Episode Three

SuperStar BootCamp ☆ Do You Have What It Takes To Be A Star?
 

   Stage Presence

"Hello, hello and welcome back to Boot Camp!" As always, Jongwoon is bright and enthusiastic as he opens the show. "Last week our trainees here started learning the basics of trainee life, getting beauty tips and workout routines from their mentors! Hopefully they feel comfortable with those because it's time to kick it up a notch!"

He spins excitedly, and the camera zooms out to show that he's standing in a large dance studio, different from the one the girls took their ballroom classes in.

"Welcome to the JTBC rehearsal room! Starting this week, our participants get into the nitty gritty of idol life. And by that I of course mean that this week." He pauses for effect, grinning all too sweetly, "We start dance lessons."

The camera then does a dramatic zoom out of the building, panning around the city, and then zooming back in to what proves to be the participants' dorm.

A time stamp shows it's seven fourty five in the morning and the dorm is dead silent.

However, moments after the camera zoom stops, a loud alarm begins blaring through the house, and abruptly the small space is overflowing with noise.

"Who the heck set that?"

"I thought we got a sleep in today!"

"Someone please turn it off!"

The camera spins to show a highly amused looking Gikwang holding up his phone and projecting the alarm through a small megaphone.

A bleary Jinyi is the first one to appear in the hallway, stumbling straight past Gikwang in a bid for the kitchen, mumbling "coffee" over and over as she passes the camera.

Woojin appears next, ruffled but a bit more aware than Jinyi. He looks over at Gikwang, frowning sleepily.

"Why?"

"You've got workout in fifteen minutes." The interviewer reminds him, and he blinks once before shuffling back into the mens' room.

A moment later there's a thudding sound and Eunchan's yelp can be heard clearly through the wall, as well as Hanhae laughing loudly.

As the scrambling continues on the men's side of the apartment, Myunghwa, fully dressed in her workout clothes, emerges from the women's side of the hallway and walks into the living room. She momentarily looks starteld by the cameras before smiling awkwardly to them and hurrying past, following Jinyi to the kitchenette.

The following fifteen minutes are sped up as the rest of the contestants emerge one by one from their rooms and attempt to grab something to eat before they have to leave.

"I'm not super thrilled about the continued morning workouts, but I am kind of getting used to them." Jinyi laughs in her interview. "Still ajusting to getting out of bed without kicking Giri in the face though." She adds jokingly.

"The rooming situation is pretty tight, but I assume we'll all get used to it." Giri sounds hopeful in her interview, if a bit strained. "Though I'm wondering if maybe I should switch to the top bunk..."

The scene returns to the contestants as they make the short trek to the gym. All ten are consulting schedules as they walk.

"Seriously? We have thirty minutes dedicated to just putting on makeup?" Hadon sounds incredibly put out by the revelation.

Jinyoo's hands flutter and she looks like she wants to say something, but Jisoo beats her to it.

"When is it?" She tugs the schedule so she can look at it over his shoulder, and then glances at her own. "I can help you on Wednesday and Thursday if you want, I have that time free."

Hadon agrees to the proposal and the two continue talking as they walk.

Jinyi is looking curiously over her own schedule when Hanhae sidles over to her.

"No chance you'd be free to help me out?" He grins innocently and she smirks back.

"Afraid not. We'll have to make our own time."

"Could you two not?" Akihiro grumbles.

"They've been flirting all week." He sighs in his interview. "I'm pretty sure we're supposed to be here to train as idols, not pick up new relationships."

Hanhae gives an eyeroll in his own chat with Gikwang. "It's just harmless flirting. I think Hiro is just petty because his wife didn't get in."

"He does have a point though. You are supposed to be focused on the weekly goals." Gikwang notes.

Hanhae shrugs. "I am focusing on them. What's so wrong with having some fun on the side?"

The scene returns to show the women leaving the gymnasium, exhausted and sweaty but slightly less out of breath than in the previous week's episode.

"I almost think I'm getting used to this!" Of the five, Jisoo is easily the least winded, though she's still tired from the workout.

Giri smiles, clearly the most wiped of the group. "I hope I will soon. We have to keep doing these for the rest of the show, right?"

"That's what they say." Myunghwa nods confirmation. "Gikwang did say that the trainers would be dropped after our first performance though."

The other four look over at her in surprise.

"Performance?" Jisoo inquires, a spark in her eyes.

"First performance? There will be more than one?" Giri on the other hand seems a bit less excited by the prospect of multiple stages.

"The show is only two months long!" She explains in the interview. "I mean, I knew we'd be doing something, but more than one performance? We're all just starting and it seems like a lot." She worriedly glances away from the camera, biting her lip.

The boys leave the gym about twenty minutes after the girls do, as seen by the time stamp in the corner of the screen. They, unlike the girls, are already showered and dressed in regular clothes.

Of this group, Woojin is easily the least exhausted while Eunchan's cheer seems to have drained straight from his soul as he lags behind the group by a few paces.

"Get anywhere with that trainer of yours?" Hadon sounds distinctly teasing as he chats with Hanhae.

Hanhae shrugs goodnaturedly. "Nah. Not really my type. She's fun though!"

Akihiro, who's a few steps ahead of the rest, rolls his eyes but makes no comment on the exchange, instead opting to shift the conversation.

"So we've got dancing in thirty minutes. I wonder how this will work since we don't have a song or anything to practice with." He muses, loud enough that even Eunchan glances up at the back.

Hadon shrugs disinterestedly. "Obviously trainees do that plenty so there must be something. You know what I find weird though? We haven't seen this week's mentors yet and it's almost noon."

That sparks more of a conversation.

"Hey yeah! I guess maybe they're busier than our last ones?" Eunchan seems to have recovered most of his energy as he perks back up and jumps into the conversation.

"Considering one of our last mentors was Bae Suji I kind of doubt that." Woojin points out quietly. "I think we probably will meet them wherever the dance studio is."

Akihiro blinks, and then frowns. "Wait... does anyone actually know where the dance studio is? Because we have to be there pretty soon and I don't actually know the location."

The boys share a glance of realization before they pick up their pace, Hanhae pulling out his phone as he does.

"Asking Jinyi if she knows?" Hadon guesses with a small grin.

Hanhae grins back. "I have the number, may as well use it."

The scene shifts to show the women sitting in a van. Jinyoo is sitting in the front next to Jongwoon, who's driving, while the other four are in the back chatting. The sound of a phone beeping fills the car shortly after it comes into focus.

"Sorry, that's me." Jinyi pulls out her phone, and the others all glance at her curiously.

