Episode One

SuperStar BootCamp ☆ Do You Have What It Takes To Be A Star?
 

   The Auditions

"Hello hello and welcome to the final auditions for JTBC's very own Super Star Boot Camp! Today twenty hopefuls will take to the stage to show us what they've got, and ten of them will be chosen to spend the next two months learning what it's like for idol trainees! Can they hold up under the pressure or will they fall apart? My name is Kang Jongwoon, and we're here to find out!"

The man speaking is a short, excitable man in what appears to be his mid thirties. He stands centerstage in the JTBC auditorium used for Girl Spirit and he gestures emphatically as he speaks.

"Before we bring out our first hopeful, let's meet today's judges! Ladies first!"

The scene shifts into a montage as a more professional-sounding announcer introduces the first judge.

"Appearing on the KPop scene with a splash almost seventeen years ago, this super star has remained one of the shining beacons of the KPop world since her debut at a mere thirteen years old. Representing SM Entertainment, Kwon Boah!"

The scene cuts back to the auditorium as BoA enters the judges' box. She gives the camera and audience a wave and a warm smile.

The image shifts again to an interview with the star.

"I think this show is a wonderful idea. Training to be an idol is tough, and actually being one can sometimes be even harder. It's a great idea to bring that effort to the forefront of viewers' attention." She smiles again as the scene transitions to a new montage.

The serious announcer is back to introduce the second judge.

"Starting out in a group, this accomplished musician struggled at the start of his career, but found great success as a soloist. Wanting to give other musical hopefuls a chance to shine he created his own company to train idols, and his label currently houses several successful groups, including the current top girl group TWICE! Announcing the one and only Park Jinyoung of JYP!"

Jinyoung enters the judge box as the scene changes back to the auditorium. He flashes a grin and a wink to the camera, and greets BoA warmly as he settles into the seat next to her.

"I'm quite excited to help audition the participants for this show!" He says in his interview. "I've seen a few older contestants waiting backstage and working in an industry that prefers youth I'm really curious to see if an increased age will affect someone's ability to survive the intensity of idol training."

To reflect his point, a few older contestants are shown in the waiting room, stretching and running vocal warmups with a blurred-out instructor.

Again a montage starts up and the announcer introduces the final judge.

"Starting his career in the nineties and becoming a musical icon of his time, this enterprising man started up his own company when his group broke up after four successful years. He's produced legendary groups that dominate the industry and are loved by Kpop fans and casual music listeners alike. Please welcome Yang Hyunsuk!"

The YG CEO's entrance into the judge's box is much more professional, and he merely nods in greeting to the other two occupants. Both smile and nod back, and JYP relaxes back into his seat getting himself comfortable.

"I've worked with both BoA and Jinyoung in judging in the past, but this will certainly be a different experience. I look forward to seeing what today's performers will bring." He's short but polite in his interview, and scene finally returns to Jongwoon who's still bouncing slightly on the balls of his feet. Once he's given the signal he launches eagerly into his next segment.

"Now I'm sure you're all excited to see our contestants, I know I am! But first I'll need your attention for just a bit longer to explain how the performances and judging will go!" He grins happily straight to camera.

"We'll be starting with our youngest contestants and going up the ages so our eldest will be performing at the end! Judges, you'll get to make one comment about each performance. You can say if you liked it, if you didn't, or anything in particular you want to point out to the performer themself. And then we'll move to the next contestant!" He pauses for a quick breath. "Well then, with that out of the way let's get to our first contestant! Please welcome seventeen year old Kim Kwonhee!"

Kwonhee is smiling widely as he walks on, looking absolutely starstruck.

The scene changes to an interview with the contestant, and this time the interviewer is visible. He's labelled as Choi Gikwang and he's an intense looking man who appears much taller than Kwonhee as they sit across from one another.

"Do you think you'll be able to handle the tough conditions of training?" Gikwang's voice is deep, and it's clear that he gave the introductions for the judges at the start of the episode.

Kwonhee looks momentarily uncertain. "Oh, I do'nt know." After a moment though a hopeful smile springs onto his face. "But I want to try. I want to see what it's like to live a tottally other life, you know?"

It cuts back to Gikwang. "What do you think your best skill is?"

"I can b-boy!" He says with a proud grin. "Everyone in the village says I'm the best b-boyer they've ever seen!"

"And is there anything else you'd like to say?"

Kwonhee turns and waves excitedly at the camera. "Hi mom! I'm on TV!"

At first the audience is distracted, but once Kwonhee starts to b-boy he catches their attention, and when he finishes he gets a respecatble amount of applause.

JYP however, is not impressed. "That was fine but it was clear you were supposed to sing along, which you didn't. Know your limits."

Kwonhee bows in acknowledgement.

YG seems to agree. "You weren't bad for a beginner, but that's not excuse to get overconfident. Because of the lacking back track vocals the performance seemed somewhat weaker than it should have."

BoA cuts him a bit more slack. "I wasn't sure what to expect at the start, but you really impressed me when you started B-boying!"

Smiling sweetly Kwonhee allows himself to be shooed off by Jongwoon, who proceeds to introduce the next competitor."

"Hailing all the way from Geoje Island, let's welcome eighteen year old Gi Eunchan!"

He waves someone on from the wings and a tall boy with strawberry blond hair bounds out, waving cheerfully to the judges and then to the audience who cheer.


"Hello!" He calls happily, and it seems he wants to say more but Jongwoon whispers something to him and he nods and stands center stage, bouncing slightly as he waits for his music to start.

"So what made you want to audition for the show?" Gikwang questions.

Eunchan smiles brighty. "The show's got everyone on the island excited, but it's like that American movie..." he trails off for a moment, thinking hard, before remembering the title. "The Hunger Games." His English is heavily accented, but he grins proudly. "I volunteered as tribute because nobody else on the island could handle it."

Gikwang is unphased by the odd response. "What do you think your best skill is?"

Eunchan has shifted in his seat as the camera returns to him. "Just like Katniss with her bow and arrow, that's dancing for me. People on the island would beg me to dance and perform for them every day." He gives a little shrug, his smile still firmly in place.

"And is there anything else you'd like to say?"

Eunchan perks up. "To the people watching?" His smile seems to grow brighter, if that's possible, and he spins to look at the camera directly, waving excitedly. "Hello, everyone! I'm Gi Eunchan, tribute from Geoje Island! I'll be here to win everyone over."

Eunchan looks like he's having the time of his life as he dances, smiling happily even when he makes a few missteps and lipsyncing along to the song. In the judge box BoA is grinning as well, and when he finishes she claps along with the spectators.

"That was so much fun! You're a delight to watch." She compliments the teen, and he beams at her.

"Thank you noona!"

YG is less impressed. "You've never had a second of dance lessons in your life have you?" Is his only gruff comment.

Eunchan shrugs. "We're here to learn, right?" He's still smiling brightly, undeterred by the critisism.

JYP has to think a moment before he speaks. "I was actually impressed that you could lipsync and dance at the same time. I know some idols who can't do that."

