Attention

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ATTENTION

 

               Hoya had made sure that he wouldn’t drink at all tonight at this club. He was sure himself he was absolutely sober this time, but when he stared sharply at a dancing figure on the dance floor at the center of the club, he started to wonder if he was drunk or was hallucinating.

A dancing figure who got his attention was a girl. She wasn’t an ordinary girl who dancing so passionately on the dance floor. She was the only girl who ever made him like a very special guy in this universe. And she was his special girl, maybe still the same until now.

“You know, I heard a rumor about you, Hoya. That you are a guy who has no heart,” a random girl who sat beside him on a couch at the club, whispered so closely to him. He could smell the alcohol from her breath.

But all Hoya’s attention had been snatched by his special girl on the dance floor who was still continue dancing like she was only live for dancing and he didn’t have any idea why she was there. Hoya also didn’t even know the random girl beside him who was touching him slightly and continued speaking so closely to him that he ignored all along. He let the random girl sat beside him only to see if his special girl would feel jealous of him, but actually he was the one who felt so much jealousy when there was random guy who dancing too close to her. He wanted to separate them instantly when he saw it, but he couldn’t.

Even though he said she was his special girl, actually she wasn’t his now. They broke up nearly two weeks ago because something he also was feeling now, jealousy. And Hoya didn’t quite understand what his special girl was doing now or also three days ago. From three days ago, she had always been going to every events or parties he was attended and tonight was the fourth times she was at the same party with him. At first, Hoya thought that it was just coincidence or even he was just hallucinating every time he saw her because he was truthfully missing her.

She also knew people who hold the event or party, but since yesterday he gained slight suspicious on her because she actually didn’t know the people who hold yesterday party and tonight party. Hoya definitely knew about it after they had a relationship for two years that those people weren’t in her circle of colleague. Also, he knew that his special girl didn’t really like going to a party at a club and she didn’t like going alone. Moreover, she always ignored him at every events or parties they had attended three days ago and today, like he was a total stranger to her and she completely didn’t know him that it pissed him off so much.

“I also heard that someone who spread the rumor is your ex,” the random girl beside him spoke and this time he glanced at her while frowning on what she was speaking, then he stared back at his special girl who left the dance floor and walked slowly to the bar. All of it suddenly clicked on Hoya’s head.

“I’m sorry, but play time is over, Sehyun-sshi,” Hoya abruptly stood up that almost knocked the random girl down on the couch.

“What?! Wait! And my name is Sooyeon!” the random girl shouted at him, but Hoya already walked up to the bar to his special girl while fixing his suit.

Hoya’s eyes fixed at his special girl like a predator watched on their prey. She absolutely got all of his attention now as she always wanted all along. She wanted his attention. She was sitting at one of a bar stool, Hoya quickly approached her while glaring daggers at random guys who came near her and those random guys immediately scurried away after they saw his frightening glare and his intimidation present.

Hoya stood behind her as he watched her gulping her drink, the frown sunked even deeper on his forehead. She was never drinking alone and she had a courage to drink only if she was with him, so he would the one who took care of her later. Because she easily got drunk.

A second later, a disbelief smirk appeared on Hoya’s handsome face. He felt like he was the stupidest person in this universe, that the girl in front of him, his special girl, who still backed facing him, actually had known all along that he would come to her this time.

“Stop drinking, Biah,” the pretty name of his special girl was pronounced softly from Hoya’s heart-shape lips as he grabbed her wrist which was about to lift the glass of her drink.

Biah jerked away his hand harshly from her wrist without looking at him as she resumed what she was about to do, but Hoya quickly snatched the glass before Biah, drank all of the liquid drink in it and purposely placed the glass on the bar counter with a loud thud.

Hoya felt satisfied when he finally got her attention as he saw Biah looked up at him with displease expression on her pretty face. She pouted her red lips that Hoya had to hardly restrained himself to place his own lips on it. She began to pour the drink on the glass again while Hoya continue staring at her. Biah rarely wore a dress that she was wearing right now, the

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KaihleeLo
#1
Chapter 6: First of all, Vivi, know I do not mean you any harm with this awfully long comment but here are my honest thoughts. >_<

Yeseul does not deserve to be Biah’s friend and best friend at that. Lol. What best friend doesn’t call the police and fell asleep when her best friend was acting strange? >_< Get a grip Yeseul, you’re useless (a.k.a me xD). Also, she annoys me cause she was hesistant about cooperating -_- like gurl, your friend was in an accident after acting strange, wake up!