She laughs a moment later. "The boys want to know where the dance studio is. Should I tell them, or shall we let them worry?"

"Just tell them, they'll find out soon enough anyway." Myunghwa points out.

Jinyi shrugs. "You're no fun. Alright, I'll tell them." She fires off a text, and then leans over the back of Jinyoo's seat to address Jongwoon. "So where is the dance studio actually? We've been driving for almost fifteen minutes now."

Jongwoon just grins. "Not much further. Give me two minutes."

The girls opt to trust him and go back to chatting.

"So if we're dancing this week who do you think our mentor wil be? Probably one of the top idol dancers right?" Giri glances around at the others as she speaks.

Jisoo perks up immediately. "Hey yeah, you're probably right! Oh gosh I hope it's Hyoyeon. Or BoA! Even Momo would be awesome, she's the hot new dancer of this generation." She enthuses happily.

Jinyi laughs. "Wow. I don't know any of those people."

Jisoo looks like she's about to be insulted, but just then Jongwoon loudly announces their arrival.

"Welcome to your home away from home girls!" He annouces proudly as the van pulls to a stop.

A wide shot shows that they've pulled into the parking lot of a stout building that boasts a gaudy sign advertising spaces for rent.

The five girls stare up at their new accomodations, before turning to look increduously at the host, who gives an unabashed grin.

"Hey, we're on a budget, and you haven't even been inside yet! Give it a chance girls." Jongwoon encourages. "And on that note, I need to go pick up the boys. You five just head on up to the second floor and your mentor for the week will meet you there! Have fun!" And with that he retreats back into the van and drives off.

Giri ends up being the first one to enter the building, and the others follow close behind her.

The inside is much nicer than the exterior had led the group to believe. It's simple, but quite clean. Even the walls look like they've been scrubbed.

There's an elevator not far from the front doors, and the five take it to the second floor, standing in awkward silence during the short wait.

Once they exit the elevator, they stop, clear confusion on all their faces.

There's a short hallway in front of them, and two doors stand on opposite sides of the hall.

"...Which one is ours?" Myunghwa sounds distinctly upset by the realization that Jongwoon hadn't given them all the needed information before he'd run off.

Jisoo is the first to reply, though Giri looks like she was about to as well. "Maybe we just pick one? There are two mentors - maybe we get to randomly chose ours and the boys get the other?" She suggests.

As they debate what to do, Jinyi rolls her eyes and strides over to one of the doors, tosses it open, and then laughs loudly, causing the other four to look to her, startled.

"Or maybe one of the rooms is empty. Come out guys, let's meet our mentor." She closes the door and then spins to open the other.

Jisoo peers over her shoulder excitedly, and then squeals and bounds into the room.

The camera switches to an internal view of the dance room Jongwoon had stood in at the start of the episode as the girls file in.

Jisoo is practically vibrating in her shoes as their mentor walks over to them, her back to the camera. Giri looks equally impressed, while the other three don't quite share the same enthusiasm, varying from curiosity to amused confusion.

Finally their mentor speaks, and it's immediately clear who it is.

"Good morning girls. I hope your workout gave you a good warmup, because we have a long day ahead of us."

And finally, Gong Minji turns so the camera can see her.


The show returns to the exact moment that it left off. Minzy smiles at the girls, and then immediately waves them into a circle.

"Alright, some of your clothing choices aren't great for dancing, but we'll talk about that more at the end of today. For now we're going to start with some basic warmups, and then we'll test to see how much to you know about dancing already."

Jinyi rolls her shoulders back. "I can already tell you I know nothing, but alright, let's do this."

Minzy leads the girls through several, slightly sped up, stretches. Jisoo follows along easily, but the other four struggle quite a bit, revealing that none of them are particularly flexible.

"I didn't think the warm ups would be tiring." Giri sighs in her interview. "I really have a long way to go if I'm worn out before we even start actually dancing."

Gikwang tilts his head. "So how did the actual dancing go then?"

The next shot shows a slightly disappointed Minzy.

"Okay then. Clearly most of you have a ways to go, but we have a week to get you up to speed on the basics, and of course your dance practices will continue with the remainder of your time on the show so you'll get there." The idol is straight to business. In front of her, all the girls except Jisoo look either embarrassed or exhausted.

Minzy eyes them for a moment before sighing. "Okay, don't worry about it. A lot of idols start out not really knowing how to dance. Some aren't particularly coordinated either. You can learn." She sighs again. "But this week is going to be a lot more intense that I had initial thought."

An interview with the girls' mentor reveals why.

"I only watched the first episode and noticed there were a lot of great female dancers auditioning. I had thought more than one of them would end up among the participants." She admits.

Back in the dance studio Minzy has divided Jisoo out from the group, and the young dancer is practicing by herself on one side of the room, cheerfully flying through several complex looking routines with ease, while the other four work on something much easier.

Jisoo is still ecstatic in her interview. "Dancing is my forte! I've always loved it and been told I'm good, but hearing that from a pro dancer is really another level." She's beaming happily as she speaks, practically floating in her excitement.

Jinyi is far less impressed. "I'm the last person to say I'm any good as a dancer, but if I hear Jisoo brag about her dancing one more time I'm going to slap the kid. Seriously, there is such a thing as too much." She grins, but it seems a bit more strained than her usually carefree ones.

The scene returns to the men as they pile out of a van in front of the dance building.

The five look about as impressed by the space as the women had been, but once again Jongwoon encourages them to give it a chance and then directs them to the second floor before racing off, leaving them stranded in the parking lot with nothing else to do but head up.

They're greeted by the sound of music blaring from the right side of the hallway.

Akihiro shrugs and glances at the others. "I suppose we go left then, since it sounds like the girls have already started."

The boys file into their room, only to find that it's empty.

Akihiro frowns heavily. "Our mentor isn't here yet? What's with that?"

Eunchan, who seems to have fully recovered from the morning's workout, promptly begins exploring the space.

"There's an iPod already hooked into the sound system." He announces after a moment. "We could just dance by ourselves until he gets here!"

No one looks particularly enthralled with this suggestion, but before anything more can be said the door opens once again.

Akihiro turns to face their newly arrived mentor, looking annoyed, but he freezes when he sees the man standing in the doorway.

"Sorry I'm late guys, traffic was worse than anticipated!" Jung Jihoon grins with some embarrassment as he closes the door behind himself. "Anyway, hello, I'll be your mentor this week!"

Woojin still looks surprised in his interview. "I can't believe you guys got Rain to mentor us for the week. Wouldn't that cost a lot?"

