Chapter 6: First of all, Vivi, know I do not mean you any harm with this awfully long comment but here are my honest thoughts. >_<

Yeseul does not deserve to be Biah’s friend and best friend at that. Lol. What best friend doesn’t call the police and fell asleep when her best friend was acting strange? >_< Get a grip Yeseul, you’re useless (a.k.a me xD). Also, she annoys me cause she was hesistant about cooperating -_- like gurl, your friend was in an accident after acting strange, wake up!

Honestly, the detectives referring to Biah as a ‘pretty’ girl was disturbing to me. Even if they were great detectives, they aren’t exactly the type of men I’d want protecting and solving my case. I’m sure they’ve seen and met beautiful to ugly people on a daily basis, and for them to throw the term around loosely was irritating to me. Especially when the victim is hospitalized and could lose consciousness at any second. If you, the author, were to described her as pretty, then it’d still give me an idea that Biah is pretty. But if the character does it for you, given their profession, it took me aback. Ah and Vivi, it’s not a big deal but I thought I should also point out that “catched” and “shaked” are past tense but they should be spelled “caught” and “shook”.

I think it’s sweet that Howon didn’t want to scare Bomin away so he lied that he was Biah’s boyfriend but at the same time it seemed insensitive to me? Before Biah explained the phone conversation, Howon never knew if Biah ever wanted or needed a boyfriend. It didn’t make sense why Howon thought Bomin was afraid of detective in the first place, although Bomin did run away. Howon should have came out clear to Bomin, “I’m the detective in charge of your friend’s case and I believe something is amiss,” then perhaps question Bomin about what he knew about Biah before and after the accident? I also find it silly that Howon was more worried about Biah’s ghost/soul more than anything. Especially when no one could see or hurt her? It’s clear that Howon was attracted to Biah, but he was so distracted by her appearance >_< I just want to knock some sense into him lol.

I haven’t seen Two Cops and I don’t know if the idea of Howon being able to see the victim and witness’s soul was part of the drama xD But I love the idea. I love when souls works with detectives to solve crimes haha.

The only thing Yeseul did well was tell Biah she could get any man she wanted xD Cause that is trueeeee.

Oh gosh, get a room you two! xD It’s cute with the handcuff and all but..oh wait..don’t bring it to a bedroom...it’ll become ….

Awe, thank you for the oneshot Vivi~ I’m glad they were able to solve Biah’s case quickly and fall in love. Do I hear wedding bells (sequel) or what? xD

Chapter 5: It was short but sweet and sad because she's not physically there with him anymore and it makes my heart hurt ;-; because I wanna see my hobaby have an ending with someone. I really liked it overall though. It tugged at my tiny heart strings.

Chapter 4: oh when i finally read it all, i realised the story is quite short! but nice~ still lovey dovey, typical u XD

Chapter 3: Awwww this one is cute. I alrweady guessed Hoya wanted to buy that present since the beginning. Hahaha
Aw soon to be wife. So will we get a wrdding one shot one day? XD

Chapter 3: Woow perfect

Chapter 2: this is cute! hoya being awkward dude is perfectly captured! good job~~

Chapter 2: Naughty naughtyyyyy~~~~ so many kissing going on.
But still so sweet and kinda slice of life ish i think.. So cutee~~ good job!

Chapter 2: awwww this is so adorableeeee ^-^
#HOBI <333333

Chapter 1: i saw alot gorgeous and chrystal words, hmm just suggestion sih, u can look for synonym of it so it less boring for the reader to see?, it was boring to be tbh ^^"
but i love princess BI AH, she deff suit as princess~ elegant and mannerish (is this even word..)
the story is plot iss nicee! remind me of edward and belle back in classical times XDD

Chapter 1: Oohhh nice oneee!! I like how Howon is the solution to her problem, and by letting him do that, she be finally be freee~ tp dikit lg n ini ada potensi buat jd , ya ga win? Hahahhahahahahaha xD

But good job!!! I like the message of the story <3