Eunchan is beaming again but before he can reply Jongwoon bundles him off the stage and begins to introduce the next contestant.

"Our next performance sees our first rapper of the night! Let's give  a warm welcome to eighteen year old Kim Jungmin!"

Jungmin is entering the stage before his introduction is even complete. There's an air of over confidence to him but he looks completely at home on the stage.

"What would you say your best skill is?" Gikwang asks as though he's afraid of the answer.

Jungmin smirks and gestures to himself in a clear everything gesture.

Gikwang sighs. "I'm afraid to ask, but what do you think your worst is?"

Jungmin barks out a laugh. "I'm too awesome."

Gikwang rubs tiredly at his temples. "Right."

The scene switches back to the stage as Jungmin begins to rap.

The crowd is thrilled at the end of his performance, and Jungmin takes his time listening to the applause before looking towards the judges.

YG is quite impressed. "That was very well done. Are you underground?"

Jungmin laughs. "Hell no. This is all me."

BoA was about to give her thoughts, but at hs tone she frowns and seems to change her mind. "It was fine but that attitude of yours could get you into trouble."

He scoffs. "Nothing wrong with confidence."

She shakes her head but says nothing else.

JYP looks a bit awkward. "I think you did pretty well myself. Good job?"

Jungmin flahses another grin. "Of course it was."

Jongwoon has a harder time shooing Jungmin of the stage, but he eventually succeeds and begins his next introduction.

"Up next we have an eighteen year old singer. He's a music major and composer, please welcome Han Minam!"

There's a pause, and then a young man stumbes onto the stage. He's wearing a blindfold and large headphones, and the camera shows several people in the audience looking bemused or snickering.

Gikwang is similarly unimpressed in the interview

"Why did you audition for the show?" The question is borderline accusatory Minam looks like he wants the floor to swallow him.

"...I....I was.... my friend... my b...best friend... convinced me t-to join. I thought...it would be... a good...experience...and...fun..maybe?...nevermind..."

"You thought singing in front of people and being followed around by cameras all day would be fun." Gikwang reiterates in clear disbelief.

Minam looks like he's going to cry.

Gikwang sizes up the contestant, and then sighs. "Look, you can go. I think we've got what we-"

Minam is out the door before he's even finished speaking and Gikwang sighs heavily.

He's a bit stiff as he sings, and there's a clear lisping in his words, but his voice remains steady and he gets a respectable amount of applause when he finishes. He takes a nervous breath and then pulls the headphones down around his neck and tugs off the blindfold to nervously glance up at the judges, clearly avoiding looking at the audience.

BoA glances at the other two before she speaks. "That was quite nice, you have a soothing voice."

Minam smiles shyly but otherwise doesn't respond.

JYP is less kind. "Honestly it was hard to pay attention when I was trying to figure out what was with the getup."

Minam blushes and looks down but againg gives no verbal reply.

YG eyes him critically for a moment, and then gives his thoughts. "If you have such severe stage fright why are you here?"

It's not accusatory, but Minam shrinks back apologetically, finally mumbling a small "sorry" before Jongwoon swoops in to resuce him, herding him off the stage.

Without missing a beat Jongwoon continues to the next performnce.

"Up next we have our first lady of the night! Ryu Yuuji is twenty years old  and enjoys busking in her free time with friends! Let's give her some love!"

The audience applauds as Yuuji bounces out, waving and blowing kisses.

The lights dim slightly and she calms down as her music begins to play.

The audience listens enraptured as she sings, and the subsequent applause is interspersed with whistles and loud cheers.

Smiling modestly Yuuji turns expectantly towards the judges.

This time JYP starts. "I feel like I know you from somewhere."

Yuuji shrugs modestly. "I was a trainee at Starship for three years so maybe from that?"

As she speaks the three judges begin to frown. The camera cuts to Jongwoon who has a look of mixed confusion and annoyance. He hurries onto the stage, signaling to the judges to hold their comments.

"I'm so sorry everyone but there seems to have been a mistake in screening. Yuuji if you could make your way offstage Gikwang will explain everything to you."

Confused and clearly hurt Yuuji does as instructed while Jongwoon apologizes to the audience once again.

There's a brief cut to Gikwang and Yuuji.

"You see, this show is only for people with no experience as idol trainees, therefore you aren't qualified to participate. I apologize that we didn't catch this earlier but you will have to leave."

Back onstage Jongwoon is attempting to regain order. "Alright! Alright that was quite an unfortunate oversight but wasn't it a lovely performance?"

The audience cheers and he has them again.

"Well get ready for more! Up next we have the lovely Ahn Jisoo! Turning twenty-one next week, Jisoo is currently studying to be a doctor! Let's see what she's got!"

His excitement is infectious and the audience roars approval as Jisoo strides onto the stage, the image of confidence.

"Do you think you'll be able to handle the tough conditions of training?" Gikwang prompts in her interview.

She shrugs modestly. "I'm pretty sure that I can endure this. If you've ever had to study for school around the clock without much sleep, you kind of get use to it after a while. So I'm pretty sure I can handle this."

"Is there anything in particular that you're worried about?"

She thinks for a moment, and then grimaces. "I'm worried that my parents will think I'm crazy for doing something like this and get mad at me. I know that they think that doing this kind of entertainment is just rubbish, but I want to show them that I am capable of doing this and that I can get something out of this even if I don't make it to the end." She then pauses and adds, in a lighter tone, "Oh! And hopefully they will never get me to dance in high heels. Those are too difficult to dance in." She pulls a face at the camera, and then laughs lightly.

Back onstage, Jisoo smiles charismatically to the front row, and then launches straight into her performance.

It's short but has the crowd going wild as it finishes. The dance is sharp and her aura is full of charisma. She finishes flawlessly and tosses a wink to one of the viewers before turning to the judges for their thoughts.

BoA laughs lightly. "Tell me you aren't a trainee as well, because that was some professional leve dancing!"

Jisoo laughs. "No ma'am, just a lot of hard work and dance lessons!"

YG goes next. "Your stage charisma is impressive for a rookie."

Jisoo doesn't reply verbally this time, but nods in thanks, her eyes gleaming.

JYP shrugs. "I honestly don't have anything to add other than nice song choice."

The audience laughs as Jisoo gives a curtsey and heads off without Jongwoon's prompting as the host introduces the next performer.

"Up next we have a foreign contestant! Originally from China, please welcome twenty-one year old Zhou Lei!"

The applause is a bit muted as Lei walks onstage, and he looks a bit shy as he waits for his music to start.

The audience gets more excited as the song starts, and Lei is mostly solid through the performance, though his rapping gets breathy towards the end. The applause aterwards is a bit louder than it had been before he performed but some audience members are clearly still not impressed with the foreigner.

The judges however hold no hostility as they give their thoughts.

"I admit I wasn't expecting you to rap! You look to squishy to be a rapper!" BoA's words are clearly meant to be positive but Lei frowns slightly.