"This. Is. So. Cool." Eunchan enthuses in his own interview. "I mean L is a big name and all, but Rain is a legend! And we get to work with him! Man, everyone at home is going to be so jealous when they see this!" He's practically vibrating in his seat as he speaks.

However all his energy is seemingly gone in the next shot of the boys, revealed to be day two of the week. All five are nearly drenched in sweat, save Woojin who's a bit less worn than the others.

Rain stops the music and turns to them. "Alright that was better. Eunchan, you still have a habit of losing the beat around the third measure though, stay cognizant of that. You auditioned as a dancer, so you really need to be on top of the beat."

Eunchan nods cheerfully. "Sir yes sir!"

Nodding, Rain turns to the other four. "You're keeping up well, but Hanhae and Hadon you're both not putting in your full effort. This is a group, which means it's only as good as it's weakest link." His words are gentle, and neither of the men addressed seems to really take them to heart despite the nods they both give.

Rain doesn't seem bothered by their lacking attention and looks to the final two members.

"Woojin and Akihiro. You two are actually keeping up quite well. I may recommend one of you for the lead dance position at the end of the week. Of course, there's still plenty to improve on, but continue as you have been and you'll be fine."

Akihiro beams while Woojin simply shrugs in acceptance of the praise.

Rain turns to start the music again, but he's interrupted by a loud, insistent knocking at the door.

He blinks, and then pulls out his phone before laughing and opening the door.

Minzy stands on the other side, eyebrow raised and looking equally amused. "You forgot."

He shrugs. "I forgot." He turns to the clearly confused group with an abashed grin. "Alright, Akihiro, Woojin, and Hadon. You're released for the day. Hanhae, Eunchan, congratulations. You get some one-on-one dance training!"

Hanhae grins and nudges Hadon. "Take me with you."

Hadon smirks back. "Why, is Rain not your type either? You sure are picky."

Hanhae bursts into laughter as the three boys leave with Minzy.

In the hallways, all five of the women participants are waiting, down bottles of water as they do.

Jisoo gravitates straight to Hadon, smiling sweetly.

"How's dancing going for you guys? Like it yet?" She asks him eagerly.

He laughs and shrugs. "Keep trying kid."

Jisoo pouts at him while Minzy waves to get everyone's attention back onto herself.

"Alright, you all probably know that groups are divided into lead and main dancers, vocals, and rappers." She waits for some acknowledgement before she continues, and Myunghwa gives it to her in the form of a serious nod.

"Excluding Jisoo, each of you is under consideration for either vocal or rap positions. So every other afternoon you'll have off from dance training to hone these skills on your own until next week."

Akihiro perks up. "Is that what Rain meant when he mentioned lead dancer earlier?"

Minzy tosses a glance to the closed door to the mens' dance room, where music has once again started up and is filtering into the hallway from under the door. "It is, though he wasn't supposed to say anything. The main and lead dancers in each team will be decided on by the end of the week based on my and Rain's observations of your talent and improvement."

Jisoo gives a small smirk, clearly already anticipating her main dance position.

Myunghwa tilts her head, frowning slightly. "Will we have to go elsewhere to practice? And how can we practice without proper teachers?" She points out, clearly concerned.

Minzy shrugs. "You have phones, right? Youtube."

Myunghwa clearly isn't very happy with that answer, but she backs down.

Minzy either doesn't notice her dissatisfaction or ignores as as she addresses the first part of Myunghwa's concerns. "As for where you need to go, just head downstairs! We've rented the entire building, and the first floor is composed of several smaller rooms. They aren't designated one way or another just yet so just head into one and practice." With that she takes Jisoo back into the womens' dance room, leaving the group to head to the first floor.

"I've had lessons in the past, so I knew how to warm up properly, but I'm worried about the others. There's been some car singing and I know not everyone has good technique." Myunghwa frets slightly in her interview. "I just don't want anyone tearing their vocal chords over this show!"

Gikwang regards her for a long moment before he replies. "Did you ever consider that this happens with actual trainees?"

Myunghwa gazes at him with wide eyes, clearly upset by the notion. "But they'll give themselves nodes! Singing deals with a very delicate instrument, and you can't just buy new vocal chords! They really make kids sings without teaching them proper technique?"

Gikwang blinks. "Um, Myunghwa... have you ever actually listened to KPop?"

She wipes at her eyes, which had become a bit damp during her fretting, and shakes her head awkwardly. "I did more as a kid. I prefer indie music these days actually." She blushes at the admission, and the scene finally shifts away to show the chosen contestants practicing.

Myunghwa is sitting in a relatively small room, strumming on a guitar to help her find her notes to warm up with. Jinyoo is with her, trying to mimic her tone nervously.

"Myunghwa offered to show me some warmup techniques to use since I haven't had lessons in quite a while." Jinyoo says in her interview, staring at her lap. "It was very nice of her."

Hadon is freestyle beatboxing in another room, making no attempt to even pretend he's practicing rap likes he's supposed to be.

"I don't know the first thing about rapping, and honestly as the only male rapper on the team I'm guaranteed the main rap position. So why not take the free time when it's presented?" He grins easily in his interview.

Akihiro on the other hand is the picture of focus. As Minzy had recommended, he has his phone out and is attempting to follow several warm ups on Youtube.

He's still quite serious in his interview. "When Sarang wasn't chosen for the show, I initially was going to reject my own spot here. But she asked me to try, for her. And so I need to get that role, to fulfill her dream to be on a stage, and I'm going to do everything I can to accomplish that."

Gikwang nods. "You two are quite close. I admit I had wondered why you would come without her, when it was her dream."

Akihiro remains serious. "I came because it's her dream."

In yet another individual room, Jinyi is actually practicing her rap, though she's also texting as she does.

She shrugs in her interview. "I mean, I usually rap while doing something else so I figured I'd check and see how things are going at the bakery so far. Apparently the kid hasn't burned anything down yet, which I admit is impressive." She laughs lightly as the scene switches yet again.

Giri is much less relaxed in her practice, nervously flicking through her phone and stumbling through a few attempted raps.

"I don't really know how to rap! I'm just worse at singing!" She admits in her interview, slumping into her chair. "There isn't really much online in terms of help either! Lots of singing advice, but nothing for rap! I'm starting to think..." She shakes her head, sitting back up. "No, no I'll be fine. Sorry, just tired."

Woojin is the last of the group to be shown. He's singing softly in his own room, his voice barely picked up by the camera microphones.

"I know some basic warmups from hearing the musical actors' rehearsals so I'm mostly winging it." He explains to Gikwang.

"Do you think it will be enough to get the main vocal position?"

Woojin just shrugs. "Honestly? I don't really care that much. It's just a position after all."


