'm willing to wait for your next update!
Your score is: 99.4/100!
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