"It was good to try and dance and rap simeultaneously but it's clear that you're untrained in any sort of breath control." YG critiques. Lei is less efected by this and he merely nods in acknowledgement.

JYP rounds out the judge's thoughts. "It was good but you need charisma for a song like that and that isn't really something you have. Good effort though!"

Again Lei simply nods and heads offstage as Jongwoon reappears from the wings.

Gikwang's interview question comes in before the image of him and Lei sitting across from each other does.

"Do you think you can handle the intensity of training?"

Lei nods softly. "I'm used to such stuff, you know, I have a strict schedule of working out and training... It will be fine, if I don't get called out for an emergency." He gives a small, breathy laugh. "Even though I took a vacation from work, when a big disaster happens they will still need me, you know... That's the life of a fireman, after all..."

Gikwang nods absently, and then pauses, looking up from his notes. "Wait, so you haven't really taken time off of work then. If a call came in right now you would leave?"

Lei looks slightly startled by the change of tone but he nods after a moment. "Of course. If people need saving I'll save them." He smiles warmly, but falters when he notices Gikwang's frown.

"I see. Well then you can leave. Don't bother waiting with the others."

Lei sits motionlessly in the seat for a moment, clearly stunned, before his expression morphs into one of pure anger.

"Excuse me? What the hell? I'm a triple threat performer and you're just kicking me out because I want to help people?"

Giwang is unmoved by Lei's fury, though he does wave a security guard into the camera's view. "The others are putting their jobs completely on hold to focus on training. If you can't do the same then you have no right to be here. You ca't run off in the middle of a rehearsal when your teammates are counting on you. Therefore, you are ineligible to be on this show. Thank you for your time."

Lei starts to argue but the scene cuts back to Jongwoon before anything can be heard.

"Up next we have another lady dancer! Indroducing Han Ahreum, a twenty-three year old law major at SNU!"

Ahreum comes out pulling a chair along with her. She nods and smiles to the judges and crowd before setting up the chair and standing in her starting position, waiting for her music cue. Her interview comes in before the performance as usual.

"What would you say your best skill is?"

Ahreum lights up and responds immediately, a smile bright on her face. "Dancing! I've still got room to improve but I can assure you that dancing is my charm point. I think that's where I get my confidence from."

"And your worst?" Gikwang prompts.

Ahreum takes longer to answer this time, thinking hard before replying. "I would say singing probably. I only ever sing in the shower and a lot of people tell me I sing out of tune." She gives a small laugh. "Can't say I disagree with them either."

The performance is short but appropriately sensual and several of the male audience members shout their approval both during and after the dance is finished.

JYP is applauding heartily along with the audience, and he's the first to give his thoughts once it's quiet enough to be heard.

"Wonderful dancing! You have room to improve but you fit the song perfectly!"

Ahreum grins and shoots him a wink which he pretends to catch.

BoA shakes her head in mild amusement at the exchange. "It was short but I concur that you did a good job with matching your expressions to the song."

Ahreum nods thankfully and then looks to YG.

"Honestly it was too short for me to really get any idea of what you're capable of." He's bluntly honest, and Ahreum chews her lip, frowning lightly.

Jongwoon ushers her offstage a moment later and returns to hyping up the audience. "Up next we have a school teacher! Everyone be on your best behavior!" He jokes. "Introducing twenty-three year old Son Hyemi!"

Hyemi bounces out onto the stage with a bright smile, waving excitedly and looking like she's absolutely thrilled to be there. She blows a few more kisses to the audience and judges before taking center stage.

"So what made you audition?" Gikwang prompts.

Hyemi giggles. "I want to be famous! My parents wouldn't let me be a trainee growing up. So here I am to give it a shot!" She smiles cutely. "Plus my kids can really learn to try for anything if I'm here. Even if I fail!"

"And is there anything in particular you're worried about?"

She laughs, a bit sadly. "My kids might see me and think I'm silly. They're all so cute and adorable. I'm going to miss working with them."

The performace is adorable despite her constant mistakes in the choreography, and at the end the male audience members especially give her resounding applause.

"That was... very cute." YG isn't as taken with the teacher as the audience.

"Your energy was excellent!" BoA encourages when Hyemi begins to look embarrassed at YG's comment.

"There were a lot of mistakes though." JYP notes. BoA glares at him but he doesn't notice.

Hyemi is distinctly less excited as she leaves the stage..

"Up next we have twenty three year old Nam Woojin!" Jongwoon's introduction brings the energy right back up. "An acting major, let's see if that theatre training does him any favors onstage!"

The audience cheers as Woojin enters, and he spares them a smile before settling himself in the chair that Ahreum had left behind.

"What do you think your best skill is?" Gikwang's question sounds before the screen has fully switched to the interview room.

Woojin smiles slightly. "This might be surprising but it'd be my acting. I mean I'm an acting major after all." He rubs his neck, a little embarrassed. "I'm good at conveying emotions, after all that's what acting is all about. Whatever the song we're performing is about, I'll be able to show the audience exactly that emotion. I also have some experience with stage directing and costuming, though never with anything musical."

"Is there anything in particular that you're worried about?"

Woojin shakes his head. "Not really. I'll face anything the show throws at me."

While not the most techincally powerful performace so far by a long shot, Woojin's voice carries a delicate emotion that has most of the audience swaying along.

This time YG is the one to applaud and speak first.

"Excellent job with the emotions." He nods, and Woojin returns it slightly.

BoA is next. "I really like the song choice but you strained a lot on the higher notes. Maybe stick to your lower register in the future?" She suggests with a smile.

Again Woojin responds only with a slight nod.

JYP shrugs. "My note is about technique too honestly, so I'll leave it a that for time's sake."

Another nod, and then Woojin politely bows and excuses himself to the wings.

"Up next please welcome the first rapper of the night! Welcome to twenty-four year old Jung Jaewon!"

Jaewon strides onto the stage, the picture of cool confidence as he grins out at the audience.

In his interviews he's completely relaxed.

"Honestly I just wanted my fifteen minutes of fame, and this could be a good experience either way." He explains to Gikwang.

Gikwang raises an eyebrow. "So you think you can handle idol training?"

Jaewon shrugs. "School in Korea is tough, how much harder can training be?"

Back onstage, he drops into a crouch as the music begins.

The audience cheers, clearly thrilled with the first rapper, though some members are shown to be stunned or uncomfortable with some of his lyrics.

YG is content. "Good flow, decent stage presence, overall a decent performance." He notes.

JYP nods. "You seemed like a real rapper up there. Do you do undergound battles?"

Jaewon gives a lazy shake of his head. "Not anymore. I did in high school but work comes first, you know?"

JYP nods in turn as BoA speaks.
"I don't know much about rap but you really loked like you were getting into your song." She offers. She's clearly one of the  people not exactly thrilled with his lyrics.

Once Jaewon has exited Jongwoon hypes the audience up for the next performance.

"Up next we have a pretty boy from Daegu! Please welcome twenty-four year old Kwon Hanhae!"