The show picks up on day three around noon on the womens' side of the hallway.

Jisoo is once again practicing without the other four girls, but this time with some guidance from Minzy.

The rest of the team is sitting against the wall, draining water bottles and watching Jisoo's progress.

"Does that girl ever get tired?" Jinyi shakes her head in awe. "Three hours of workout this morning and then pretty much straight here and she's been non stop the entire time."

"Except when she helped Hadon with his makeup." Giri pipes up helpfully and Jinyi laughs.

"I don't think that was a break for any of the parties involved." She jokes cheerfully, finishing one bottle and grabbing for another. "I on the other hand feel like I've just found an oasis in the desert."

Myunghwa and Jinyoo both nod, too busy drinking to speak. Jinyi doesn't seem to mind maintaining conversation on her own though.

"I can't wait for tomorrow when we get another hour free to work on our personal talents. Speak of, are you two going to team up again?" The question is directed towards Myunghwa and Jinyoo.

Jinyoo glances uncertainly over at the younger contestant, but Myunghwa doesn't hesitate to nod confidently, which gets the oldest one smiling.

Jinyi nods as well. "Right then. Giri, you should join me then! And maybe we should grab Hadon too, make sure he actually does something this time." She grins slightly.

Giri looks awkward but she smiles. "Sure, that would be nice."

"Alright girls, break time is over, on your feet." Minzy interrupts any further chatter as she and Jisoo rejoin the group. "We're moving on from the basics today, so I hope you're recovered."

"I was not recovered." Giri announces in her interview.

Gikwang almost smiles as he responds. "I thought you were feeling better about dancing yesterday?"

"That was yesterday. Yesterday we were still learning basic moves. Today we actually put some of them together and it got really hard again." She slumps a bit in her chair.

Gikwang nods. "There's still time left in the week. I'm sure you'll get the hang of it soon."

The next several shots show all the girls getting the hang of things as each run through improves.

"Myunghwa don't worry so much about getting the spin exactly perfect, it's causing you to fall a quarter beat behind everyone else. And Jinyi, I know you're miserable but you need to smile." Minzy instructs.

"Smile, look y, exude charisma, I swear dancing is less about the actual dance and more about how you stare at the camera the way Minzy talks." Jinyi announces in her interview.

"Did you think that for idols that may actually be the case?" Gikwang points out.

Jinyi tilts her head in consideration. "I guess that does make sense. Well that's a relief then, I at dancing!"

The men are getting a similar lesson, though Rain has opted for a lecture format to explain it.

"Being a performer doesn't mean being the most talented singer or rapper or dancer. It's about how you present yourself onstage." He pauses to be sure they're all listening sparing a pointed glace to Hadon and Hanhae.

"Charisma is what you want to focus on. Being one with the song, showing the audience what they should be feeling and how they should be reacting. That's the difference between a backup dancer and an idol. Charisma."

"Charisma has lost all meaning now." Hanhae announces in his interview. "I get what he means though. He showed us a demonstration of a performance with and without it, and the without was really boring to watch." He grins. "Luckily I have plenty of charisma to spare."

"Among the boys Hanhae and Woojin are easily the best with stage presence." Rain states in his own sit down with Gikwang. "Woojin makes sense of course since he's an actor, but I admit Hanhae surprised me. He's mostly goofed off this week but when he focuses there's a lot of idol potential there." He pauses a moment to think before analyzing the other three.

"Eunchan does have the best dance technique, but he struggles with songs that aren't on the cheerful end of the spectrum. Hadon... I don't think he's really trying but I've seen him beatbox. I think he's capable of doing well if he applies himself. As for Akihiro..." He sighs. "He tries. I'll give him that. But it doesn't really come to him as easily as it does for the others."

Minzy's thoughts on the womens' progress isn't nearly as positive. "I'd say that Jisoo looks the best at the moment, but only because she's trained. She could definitely work as a backup dancer but her stage presence is heavily lacking. She leans too much on her skills." She sighs. "But like I said, she's still the best one. Myunghwa is so worried about the dancing she forgets to have any expression at all, Giri and Jinyoo both look like they're either terrified or confused, and Jinyi," She pauses, and then sighs heavily. "Jinyi actually isn't doing too badly."

Gikwang frowns. "I thought you said that Jisoo was the best in the group?"

Minzy gives a single-shoulder shrug. "She is. Jinyi is alright but what she has in confidence she lacks in everything else needed to be successful onstage. I think she's trying with her dancing, but she's not the most coordinated person I've met."

Her observation is backed up when the next clip shows Jinyi spinning into a wall.

She laughs as she rubs at her shoulder. "You'd think five times later I'd learn that was there." She jokes. It's noted in the corner than it's five in the afternoon on day five of the week, and the girls surprisingly look a bit less worn down than they had earlier in the episode.

Minzy sighs and pauses the music. "Alright that's all we have time for. Individual hour starts now so you girls can head out. Jisoo let's see if you can still land a triple pirouette today."

Jinyi leads the other four out of the room, still rotating her shoulder. "Why don't we wait for the guys? There's only one elevator so it makes more sense to share it." She suggests.

No one counters her proposal, and so she knocks on the door across the hall.

A moment later, it swings open to show a slightly abashed Rain. "I forgot again."

Jinyi laughs. "Maybe. We're here to steal half you men."

He shakes his head. "Jut two of them today. Hadon is staying with me since he's not using his hour properly." He turns back into the room. "Hiro, Woojin, you're dismissed."

A moment later the two join the girls in the hallway.

"'Hiro'?" Giri glances up at Akihiro, who shrugs.

"Just a nickname. Everyone comes up with it eventually."

Jinyi grins. "Well that's no wonder, 'Akihiro" is  mouthful." She proclaims, just as the elevator arrives and they pile in.

Back in the mens' dance room, Hanhae and Hadon have taken to dabbing at random around the room while Eunchan dies of laughter against one of the mirrors and Rain looks both irritated and amused.

"While I'm happy you two are putting in more effort into dancing, this isn't quite what I meant." He shakes his head, ducking towards the floor to hide a smile.

Hadon grins cheekily in his interview. "Well he said he wanted us to be more enthusiastic about dancing. So we were."

Hanhae is equally cheery when he gives his own version. "He didn't specify what to be enthusiastic about. Easy misunderstanding."

Eunchan is still giggling when it's his turn to recount events. "It was awesome! Hadon and Hanhae are really fun guys. Rain told them they'd need to put more energy into the afternoon rehearsal and Hadon just started dabbing really aggressively, and then Hanhae joined in! It was great." He giggles through the entire explanation, and Gikwang rolls his eyes.

