Insensible

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Baekhyun and Chanyeol are a perfect college couple who believe that nothing can break them apart. Until 10 years later, fate decide to test their faith of their 10 years worth relationship.

 

Are they truly destined to be together???

 

 

 

Haiiii... 

After months being a reader, I start to challenge myself to write one, I've never write anything before, so, spare me.. it is my trial one. Will be up soon. ^_^

 

 

Foreword

Chanyeol and Baekhyun is a CC (College Couple) when everyone on their campus envied them and ship them. They are so perfect together and nothing could break them apart.

They through college together and support each other dreams until they graduate and slowly reach each of their dreams except one, to get married.

Marriage is something that Baekhyun long the most, dream that he want to achieve the most, and of course he want to do it with Chanyeol, his lifetime Lover, his everything.

But, its seems to far ahead because these late months, Baekhyun can't feel Chanyeol presence, He is there, because they live together, but his soul isn't. Chanyeol feel so distant. Baekhyun aware of this, but Baekhyun love Chanyeol too much to admit.

 

Notes :

Wait for the full stories.. I'm looking for some inspiration first..

This is inspired by, Lee Hong Ki's single, 눈지 없이

I saw Park Shin Hye looks so devastated in that MV.

 

 

 

Author's Thoughts
parkbyunislife
Hai.. my readers.. I'm sorry for making Chanyeol such a jerk.. I hate him too~~
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Nettiaz #1
Chapter 6: I think it's an interesting and captivating story. It bugs me however that Beakhyun didn’t confront Chaneyol when he got back from Japan when another woman answered his phone, and that he so easily accepts Chaneyols betrayl when she is pregnant (!)... It's like the cheating man is so easily forgiven and almost 'victimised' while the girl he cheated with is evil and dark because she fell in love with the man that seduced her (while already having a relationship).
I wish to se Beakhyun become really angry, and that Chaneyol will suffer some concequences for his actions. He ing cheated on him! And are having a baby with another woman! Bastard!
And if this child will be the baby to take part in Chaneyols and Beakhyuns 'happy marriage' in the future (puke!) without Chaneyol suffering any concequences from his actions, I will seriosly get an anxiety attack and cry in frustration! Then Beakhyun will truly become a washed out rug that lies flat for anyone to trample upon.
Beakhyun needs to feel his own selfvalue and not just 'take' being cheated upon and in addition - his spouse having a child with someone else. It's degrading and humiliating for him. I hope you just wont leave it like that...
As you can tell, my feels are all over the place with this fic, so please continue your work and hopefully you'll update soon! :)
dhyunnasworld #2
Chapter 6: I think you put the wrong tag /sobs/
This is angst! Not slightangst!

Goddamn! It remind me of E4SE and Innocent
Asdfghjkl! you Yeol! you Jinah!

Bark, leave chanyeol and married to kangjun instead :"(
nutellalthea #3
Chapter 5: WHAT THE
hopebunny #4
Chapter 5: UGHHH I KNEW IT SCREW HYE JIN SHE PLANNED THIS WHOLE "ROBBERY". I hope Baekhyun figures things out and has a showdown with her.
honeyandclover #5
Chapter 5: chanyeol is the worst at how careless he is by sleeping with jinah and now even bring her home wtf.
Readerwriter #6
Chapter 5: Ugh, Jin-ah might be a witch, but Chanyeol is an adult and he knows what he's doing. I'm so mad at him. She has a job, she can pay for a hotel. And I don't know wht Baek didn't just go off on both of them.
nutellalthea #7
Chapter 4: you and your dumbness chanyeol
honeyandclover #8
Chapter 4: ing jinah. I'm nervous on what will happen next, ugh.
hopebunny #9
Chapter 3: Dang things are gonna go down so fast with Jin-ah and Kang Jun in the picture!

P.S. how about writing on a Google document? It is cloud based so you don't have to worry about losing your file again :)
honeyandclover #10
Chapter 3: gosh, finally chanyeol ended thing with jinah but I feel worry now if she's trying to harm baekhyun.
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