Hanhae is shameless as he enters the stage with a flourish, blowing kisses at the audience and judges alike and even sparing a wink for Jongwoon, who gives a flustered laugh despite himself.

Once he's finished flirting with the audience he takes a seat in the still present chair from Ahreum's dance.

Gikwang looks unimpressed with the man in his interview. "So what made you want to audition for this show?"

Hanhae looks completely at ease in front of the camera, and even tosses it a lazy smile before responding to Gikwang's question. "After graduating university it's been hard finding a job. I had nothing better to do and figured why not? This seems like fun. It beats hanging out with my mom all day. I love her but there's only so many times I can listen to her talking about her favourite dramas before going insane you feel?" He looks into the camera apologetically. "Eomma sorry I love you!"

For a moment Gikwang almost looks amused before he regains his serious composure. "And do you think you can handle the intense conditions of training?"

"I have absolutely no idea," He says brightly, grinning at the camera. "But I'm excited to find out."

He's even worse than Woojin in terms of technique but he looks so confident during the performance that he has the audience engaged regardless. He's back to winking and blowing kisses almost as soon as the song is over and the women in particular are thrilled.

BoA is not exempt from the fascination with the pretty young man on the stage. "I have to say, even if you aren't the best singer I was quite engaged regardless."

Hanhae gives a bow. "I'm flattered to get such praise from such a lovely young lady." He replies and BoA laughs, blushing lightly.

YG is much less impressed. "You're clearly drifting on your looks." He comments shortly, and Hanhae gives a shrug.

"Well if you've got them, why not use them? These ladies know what I mean."

A group of - honestly average - girls in the front shriek at the attention and he flashes another grin.

JYP laughs. "I'll give you this, you definitely know how to work a crowd." Hanhae just grins again and gives a sweeping bow before he exits, finally taking the chair with him.

Jongwoon proceeds to present the next performer.

"Up next we have our first female rapper of the night! Twenty-seven year old Kim Jinyi owns a bakery here in Seoul. I'm curious to see if her rapping is as good as her pies!"

Jinyi grins at Jongwoon as she enters the stage, and then waves into the auditorium.

The screen changes to Jinyi's interview.

"What would you say is your best skill?"

"They SAY rap," She shrugs, "But I really think it's my diligence. If I do rap even remotely well, then it's from just practicing over and over."

Gikwang nods. "And your worst one?"

She pauses, blinks, and then pulls a face. "...you're going to make me dance, aren't you?" She proceeds to swear impressively, though it cuts back to her performance before anything can be heard.

The rap is laid back and far from underground level, but it's steady enough and BoA and JYP both seem impressed by the end.

YG, on the other had, is not.

"That was barely passable as fast talking, there was no flow at all." He scolds.

Jinyi rolls her eyes. "Were you expecting any from something like this? Dude, we're a bunch of normals from out on the street, try matching your expectations accordingly."

YG looks shocked at the response, while both of the other judges are attempting to hide their amusement.

"Well I thought it was well done. And I love your hair by the way." BoA compliments.

Jinyi lights up. "Thanks! I just dyed it, I'm glad it turned out well!"

The two women share a smile before JYP awkwardly clears his throat.

"I actually thought it was surprisingly good for a non-rapper myself."

Jinyi grins but is ushered off by Jongwoon before she can reply."Sorry guys but we're a bit behind schedule so we'll have to keep the rest of these critiques brief!" He explains with a smile, looking straigh to the camera as he begins his next introduction.

"Our next contestant is another from out of town! Hailing from Yeoncheon is twenty-seven year old Park Myunghwa!"

Myunghwa enters the stage almost nervously, clutching a microphone in one hand, and a chair in the other, and has a guitar slung across her back. She nods to the audience and the judges before hurrying to set up the chair and check her guitar's tuning.

Her interview begins with her speaking instead of the usual question from Gikwang.

"I've always wanted to be a singer." She explains. "But due to... circumstances I wasn't able to pursue my dream. So when I saw the audition for this show- well I actually wasn't going to audition at all." She laughs nervously. "I've got responsibilities now... but my little brother signed me up and forced me to audition, and he can be quite persistent, so here I am."

"Is there anything in particular that you're worried about?" Gikwang questions.

She hesitates slightly before she repsonds. "While the challenges of the show will definitely be hard on me, what I'm worried about most is missing my- my family." She pauses again, fiddling with the hem of her shirt. "I've never been apart from my family for so long, I'm really going to miss them."

Gikwang nods in understanding. "Those are all my questions. But before you go, is there anything else you'd like to say?"

Myunghwa looks straight to the camera and smiles. "I'm really excited to give singing another try. I absolutely love doing it, and it's been that dream that never happened for me, that I never got to pursue. I thought I'd never be able to have an opportunity like this so I'm so grateful that you're giving me this chance, and that my brother signed me up for this."

Back onstage, she takes a deep breath, adjusts the microphone, and begins.

The audience sits enraptured with her voice. While far from the most powerful performance of the night, there's a lightness in her tone that warrants utter silence from the audience. Myunghwa's nervousness melts away as she plays, getting lost in the music.

As the last notes die, the audience erupts, and Myunghwa looks startled, as if she'd forgotten they were there are all. She quickly composes herself and bows as she shifts her guitar.

JYP applauds enthusiastically even as he gives his critique. "Wonderful song choice, it fits your vocals perfectly."

Myunghwa blushes slightly.

YG is also nodding. "While nothing outstanding the guitar and the song selection made you stand out."

BoA is speaking almost beore YG finishes. "Honestly I thought it was hauntingly beautiful. You should pursue an actual career in music when the show is over!'Myunghwa seems a bit overwhelmed by the praise, and she bows, smiling, and makes her exit.

"Up next we have another rapper! Please welcome twenty-nine year old Lee Hadon to the stage!" Jongwoon is a excited as ever as he brings the screen back to the stage

Hadon is short compared to a lot of the male contestants seen so far, but he walks with an easy confidence and grins out at the crowd unabashedly.

Then he launches into what is most certainly not a rap.

The audience cheers but there's clear confusion as to what had just happened. Hadon is unworried by the stuttered response, sliding a hand into his pocket and waiting for the judges to speak.

However the comments are skipped and it cuts straight to Hadon's interview.

"With how popular that pop stuff is getting I figure there will be lots of people watching. I'm aiming to win the beatbox championships this year so I'll take exposure where I can get it." He explains.

"So you think you can handle the tough training conditions?" Gikwang prompts.

Hadon shrugs. "I'll keep up fine, how hard can it really be?"

"Up next we have another dancer!" Jongwoon returns with his usual gusto. "Please welcome the lovely Orihime! Can you believe she's thirty? I sure can't!"

Orihime laughs a bit as she enters, the picture of elegance and regality. She only takes a moment to nod in acknowledgement of the crowd before hitting her start pose.

"So is there anything you're worried about with the show?"

In her interview, Orihime rolls her eyes dramatically. "Well not the editing!" Her tone drips with sarcasm. "Honestly, I've seen enough shows to know about the whole evil editing thing, and I can be pretty blunt and straightforward, but I don't want anyone to take it the wrong way like with what happened to Jessi in Unpretty Rapstar."