"Of course they did."

Back in the dance room, Rain raises his voice to be heard over the commotion. "Alright. Alright this is fun but did you know that I get to decide when you go home?"

That causes the three to look at him and he grins innocently.

"So, say that I feel you've done quite well, we could potentially get back to the dorms early! Though if I don't..."

Hadon groans. "Fine, you make a good point. Let's go back to h*ll time."

On the floor below Jinyi is making good on her promise to Giri from the day before as she attempts to help the other rapper with her flow. There's a lot of stumbling and apologizing on Giri's part, but Jinyi remains quite patient with her pupil.

"Just breath and let things flow naturally. Rap is about finding your own style, a flow that fits you."

Giri is panting slightly as she listens, and she nods before trying again.

"Jinyi really knows a lot about this stuff." She sounds almost awed in her interview. "I mean, I couldn't find that much on the internet but she managed to teach herself." She then looks down, slightly embarrassed. "I guess a lot of people manage that actually."

The scene transitions into a montage of the final days of the week. Woojin and surprisingly Hanhae both show improvement in their dancing on the boys' side of things, but the girls mostly seem to remain the same. Hadon does drag Eunchan and Hanhae into another round of dabbing on the very last day of practices, and they even convince Rain to awkwardly do a dab of his own before the idol, blushing, orders them to continue their actual practice, which they, perhaps surprisingly, do.

The final hour of self-practice shows Jinyoo working by herself for the first time while Myunghwa practices with her guitar in a separate room. Hadon is sitting with Jinyi, looking bored as she lectures him about proper rapper and earning a light whack on the head for his troubles. Giri seems to be getting a bit more done in her own room but she's still clearly nervous.

The final scene reconvenes the group in the dorms at the end of the final day of the week.

"It's been fun working with you all this week! Hopefully you learned something, because it's only going to get harder from here." Minzy smiles despite the hint of threat lacing her words.

Rain is a bit more lenient, though just as serious. "You all have worked hard, but as Minzy has said this is only the tip of the iceberg. You'll need to keep your best foot forward with all your mentors from here on out, and I don't mean your dabbing foot Hadon." He adds, shooting a look at where the rapper is sitting with Hanhae, looking quite proud of himself.

"Now before we leave, there's one final task we have to do." Minzy clears .

Jisoo and Akihiro both lean forward slightly, but the rest are apparently unaffected by the dramatics.

"For the main dance position in the girls' team. Jisoo." Minnzy declares.

Jisoo looks thrilled despite the announcement having arguably been obvious.

"And as for the lead dancer," Minzy hesitates, and then sighs. "Jinyi. Despite your obvious reluctance, you have great stage presence. Put a bit more of the effort into your dancing and I do believe that you'll be properly worthy of this position by the end of the show."

Jinyi looks bemused in her interview. "I have to say, I didn't see that coming."

Rain is next. "I'll just say both at one. Eunchan, you'll be the main dancer for the guys. And for lead dancer, I believe Woojin can carry that title effectively."

Akihiro looks a bit disappointed, while Woojin almost appears surprised, but he quickly reverts back to his usual look of distant disinterest.

Minzy then nods with finality. "Well then, we'll end it there. Good luck you guys."

Jinyi gives a wry grin as their mentors exit for the last time. "Goodness knows we'll probably need it."

Next week on SuperStar BootCamp...

"There are still positions up for grabs."

Jongwoon narrates as a montage of the participants working with private vocal coaches is shown. Each individual shot reveals each participant being criticized heavily, with their reactions varying from stony indifference to Giri actually bursting into tears. The montage ends with group shots of the teams working on choreographies with their blurred out mentors for the week."

"I hope they know how to multitask, because this week is the start of the real training."

 

Author's Note.  And thus it begins! The remaining parts will be handed out next episode, and while some are obvious others may not be as much! Hopefully you enjoyed the chapter, and... yup. That's all I've got for this xD Have a nice week I suppose?

 
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kattirompa
#1
Chapter 16: Ahdlskdkdjfbsowosbc cmalsmdbfbcmals
UrangUtang
#2
Chapter 16: I AM NOT OKAY SEND HELP
UrangUtang
#3
Chapter 15: Aight let's do this, I promised you a last stream of conciousness and one you will get. Also I wasn't able to scream about the fact that you included Myunghwan but YOU INCLUDED MYUNGHWAN AND IT WAS BEAUTIFUL.

I love the fact that Jinyi downing coffee has been a constant for these 8 episodes. Oooh coffee mystery! Who made the mystery coffee? Jinyi's bromance with Hanhae points the finger to him, but that wouldn't be very surprising now would it? Hmmm. Hadon finally shaping up? He'd be the most surprising I think. But Woojin would be surprising to those who don't know him.

Omg this newfound JinSoo friendship is everything I didn't know I needed! Oh man the team has grown so much, they're actually a team now //wipes tear. I'm so proud of these babies ;A;

Aaah I thought it might be Woojin! HOLD UP. WOOJIN MADE A FRIEND. Well more like a friend was upon him but I'M COUNTING IT. Oh man I feel like Woojin got noticed by the most popular guy in class xD AW HADON AND FEELINGS. Oh no the fact that this is the end just hit me like a brick wall. Of course Hanhae is the best at body rolls oh my god I love that guy. "Sure I was blessed with this face" it's lines like that that make me love him omg. You teach that kid how to be y Hanhae.... well you tried.

"I am one with the youth" and lines like this is why I love Hadon. NOT JINYI'S PINK HAIR. I see it now, the Great Korean Bakeoff directed by Jungwoon starrng Jinyi as judge. AW Gikwang having fun ;A; Oh man this chapter is just filled with great lines and exchanges. DANI THIS IS MAKING ME SAD. Okay. Okay. The pink stayed. Phew. Aw Myunghwa honey and her sptretch marks ;A; HANINI. "I do declare that you are one y lady" AND THIS IS WHY I LOVE JINYI. Myunghwa you have been lesbian approved.

I have actually never listened to the Legend before, I only know it as the group with Kyungtaek's face xD It's a good song though they did good! And using nugus for them is actually really fitting since nugus often miss that bit of polish that other groups have. I will be adding this song to my music library yes. Aaaw GROUP HUGS I CANNOT HANDLE.

NEXT. Ah I get the y performance comments now that was definitely something xD Oh man I'll miss these guys too SO MUCH. I will give you some feedback/critique at some point when thesis stops looming, but it will be done! We've been through so much with these heads I look forward to the afterword and what happened to them!
HelloKitty10755
#4
Chapter 14: UGH I am so late with this comment! I sincerely apologize for not commenting earlier and for not commenting at all recently. Let's just say that personal life hasn't been the most forgiving the past few weeks. But anyways, let's get on with it.