Honestly, the detectives referring to Biah as a ‘pretty’ girl was disturbing to me. Even if they were great detectives, they aren’t exactly the type of men I’d want protecting and solving my case. I’m sure they’ve seen and met beautiful to ugly people on a daily basis, and for them to throw the term around loosely was irritating to me. Especially when the victim is hospitalized and could lose consciousness at any second. If you, the author, were to described her as pretty, then it’d still give me an idea that Biah is pretty. But if the character does it for you, given their profession, it took me aback. Ah and Vivi, it’s not a big deal but I thought I should also point out that “catched” and “shaked” are past tense but they should be spelled “caught” and “shook”.

I think it’s sweet that Howon didn’t want to scare Bomin away so he lied that he was Biah’s boyfriend but at the same time it seemed insensitive to me? Before Biah explained the phone conversation, Howon never knew if Biah ever wanted or needed a boyfriend. It didn’t make sense why Howon thought Bomin was afraid of detective in the first place, although Bomin did run away. Howon should have came out clear to Bomin, “I’m the detective in charge of your friend’s case and I believe something is amiss,” then perhaps question Bomin about what he knew about Biah before and after the accident? I also find it silly that Howon was more worried about Biah’s ghost/soul more than anything. Especially when no one could see or hurt her? It’s clear that Howon was attracted to Biah, but he was so distracted by her appearance >_< I just want to knock some sense into him lol.

I haven’t seen Two Cops and I don’t know if the idea of Howon being able to see the victim and witness’s soul was part of the drama xD But I love the idea. I love when souls works with detectives to solve crimes haha.

The only thing Yeseul did well was tell Biah she could get any man she wanted xD Cause that is trueeeee.

Oh gosh, get a room you two! xD It’s cute with the handcuff and all but..oh wait..don’t bring it to a bedroom...it’ll become ….

Awe, thank you for the oneshot Vivi~ I’m glad they were able to solve Biah’s case quickly and fall in love. Do I hear wedding bells (sequel) or what? xD
InfinitExotic
#2
Chapter 5: It was short but sweet and sad because she's not physically there with him anymore and it makes my heart hurt ;-; because I wanna see my hobaby have an ending with someone. I really liked it overall though. It tugged at my tiny heart strings.
LuminousMusicEnt
#3
Chapter 4: oh when i finally read it all, i realised the story is quite short! but nice~ still lovey dovey, typical u XD
Blu3Wind
#4
Chapter 3: Awwww this one is cute. I alrweady guessed Hoya wanted to buy that present since the beginning. Hahaha
Aw soon to be wife. So will we get a wrdding one shot one day? XD
yeoniehottest
#5
Chapter 3: Woow perfect
winspiritbeauty
#6
Chapter 2: this is cute! hoya being awkward dude is perfectly captured! good job~~
Blu3Wind
#7
Chapter 2: Naughty naughtyyyyy~~~~ so many kissing going on.
But still so sweet and kinda slice of life ish i think.. So cutee~~ good job!
sarasquirrel
#8
Chapter 2: awwww this is so adorableeeee ^-^
#HOBI <333333
winspiritbeauty
#9
Chapter 1: i saw alot gorgeous and chrystal words, hmm just suggestion sih, u can look for synonym of it so it less boring for the reader to see?, it was boring to be tbh ^^"
but i love princess BI AH, she deff suit as princess~ elegant and mannerish (is this even word..)
the story is plot iss nicee! remind me of edward and belle back in classical times XDD
Blu3Wind
#10
Chapter 1: Oohhh nice oneee!! I like how Howon is the solution to her problem, and by letting him do that, she be finally be freee~ tp dikit lg n ini ada potensi buat jd , ya ga win? Hahahhahahahahaha xD

But good job!!! I like the message of the story <3