"And is there anything else you'd like to say?"

She smirks. "I know I can compete with the others here, despite some of them being half my age. I have nothing against them but y'know, they have the edge when it comes to something like Produce 101 or something, but this is going to be my time to shine."

The audience cheers as she finishes, and she smiles at them before looking to the judges.

BoA is clapping politely. "Excellent job! Though it was short you clearly have had lessons n the past."

JYP nods. "There's defnitely control in your movements that only comes from years of training." He agrees.

YG hums slightly. "I can't really add to that." He shrugs. "Good job."

Orihime gives s short curtsey and allows Jongwoon to shoo her off the stage a moment later.

Jongwoon looks excited as he prepares to introduce the next contestants. "Our next performance is a special one! These next two contestants are husband and wife, and will be performing a duet! Please welcome Akihiro Moriguchi and Ahn Sarang!"

The two walk out holding hands. Sarang looks much more excited than Akihiro, tugging lightly at his hand to encourage him to wave.

Once they've finished waving they get into position for their song.

"My wife is a big fan of korean pop music ever since her teen years. She heard you are having an audition and that our age is within the age range, so we prepared our performance and here we are."

Akihiro and Sarang are giving their interview together as well, and she shoves him lightly at his words.

Gikwang is unimpressed. "Do you think you'll be able to handle the tough conditions of training?"

Sarang nods, though it's a bit uncertain. "I've watched a lot of shows about trainee life, so I know a thing or two, I guess that's an advantage for me?"

Gikwang doesn't comment. "And is there anything else you'd like to say before we move on?"

Akihiro speaks up again, smiling. "Please pick my wife, she really wants to be a kpop idol."

The audience is thrilled with the performance despite Akihiro's regular missteps and Sarang's strained high notes. Their chemistry is undeniable.

YG begins the analysis as soon as it's quiet enough to do so. "I believe it was wise to do a duet as individually neither of you stood out to me. It was the chemisty that made you memorable."

JYP gives a small laugh. "I agree, though Akihiro I have to ask, do you even want to be here? She's much more enthusiastic than you."

He shrugs. "This is her dream. I want to support that."

The audience 'aws'.

Jongwoon is smiling brightly as the two exit, holding hands. "Isn't that just the cutest thing? I almost wish we could end right there but we've got two more performances for you tonight! Up next we have thirty-two year old Mo Giri, who works with idol trainees as a counselor!"

Giri is smiling as she enters the stage, though her waving is a bit awkward. She clears lightly as she prepares to begin.

"So you counsel actual idol trainees. What would prompt you to join a show like this one knowing what the conditions are?" Gikwang sounds genuinely curious.

She doesn't even have to think about her answer before smiling softly and replying, "Well, as a counselor for children and teenagers in the entertainment industry, I really try to instill a sense of confidence and positivity in them. And my auditioning for this show is a way to show them that just putting yourself out there, even if you don't make it far, is something amazing all on its own."

Gikwang nods thoughtfully. "So is there anything in particular that you're worried about?"

For a moment, her smiles wavers. "Giving up. I'm worried things will get so hard that I'll want to quit. I came here for a reason, to show my children, the ones I counsel, that no matter what they shouldn't give up if they really want something. There's nothing wrong with not making it far if you've tried your absolute best. So, that's what I need to do, no matter how hard it gets."

The audience applauds a she finishes the short rap, but they're either tired or less impressed than usual as it sounds somewhat muted.

"You... are certainly not a rapper. I assume you consider yourself a worse singer?" YG guesses.

Giri nods, looking awkward, but doesn't give a verbal response.

BoA rescues her. "I actually liked that you took a song that isn't normally rapped to show us your own style." She offers with a smile.

Giri's own smile slowly returns at the praise.

"Honestly there are idols who rap the same way as you, it's nothing to be ashamed of." JYP finishes off, though he sounds a bit dissmissive.

Giri hurries off the stage almost as soon as he's finished speaking, and Jongwoon is quick to come back on to bring on the final performer.

"Well folks, we're at the end of our night! We've seen some amazing performances, but we've saved a special one for last! Introducing fourty-three year old Park Jinyoo!"

Jinyoo steps onto the stage in a simple, conservative outfit and she shifts uncertainly at the amount of eyes staring at her.

"What would you say your worst skill is? In terms of being an idol."

Jinyoo shifts in her seat. "Um, I am a teacher, but... I use sign language while I teach? So talking is something I am a little less—a lot less—used to. So... stage fright, backstage fright, all the fright, I guess?"

Back on the stage her fright is evident, but she clears and stares intently at the ground until the music begins.

Several audience members are caught tearing up or straight-out crying by the end of the performance, nd even Jongwoon is wiping at his eyes as he reappears onstage.

"I believe that speaks for itself! We are unfortunately out of time, but remember to vote for your favorite performances tonight and we'll see you next time, when our chosen trainee will start their Bootcamp! I'm Kang Jongwoon, and we'll see you next week!"

 

Author's Note.  There isn't any actual voting, sorry guys! The chosen "trainees" will be posted tomorrow or Monday depending on when I find time to finish the cast page. But we're finally starting! I hope you guys will have as much fun as I know I will ^^

And if you're looking or some other amazing stories to apply to, check on Fringe Trainees by Urangutan and Formidame! And I've got my own project Princess that will start as soon as this story is complete so check those out if you're interested!

 
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I am a horrible horrible liar but it's finally out. It's not great but dang it it's done OTL

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kattirompa
#1
Chapter 16: Ahdlskdkdjfbsowosbc cmalsmdbfbcmals
UrangUtang
#2
Chapter 16: I AM NOT OKAY SEND HELP
UrangUtang
#3
Chapter 15: Aight let's do this, I promised you a last stream of conciousness and one you will get. Also I wasn't able to scream about the fact that you included Myunghwan but YOU INCLUDED MYUNGHWAN AND IT WAS BEAUTIFUL.

I love the fact that Jinyi downing coffee has been a constant for these 8 episodes. Oooh coffee mystery! Who made the mystery coffee? Jinyi's bromance with Hanhae points the finger to him, but that wouldn't be very surprising now would it? Hmmm. Hadon finally shaping up? He'd be the most surprising I think. But Woojin would be surprising to those who don't know him.

Omg this newfound JinSoo friendship is everything I didn't know I needed! Oh man the team has grown so much, they're actually a team now //wipes tear. I'm so proud of these babies ;A;

Aaah I thought it might be Woojin! HOLD UP. WOOJIN MADE A FRIEND. Well more like a friend was upon him but I'M COUNTING IT. Oh man I feel like Woojin got noticed by the most popular guy in class xD AW HADON AND FEELINGS. Oh no the fact that this is the end just hit me like a brick wall. Of course Hanhae is the best at body rolls oh my god I love that guy. "Sure I was blessed with this face" it's lines like that that make me love him omg. You teach that kid how to be y Hanhae.... well you tried.