So I read this chapter Sunday morning at like 1:00 and I was close to dying because this chapter was the best and I was trying so hard not to laugh too loud XD But SOMI! She's such a cutie, and to tell you the truth, I personally did not like her at first glance, but I've been starting to like her a lot more now that I've been giving her a chance.

Jisoo is actually attempting to dance in heels? So shocking! XD And "I'm basically the lead vocal now" haha keep boosting you ego Jisoo. Awww poor Giri, actually missing Jinyoo and Myunghwa taking on the leadership role. If she doesn't get the leader role, I will be really really mad.

Akihiro, dude, you need to lighten up a bit more. Stop being so serious and at least attempt to do a body roll! Haha he's the best. I'm betting Jisoo is so relieved right now. Actual high heels that have a stable heel instead of those ridiculous stiletto heels. At least she'll feel more attached to the ground now!

Yes! Improv again! The girls did such a good job. OMG! Jisoo had me completely dying with her acting skills! "Oppa! Annyeong Oppa I'm your biggest fan!" had me dying and her next few sentences had me sold! Jinyi has the best ideas and along with Jisoo, they would make a really good variety duo together. I want Jisoo to go in to acting now. She's golden! Awww, I wanted to see the guys try to improv. I wanted to see Akihiro and Woojin make fools of themselves (not like that would ever happen)

Such a cute fanmeeting. Hanhae and Jinyi make a good flirty duo, of course that's what Korean fans want to see on tv and they sell it really well. Oh and Jisoo's line "Hadon even managed it on his own!" is great and Hadon silently rolling his eyes.
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UrangUtang
#5
Chapter 13: You know when a chapter is called scandals that this is going to be good. Oh and also //whispers: shay y p.

Huh I guess Hanhae is a bit like Myunghwan isn't he? Aka a handfull xD Oh my god those flirt lines I am cringing what is life. Oh he has a blog! Interesting. I've always found it odd that modern dance is called modern dance, how long does it stay modern? What if it becomes oldfashioned? Will it be oldfashioned dance? Is it post-modern dance already??? Things that keep me up at night.

Oooh Woojin and Jinyoo, that's a pairup I did not anticipate but is very interesting. But yeah they're team quiet I don't forsee long discussions xD WOAH WOOJIN BIT BACK I AM SO PROUD OF MY CHILD. That was such a bull thing of Akihiro to say, I mean in character but son get off your high horse. I mean don't because conflict but also ugh I do not like you. But also thank you show for taking pity on my child. WOAH HANHAE. WERK IT. "Hwanhee pauses the music in the middle of Hadon dabbing" is a perfect sentence that should be framed. Aaaw Myung is coming out of her rigid controlling shell I am such a proud mom right now MY CHILDREN ARE DEVELOPING //wipes away tear.

You're also making me so curious about the songs they're doing!

Oh Akihiro. Now you jynxed it.

Oh man I do love how WOOJIN COMING FOR YOUR POSITIONS is now a thing, though clearly Hanhae is coming this time. WOAH MAIN VOCAL. Did not see that coming. WOOJIN CAME FOR THAT POSITION. Saaame Hadon. SAME. I'm surprised Woojin kept the lead dance position, but not that Hanhae got bumped up. Good for you flirty manchild, you earned it. Nobody got downgraded, this is all very positive. I don't trust it.

Now as for the ladies. Aw Giri! You go Giri! HOLY YOU GO JINYI. Aaand here comes the downgrades. That's not going to bode well for the JinSoo conflict. Oh geez Myunghwa you tried.

JO

KWON.

MY LOVE.

DANI YOU CAN'T JUST SPRING JO KWON AT ME. YOU HAVE TO WARN ME OH MY GOD.

Oooh I don't know much about Ivy but the way you've described her she's already a woman after my own heart.

"You'll state something about yourself that you think no one else in the group can relate to." Oh the dramatic irony. Oh how it hurts me. Also IVY TAKING NO PRISONERS. "with a face this ethereal it was an easy mistake but still." Have I mentioned that I love this guy yet because oh my god. Okay but don't make me laugh and cry in the same breath oh my god Dani you have too much power. My child. The contrast between the liberal Hanhae and the, well, conservative Woojin is an interesting one though. I wonder how much Hanhae could mean for Woojin if seeds of friendship were planted, and if Woojin would be comfortable enough to let it. Hmmm. I hadn't pondered these two together much yet before now, Hanhae was always more laughs and dabs, but that contrast tho. Woojin my child, I'm not kidding every single time he's mentioned my heart hurts. Why did I make Woojin Dani? Why did I aim to hurt us? Aaaw Jinyoo getting positive attention for her KSL ;A;

Leave to Jo Kwon to bring peace and sunshine where he goes okay. I am not biased at all. Not at all. Take your baseless accusations elsewhere!

Ah of course Jinyi is the master of redirection, I imagine she's had quite the bit of practice. Of course the rivalry with Jisoo is friendly. Of course it is. Why wouldn't it be? Also not surprised to see Hanhae thriving here. Oh no personal but also /oh yes personal/.

"We'll be starting by reading you a few comments made by netizens."

Now everyone looks terrified.

Wise response.

OH NO JINYOO. I can handle anyone being shat on but NOt JINYOO. Would fight for this turtle! Oh no. Oh no these scenarios. This cannot go well. I am getting the anxieties this cannot go well. Edge of seat is my state of being. Also what comment was that Woojin? WOOJIN. D A N I W H Y.

Okay. Okay I'm not ready but bring it on anyway.

OMG JINYI. Did not handle well is an understatemen omg my love. This didnt hurt yet. Luring us into a false sense of security are we Dani? I know the game. I've played this game damnit. Oh no there's nothing sadder than leaving someone hanging.

JINYOO. JINYOO NO.

I'm curious about everyone's scenarions, what they chinks they found and how they dealt with them, but I also understand why you didn't show them. Oh a Gold guy! I wonder who it'll be! Oh man I miss those idiots <3 Either way this was a really good chapter, as you could probably tell by my overemotional rambling, oh man I was on the edge of my seat through most of it! Thank you <3
kattirompa
#6
Chapter 11: Ohh this episode hurt my soul. It really did. It made me actually angry. I mean...I get the whole give them a external enemy to focus on. Get them to rally together and be a unified front. I get it. But I do not condone these kinds of tactics. Had the girls not been able to rally, Taeyeon's actions would probably have just destroyed them, and they very well would have left the show. And then JTBC would be screwed. XD (this is not a commentary on your writing btw: it's lovely. But these are things I see in reality shows too, like biggest loser and such, and they piss me off just as much XD). Fortunately, this did not happen. I don't recall reading this if the girls ever stood up for themselves more, or if they developed some understanding and respect for Taeyeon during this episode. Hmm...but regardless, it's great that they could get around their differences to help each other. I hope this momentum keeps going, and hopefully this will mean the girls will continue to grow some bonds that will see them through the show. /crosses fingers/ The highlight was Giri feeling like she could rely on the others. I'm glad they could rally around her, and taking care of her like a real group. And Im equally glad she found some strength in herself for this. She's going to need it.