"I am one with the youth" and lines like this is why I love Hadon. NOT JINYI'S PINK HAIR. I see it now, the Great Korean Bakeoff directed by Jungwoon starrng Jinyi as judge. AW Gikwang having fun ;A; Oh man this chapter is just filled with great lines and exchanges. DANI THIS IS MAKING ME SAD. Okay. Okay. The pink stayed. Phew. Aw Myunghwa honey and her sptretch marks ;A; HANINI. "I do declare that you are one y lady" AND THIS IS WHY I LOVE JINYI. Myunghwa you have been lesbian approved.

I have actually never listened to the Legend before, I only know it as the group with Kyungtaek's face xD It's a good song though they did good! And using nugus for them is actually really fitting since nugus often miss that bit of polish that other groups have. I will be adding this song to my music library yes. Aaaw GROUP HUGS I CANNOT HANDLE.

NEXT. Ah I get the y performance comments now that was definitely something xD Oh man I'll miss these guys too SO MUCH. I will give you some feedback/critique at some point when thesis stops looming, but it will be done! We've been through so much with these heads I look forward to the afterword and what happened to them!
HelloKitty10755
#4
Chapter 14: UGH I am so late with this comment! I sincerely apologize for not commenting earlier and for not commenting at all recently. Let's just say that personal life hasn't been the most forgiving the past few weeks. But anyways, let's get on with it.

So I read this chapter Sunday morning at like 1:00 and I was close to dying because this chapter was the best and I was trying so hard not to laugh too loud XD But SOMI! She's such a cutie, and to tell you the truth, I personally did not like her at first glance, but I've been starting to like her a lot more now that I've been giving her a chance.

Jisoo is actually attempting to dance in heels? So shocking! XD And "I'm basically the lead vocal now" haha keep boosting you ego Jisoo. Awww poor Giri, actually missing Jinyoo and Myunghwa taking on the leadership role. If she doesn't get the leader role, I will be really really mad.

Akihiro, dude, you need to lighten up a bit more. Stop being so serious and at least attempt to do a body roll! Haha he's the best. I'm betting Jisoo is so relieved right now. Actual high heels that have a stable heel instead of those ridiculous stiletto heels. At least she'll feel more attached to the ground now!

Yes! Improv again! The girls did such a good job. OMG! Jisoo had me completely dying with her acting skills! "Oppa! Annyeong Oppa I'm your biggest fan!" had me dying and her next few sentences had me sold! Jinyi has the best ideas and along with Jisoo, they would make a really good variety duo together. I want Jisoo to go in to acting now. She's golden! Awww, I wanted to see the guys try to improv. I wanted to see Akihiro and Woojin make fools of themselves (not like that would ever happen)

Such a cute fanmeeting. Hanhae and Jinyi make a good flirty duo, of course that's what Korean fans want to see on tv and they sell it really well. Oh and Jisoo's line "Hadon even managed it on his own!" is great and Hadon silently rolling his eyes.
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UrangUtang
#5
Chapter 13: You know when a chapter is called scandals that this is going to be good. Oh and also //whispers: shay y p.

Huh I guess Hanhae is a bit like Myunghwan isn't he? Aka a handfull xD Oh my god those flirt lines I am cringing what is life. Oh he has a blog! Interesting. I've always found it odd that modern dance is called modern dance, how long does it stay modern? What if it becomes oldfashioned? Will it be oldfashioned dance? Is it post-modern dance already??? Things that keep me up at night.

Oooh Woojin and Jinyoo, that's a pairup I did not anticipate but is very interesting. But yeah they're team quiet I don't forsee long discussions xD WOAH WOOJIN BIT BACK I AM SO PROUD OF MY CHILD. That was such a bull thing of Akihiro to say, I mean in character but son get off your high horse. I mean don't because conflict but also ugh I do not like you. But also thank you show for taking pity on my child. WOAH HANHAE. WERK IT. "Hwanhee pauses the music in the middle of Hadon dabbing" is a perfect sentence that should be framed. Aaaw Myung is coming out of her rigid controlling shell I am such a proud mom right now MY CHILDREN ARE DEVELOPING //wipes away tear.

You're also making me so curious about the songs they're doing!

Oh Akihiro. Now you jynxed it.

Oh man I do love how WOOJIN COMING FOR YOUR POSITIONS is now a thing, though clearly Hanhae is coming this time. WOAH MAIN VOCAL. Did not see that coming. WOOJIN CAME FOR THAT POSITION. Saaame Hadon. SAME. I'm surprised Woojin kept the lead dance position, but not that Hanhae got bumped up. Good for you flirty manchild, you earned it. Nobody got downgraded, this is all very positive. I don't trust it.

Now as for the ladies. Aw Giri! You go Giri! HOLY YOU GO JINYI. Aaand here comes the downgrades. That's not going to bode well for the JinSoo conflict. Oh geez Myunghwa you tried.

JO

KWON.

MY LOVE.

DANI YOU CAN'T JUST SPRING JO KWON AT ME. YOU HAVE TO WARN ME OH MY GOD.

Oooh I don't know much about Ivy but the way you've described her she's already a woman after my own heart.

"You'll state something about yourself that you think no one else in the group can relate to." Oh the dramatic irony. Oh how it hurts me. Also IVY TAKING NO PRISONERS. "with a face this ethereal it was an easy mistake but still." Have I mentioned that I love this guy yet because oh my god. Okay but don't make me laugh and cry in the same breath oh my god Dani you have too much power. My child. The contrast between the liberal Hanhae and the, well, conservative Woojin is an interesting one though. I wonder how much Hanhae could mean for Woojin if seeds of friendship were planted, and if Woojin would be comfortable enough to let it. Hmmm. I hadn't pondered these two together much yet before now, Hanhae was always more laughs and dabs, but that contrast tho. Woojin my child, I'm not kidding every single time he's mentioned my heart hurts. Why did I make Woojin Dani? Why did I aim to hurt us? Aaaw Jinyoo getting positive attention for her KSL ;A;

Leave to Jo Kwon to bring peace and sunshine where he goes okay. I am not biased at all. Not at all. Take your baseless accusations elsewhere!

Ah of course Jinyi is the master of redirection, I imagine she's had quite the bit of practice. Of course the rivalry with Jisoo is friendly. Of course it is. Why wouldn't it be? Also not surprised to see Hanhae thriving here. Oh no personal but also /oh yes personal/.

"We'll be starting by reading you a few comments made by netizens."

Now everyone looks terrified.

Wise response.

OH NO JINYOO. I can handle anyone being shat on but NOt JINYOO. Would fight for this turtle! Oh no. Oh no these scenarios. This cannot go well. I am getting the anxieties this cannot go well. Edge of seat is my state of being. Also what comment was that Woojin? WOOJIN. D A N I W H Y.

Okay. Okay I'm not ready but bring it on anyway.

OMG JINYI. Did not handle well is an understatemen omg my love. This didnt hurt yet. Luring us into a false sense of security are we Dani? I know the game. I've played this game damnit. Oh no there's nothing sadder than leaving someone hanging.