The boys...well this was interesting. It wasn't infighting the boyd had to deal with. It was control. And I feel that Leeteuk handled it well...granted, I don't like the tactics much more than Taeyeons, but at the end there was some genuine concern and understanding. Also, the insight into Woojin though. That fracture that is forming. WOOJINNIE. I was wondering about all of this lead this, lead that, add this, add that, and how it would be affecting him. The plot thickens Dani. It thickens so much. But you needed that little bit of break there to keep this groups development going. And I approve, and look so forward to seeing what happens. (I noticed Jinyi is also still getting vocal lessons too...Dani...what are you plotting.../sideyes you cautiously/

But this chapter is fantastic. It got a real reaction out of me, and it showed some wonderful development of these characters. Me gusta.
kattirompa
#7
Chapter 10: Okay, this one is going to be more of a commentary on what happened than a long comment on each event.

This chapter really showed the beginning of the boiling point being reached: at least for the girls. For the boys, there's enough flippants, devil may care, and optimism to keep them from going to crazy at their mistakes just yet. And poor S.Coups. That has to be frustrating for him since they are willful and can sorta of bully their way. They even bullied Rain into dabbing with them lol. Hadon, Hanhae, and Eunchan are really forces of nature in the group. Woojin is more of the silent pillar. And poor Hiro has to be the adult. Lol. But congrats to the leads! Even if they are reluctant. XDD Yes Hanhae...they just gave you lead because what else are you going to do...but the last vhapter showed he may have what it takes to be center, and that is very important in the group. There is some bristling with the boys, but dayuuum, not to the extent of the girls.

That boiling point of the Ji-Ji fighting. Wow. You hinted at it a lot in the last chapter, and here is the result. Jisoo...sweetie, be careful. You may be here to train, but alienating others won't do you any good. I'm glad Giri does like her. And Giri...sweet, sweet child. This is going to be a rough ride for you for certain. And I do appreciate that you show Jinyi is just as wrong in her fight with Jisoo too. Sure, she tries to care a bit and Jisoo may have taken it the wrong way, but Jinyi definitely is not as patient as the other ladies to respond accordingly. So many boiling over emotions culminating in Myunghwa just crying. Sigh. These girls are a mess. It almost feels like you need to get these groups together as a co-ed group soon. They seem very unbalanced in some ways. Its like...too much of one personality type on one side and it overpowers the others so they're not as complete. But it does present an intetesting dynamic, and I am still enjoying the ride immensely.

Poor mentors. XD Again though, they may not fully realize these are people off the street. Of COURSE they'll be difficult and tiring to work with. Plus you're accelarating this training. They literally have no time to adjust. Aigooo...I know the next chapter hurts my soul too. But that comment comes later! I WILL CATCH UP WITH THESE!!
kattirompa
#8
Chapter 9: Oh lordy we have dance lessons now XD. And I love how you've been writing Jinyi. That "coffee" over and over again...I feel this so much. X3 Poor Giri: no one should have to suffer sleeping in the same bed as Jinyi. You poor, poor soul...
Is Jinyoo about to use sign language? Is that why her hands fluttered before she could speak? Hmm...and Jisoo...you're feels are showing. Silly child lol. But yes Hadon. 30 minutes. Some girls take hours (some guys too!). Tsk, tsk, Hanhae. I see you there flirting with Jinyi. But I love it. And Hiro don't be such a sourpuss. They're young and having fun. No sense in making your entire exprience here on the show miserable if you can get a little bit of levity in.
Ahhh, the broship continues. One of my favorite things to read here. X3 I get the feeling if Hiro is team dad, Myungwa sorta fits team mom.
The beginning of the Ji-Ji headbutting begins!! Don't be too insulted Jisoo! Jinyi is older than you and has adulting to worry about! Onwards to glory Jinyi!! lol. She would be the one who just throws open a door. Oooh. Minji. Certainly the girl is known for her dancing. This will be interesting. And I can feel Minzy on this. There were certainly some good dancers in the tryouts. It is nice to see Jisoo so excited for dancing. She has that youthful energy the others, while not lacking, don't always showcase. But I get it. With that energy comes that cockiness, and Jinyi ain't having yo child. /keeps watching the Ji-Ji battle warm up/

And then we also have bouncy energy pill Eunchan. These two bring such good energy to this. IT'S RAIN!!!...Ing. It's raining~ /bricked/ Ahem. Rain was one of the originals known for his dancing. Another good choice. Also if he could somehow impart his charisma to these boys, dayuuuum.

WOOJIN COMING IN. This child. Can he not do something? I mean...really. Woojin is my hero. Truly. And he's so cool about it too~ /kattiisawoojinfansorrynotsorry/ But this lead thing is really turning up the competition. Interesting insight on how much infighting there could be. I mean...its obvious when there's a main dancer, but the lead is just sometimes the one who least. XD

Yass Hadon. Call out the fangirl Jisoo. XD That smirk though...girl, Jisoo watch yourself. I like your smugness, but be careful. This could burn you later. That realization of Myunghwa...oh no. That must hurt her soul so much to realize this. It sorta makes sense that Jinyoo and Myunghwa would get along, or at least gravitate more to each other. They're both vocalists and even if not friends, are older and "wiser" in some ways.
...awww...Hiro...;; so sweet...doing this for his wife /coughiknowsomeoneontheshowwhocouldprobablyempathizewiththatsentimentsenor/

"Apparently the kid hasn't burned anything down yet, which I admit is impressive." She laughs lightly as the scene switches yet again."...this is so very Jinyi. I still love how you are writing her here. X3 I love this interaction of the ladies though. Shows some of the group dynamics very well. You go Jinyi. Get them rappers in line!! lol.

This contrast of skill versus stage presense is so true though. You can forgive a less skilled performance if its enteratining and earnest.

I like how you're showing the improvement and development, as well as understanding with these characters. The moments where they realize the hard work that is needed, and that its not what it seems. And then discovering things about each other. Ie: The broship are great fun, Jinyi actually knows things, Myunghwa;s willingsness to help, etc. It's all a delight to read in the midst of the training and interactions. You're subtley teaching us about these characters. Me gusta. (and the dabbing...XDD)

The positions...Jisoo was obvious. Jinyi...that's hilarious. XDD Good luck my child!! XDD
WOOJIN SWOOPING IN! XDD I find it funny the maknaes are the dancers. How did that just happen to work out? (or was this purposeful...hmm...)
kattirompa
#9
Chapter 8: EP 2 LEGGO – I lost the first one I did...I had like...fpur chapter commentaries done. T^T THIS TIME I SAVED ON SEPARATE WORD DOC! TAKE THAT INTERNET OUTTAGE!!! Anyhoo, I'l lbe aiming to finish one chapter a day and by the next update I SHOULD be caught up!!...note the word "SHOULD". Siiiigh....

Ooooh. Room arrangments. Always a good time.Ahhh, the first "friendship" beings: The Double H broship. And the Jinyi/Jisoo antagonism also begins. It's a different feeling rereading these chapters to comment after knowing what happens in the future. This should prove to be an interesting. And yes, there;s team dad Akihiro emerging already. Wow, seriously though, these little things you don;t realize until rereading. Oh Eunchan...Eunchan are you doing the whole "pull the girl's pigtails" thing? Enjoying the debate? This child I sweat. X3

ENTER SUZY. Oh, Hi L. XDD

Yess Suzy. Behold the glory that is the pink hair of Jinyi!! XD But aww, L is being a least a little considerate. I mean, you did just throw a bunch of strangers ina room and expected them to work these things out. I feel for these girls...I do. Workouts are the worst. Especially ones you are obligated to do as opposed to doing it for your own benefits/fun. Jinyi is me...except after only 30 minutes. XD
The Double H Broship conitnues@ Poor Eunchan. It's tough being the maknae child. Hanhae...it's caleld "sharing a bed", not a cuddling thing. XD All of these chars play well off each other so far which is enjoyable to read.

...THESE MACHINES ARE A LIE!!! /katti may or may not have had to use one of these at a gym and is now having traumatic flashbacks of the horror of her readings/ DX

I agree so much with Jinyoo. Losing that much wait, "safe" or not, can;t be easy or good for you in the short time they have. Also, these folks are in different age and physical fitness levels. You would need to truly tailor the regime to each one (frankly, it's doubtful they will DX). Nd I see you there Dani. The girls are UNDER 40 percent....but the giys can get away with being more muscles and bigger. Sigh...double standards you s.

Hahaha, yes, be jealous of Woojin boys. Because he's not only gonna outdo you all for fitness...hegonnacomeforallyourpositionsspoilers!!! I like Ahreum. That's a perfect way to get someone into the routine: distract them with something they are passionate about. And it;s nice to hear Jinyoo talk about her work. It really is a commendable thing.

"How do people do this without stabbing their eyes out?" Hadon groans as he attempts to shakily apply eyeliner. Pahahaha. Practice child. Practice. Just don't get mascara in your eye if ypu're wearing contacts. /katti has more flashbacks of that one time and how she refused mascara for months after that...shudder/ Hadon speaking truths already. Why indeed would anyone want to become an idol? A lesson I'm sure you and the others will learn by the end.
WOOJIN SWOOPING IN TO TAKE YOUR MAKEUP SKILLS. XD And Hanhae's reason is legit. Shameless, but legit.

...
Sigh. Working on "delicacy"...that just.../katti vomits at the concept/. But it's a real thing. The standards the females are held at are vastly different from the men based on the gender specific roles and stereotypes. It's sad really. But that's how society is still. Anyhoo...alas.

But legit. Ballroom dancing is an art. It is so hard to do it well. Counting, movement, precise movements, aghhhhh. But when done well, it's so beautiful to watch~ And I appreciate you showing that even the dancer is having issues with this. Shows that just because you can dance one way, doesn't mean you can dance every way.

I see your foreshadowing. I see you in the form of Bae Suji. /cackles and rubs her hands together
UrangUtang
#10
Chapter 12: //whispers: Shay Y P.

Ah yes. Female idol fashion. Not for the prudes amongst us. Oh man I will never get sick of smooth Hanhae and teasing Jinyi xD Best broship of the show so far. Oh man yeah those dresses are short wow. It was a messy performance but it was cute, which is perfect for their level. Certainly not good in any way, but also not a total disaster xD Aaaw Myunghwa!

Aaah B1A4! Woojin coming for all your positions makes sense now since CNU is annoyingly decent at everything xD And Sandeul (main vocal) looks so awkward too hanini. You sing great sweet thing but dance great is another matter entirely. Though I think my favourite part of the performance is the stage hands running on the main stage while they're in the little circle xD Aaw my other child did good too <3 And Hanhae SON. Stay in your lane omg.

YOOK SUNGJAE. HANI. I mean. I'm okay. I'm not okay. HOW DARE YOU TARGET MY WEAKNESSES. Of course Hanhae knows BtoB. I knew I liked you for a reason Hanhae. You have good taste. Hah Woojin you had better appreciate them you sing like one fo them xD

Oooh original songs huh? Very interesting. Jinyi: same tho. Hani is amazing. Also "yes, and" is never going to sound the same again. Oooh I've played Freeze before it's fun! Ah Woojin, my child, your theatre hipster is showing xD

Hanhae, son, you're walking a tightrope here. Oh I've played Hitchiker before too! Why is that so exciting? xD You're making me miss my high school acting class. Aaaaw seeing Giri let loose is so heartwarming omg honey. Improv has a way of loosening people up as long as they're open to it. Jinyi, Jinyi babe. Same. Same tho. S A M E. Oh no Jinyoo. Jinyoo sweet thing ;A; ...... I SEE THAT MENTION OF MYUNGHWAN. He IS gold. Little of my heart okay. BUT JINYOO CHILD. And Woojin child. Muted child. You still hurt me and give me a heart attack every time you're mentioned. SO MANY FEELINGS.

I can see why this chapter was hard for you to write. It had a lot of things that are irregular, acting exercized require you to improv for everyone else and it's not something that's come up in your other fics before. It'd be hard for me to write too. But you made it through and it was an excellent chapter, one subtly exploring many an character while the humour takes center stage and covers it up. Obvious things like Jinyoo's struggles, but also less obvious things like Woojin's conspicuous struggles with improv despite being an actor, Giri's slow loosening up and coming into her own, and Hanhae's stubborn sticking to his own guns with little regard for the consequences. Interesting things happening in the background and I ever look forward to more <3