JINYOO. JINYOO NO.

I'm curious about everyone's scenarions, what they chinks they found and how they dealt with them, but I also understand why you didn't show them. Oh a Gold guy! I wonder who it'll be! Oh man I miss those idiots <3 Either way this was a really good chapter, as you could probably tell by my overemotional rambling, oh man I was on the edge of my seat through most of it! Thank you <3
kattirompa
#6
Chapter 11: Ohh this episode hurt my soul. It really did. It made me actually angry. I mean...I get the whole give them a external enemy to focus on. Get them to rally together and be a unified front. I get it. But I do not condone these kinds of tactics. Had the girls not been able to rally, Taeyeon's actions would probably have just destroyed them, and they very well would have left the show. And then JTBC would be screwed. XD (this is not a commentary on your writing btw: it's lovely. But these are things I see in reality shows too, like biggest loser and such, and they piss me off just as much XD). Fortunately, this did not happen. I don't recall reading this if the girls ever stood up for themselves more, or if they developed some understanding and respect for Taeyeon during this episode. Hmm...but regardless, it's great that they could get around their differences to help each other. I hope this momentum keeps going, and hopefully this will mean the girls will continue to grow some bonds that will see them through the show. /crosses fingers/ The highlight was Giri feeling like she could rely on the others. I'm glad they could rally around her, and taking care of her like a real group. And Im equally glad she found some strength in herself for this. She's going to need it.

The boys...well this was interesting. It wasn't infighting the boyd had to deal with. It was control. And I feel that Leeteuk handled it well...granted, I don't like the tactics much more than Taeyeons, but at the end there was some genuine concern and understanding. Also, the insight into Woojin though. That fracture that is forming. WOOJINNIE. I was wondering about all of this lead this, lead that, add this, add that, and how it would be affecting him. The plot thickens Dani. It thickens so much. But you needed that little bit of break there to keep this groups development going. And I approve, and look so forward to seeing what happens. (I noticed Jinyi is also still getting vocal lessons too...Dani...what are you plotting.../sideyes you cautiously/

But this chapter is fantastic. It got a real reaction out of me, and it showed some wonderful development of these characters. Me gusta.
kattirompa
#7
Chapter 10: Okay, this one is going to be more of a commentary on what happened than a long comment on each event.

This chapter really showed the beginning of the boiling point being reached: at least for the girls. For the boys, there's enough flippants, devil may care, and optimism to keep them from going to crazy at their mistakes just yet. And poor S.Coups. That has to be frustrating for him since they are willful and can sorta of bully their way. They even bullied Rain into dabbing with them lol. Hadon, Hanhae, and Eunchan are really forces of nature in the group. Woojin is more of the silent pillar. And poor Hiro has to be the adult. Lol. But congrats to the leads! Even if they are reluctant. XDD Yes Hanhae...they just gave you lead because what else are you going to do...but the last vhapter showed he may have what it takes to be center, and that is very important in the group. There is some bristling with the boys, but dayuuum, not to the extent of the girls.

That boiling point of the Ji-Ji fighting. Wow. You hinted at it a lot in the last chapter, and here is the result. Jisoo...sweetie, be careful. You may be here to train, but alienating others won't do you any good. I'm glad Giri does like her. And Giri...sweet, sweet child. This is going to be a rough ride for you for certain. And I do appreciate that you show Jinyi is just as wrong in her fight with Jisoo too. Sure, she tries to care a bit and Jisoo may have taken it the wrong way, but Jinyi definitely is not as patient as the other ladies to respond accordingly. So many boiling over emotions culminating in Myunghwa just crying. Sigh. These girls are a mess. It almost feels like you need to get these groups together as a co-ed group soon. They seem very unbalanced in some ways. Its like...too much of one personality type on one side and it overpowers the others so they're not as complete. But it does present an intetesting dynamic, and I am still enjoying the ride immensely.

Poor mentors. XD Again though, they may not fully realize these are people off the street. Of COURSE they'll be difficult and tiring to work with. Plus you're accelarating this training. They literally have no time to adjust. Aigooo...I know the next chapter hurts my soul too. But that comment comes later! I WILL CATCH UP WITH THESE!!
kattirompa
#8
Chapter 9: Oh lordy we have dance lessons now XD. And I love how you've been writing Jinyi. That "coffee" over and over again...I feel this so much. X3 Poor Giri: no one should have to suffer sleeping in the same bed as Jinyi. You poor, poor soul...
Is Jinyoo about to use sign language? Is that why her hands fluttered before she could speak? Hmm...and Jisoo...you're feels are showing. Silly child lol. But yes Hadon. 30 minutes. Some girls take hours (some guys too!). Tsk, tsk, Hanhae. I see you there flirting with Jinyi. But I love it. And Hiro don't be such a sourpuss. They're young and having fun. No sense in making your entire exprience here on the show miserable if you can get a little bit of levity in.
Ahhh, the broship continues. One of my favorite things to read here. X3 I get the feeling if Hiro is team dad, Myungwa sorta fits team mom.
The beginning of the Ji-Ji headbutting begins!! Don't be too insulted Jisoo! Jinyi is older than you and has adulting to worry about! Onwards to glory Jinyi!! lol. She would be the one who just throws open a door. Oooh. Minji. Certainly the girl is known for her dancing. This will be interesting. And I can feel Minzy on this. There were certainly some good dancers in the tryouts. It is nice to see Jisoo so excited for dancing. She has that youthful energy the others, while not lacking, don't always showcase. But I get it. With that energy comes that cockiness, and Jinyi ain't having yo child. /keeps watching the Ji-Ji battle warm up/

And then we also have bouncy energy pill Eunchan. These two bring such good energy to this. IT'S RAIN!!!...Ing. It's raining~ /bricked/ Ahem. Rain was one of the originals known for his dancing. Another good choice. Also if he could somehow impart his charisma to these boys, dayuuuum.

WOOJIN COMING IN. This child. Can he not do something? I mean...really. Woojin is my hero. Truly. And he's so cool about it too~ /kattiisawoojinfansorrynotsorry/ But this lead thing is really turning up the competition. Interesting insight on how much infighting there could be. I mean...its obvious when there's a main dancer, but the lead is just sometimes the one who least. XD

Yass Hadon. Call out the fangirl Jisoo. XD That smirk though...girl, Jisoo watch yourself. I like your smugness, but be careful. This could burn you later. That realization of Myunghwa...oh no. That must hurt her soul so much to realize this. It sorta makes sense that Jinyoo and Myunghwa would get along, or at least gravitate more to each other. They're both vocalists and even if not friends, are older and "wiser" in some ways.
...awww...Hiro...;; so sweet...doing this for his wife /coughiknowsomeoneontheshowwhocouldprobablyempathizewiththatsentimentsenor/

"Apparently the kid hasn't burned anything down yet, which I admit is impressive." She laughs lightly as the scene switches yet again."...this is so very Jinyi. I still love how you are writing her here. X3 I love this interaction of the ladies though. Shows some of the group dynamics very well. You go Jinyi. Get them rappers in line!! lol.

This contrast of skill versus stage presense is so true though. You can forgive a less skilled performance if its enteratining and earnest.

I like how you're showing the improvement and development, as well as understanding with these characters. The moments where they realize the hard work that is needed, and that its not what it seems. And then discovering things about each other. Ie: The broship are great fun, Jinyi actually knows things, Myunghwa;s willingsness to help, etc. It's all a delight to read in the midst of the training and interactions. You're subtley teaching us about these characters. Me gusta. (and the dabbing...XDD)

The positions...Jisoo was obvious. Jinyi...that's hilarious. XDD Good luck my child!! XDD
WOOJIN SWOOPING IN! XDD I find it funny the maknaes are the dancers. How did that just happen to work out? (or was this purposeful...hmm...)
kattirompa
#9
Chapter 8: EP 2 LEGGO – I lost the first one I did...I had like...fpur chapter commentaries done. T^T THIS TIME I SAVED ON SEPARATE WORD DOC! TAKE THAT INTERNET OUTTAGE!!! Anyhoo, I'l lbe aiming to finish one chapter a day and by the next update I SHOULD be caught up!!...note the word "SHOULD". Siiiigh....

Ooooh. Room arrangments. Always a good time.Ahhh, the first "friendship" beings: The Double H broship. And the Jinyi/Jisoo antagonism also begins. It's a different feeling rereading these chapters to comment after knowing what happens in the future. This should prove to be an interesting. And yes, there;s team dad Akihiro emerging already. Wow, seriously though, these little things you don;t realize until rereading. Oh Eunchan...Eunchan are you doing the whole "pull the girl's pigtails" thing? Enjoying the debate? This child I sweat. X3

ENTER SUZY. Oh, Hi L. XDD

Yess Suzy. Behold the glory that is the pink hair of Jinyi!! XD But aww, L is being a least a little considerate. I mean, you did just throw a bunch of strangers ina room and expected them to work these things out. I feel for these girls...I do. Workouts are the worst. Especially ones you are obligated to do as opposed to doing it for your own benefits/fun. Jinyi is me...except after only 30 minutes. XD
The Double H Broship conitnues@ Poor Eunchan. It's tough being the maknae child. Hanhae...it's caleld "sharing a bed", not a cuddling thing. XD All of these chars play well off each other so far which is enjoyable to read.

...THESE MACHINES ARE A LIE!!! /katti may or may not have had to use one of these at a gym and is now having traumatic flashbacks of the horror of her readings/ DX

I agree so much with Jinyoo. Losing that much wait, "safe" or not, can;t be easy or good for you in the short time they have. Also, these folks are in different age and physical fitness levels. You would need to truly tailor the regime to each one (frankly, it's doubtful they will DX). Nd I see you there Dani. The girls are UNDER 40 percent....but the giys can get away with being more muscles and bigger. Sigh...double standards you s.

Hahaha, yes, be jealous of Woojin boys. Because he's not only gonna outdo you all for fitness...hegonnacomeforallyourpositionsspoilers!!! I like Ahreum. That's a perfect way to get someone into the routine: distract them with something they are passionate about. And it;s nice to hear Jinyoo talk about her work. It really is a commendable thing.

"How do people do this without stabbing their eyes out?" Hadon groans as he attempts to shakily apply eyeliner. Pahahaha. Practice child. Practice. Just don't get mascara in your eye if ypu're wearing contacts. /katti has more flashbacks of that one time and how she refused mascara for months after that...shudder/ Hadon speaking truths already. Why indeed would anyone want to become an idol? A lesson I'm sure you and the others will learn by the end.
WOOJIN SWOOPING IN TO TAKE YOUR MAKEUP SKILLS. XD And Hanhae's reason is legit. Shameless, but legit.

...
Sigh. Working on "delicacy"...that just.../katti vomits at the concept/. But it's a real thing. The standards the females are held at are vastly different from the men based on the gender specific roles and stereotypes. It's sad really. But that's how society is still. Anyhoo...alas.

But legit. Ballroom dancing is an art. It is so hard to do it well. Counting, movement, precise movements, aghhhhh. But when done well, it's so beautiful to watch~ And I appreciate you showing that even the dancer is having issues with this. Shows that just because you can dance one way, doesn't mean you can dance every way.

I see your foreshadowing. I see you in the form of Bae Suji. /cackles and rubs her hands together
UrangUtang
#10
Chapter 12: //whispers: Shay Y P.

Ah yes. Female idol fashion. Not for the prudes amongst us. Oh man I will never get sick of smooth Hanhae and teasing Jinyi xD Best broship of the show so far. Oh man yeah those dresses are short wow. It was a messy performance but it was cute, which is perfect for their level. Certainly not good in any way, but also not a total disaster xD Aaaw Myunghwa!

Aaah B1A4! Woojin coming for all your positions makes sense now since CNU is annoyingly decent at everything xD And Sandeul (main vocal) looks so awkward too hanini. You sing great sweet thing but dance great is another matter entirely. Though I think my favourite part of the performance is the stage hands running on the main stage while they're in the little circle xD Aaw my other child did good too <3 And Hanhae SON. Stay in your lane omg.

YOOK SUNGJAE. HANI. I mean. I'm okay. I'm not okay. HOW DARE YOU TARGET MY WEAKNESSES. Of course Hanhae knows BtoB. I knew I liked you for a reason Hanhae. You have good taste. Hah Woojin you had better appreciate them you sing like one fo them xD

Oooh original songs huh? Very interesting. Jinyi: same tho. Hani is amazing. Also "yes, and" is never going to sound the same again. Oooh I've played Freeze before it's fun! Ah Woojin, my child, your theatre hipster is showing xD

Hanhae, son, you're walking a tightrope here. Oh I've played Hitchiker before too! Why is that so exciting? xD You're making me miss my high school acting class. Aaaaw seeing Giri let loose is so heartwarming omg honey. Improv has a way of loosening people up as long as they're open to it. Jinyi, Jinyi babe. Same. Same tho. S A M E. Oh no Jinyoo. Jinyoo sweet thing ;A; ...... I SEE THAT MENTION OF MYUNGHWAN. He IS gold. Little of my heart okay. BUT JINYOO CHILD. And Woojin child. Muted child. You still hurt me and give me a heart attack every time you're mentioned. SO MANY FEELINGS.

I can see why this chapter was hard for you to write. It had a lot of things that are irregular, acting exercized require you to improv for everyone else and it's not something that's come up in your other fics before. It'd be hard for me to write too. But you made it through and it was an excellent chapter, one subtly exploring many an character while the humour takes center stage and covers it up. Obvious things like Jinyoo's struggles, but also less obvious things like Woojin's conspicuous struggles with improv despite being an actor, Giri's slow loosening up and coming into her own, and Hanhae's stubborn sticking to his own guns with little regard for the consequences. Interesting things happening in the background and I ever look forward to more <3