Turning Point

Description

The voice had soothed him in the darkness. His pain and struggles were all vanished thanks to the voice. He could stay there forever, waiting for the voice to greet him. But he want to wake up and see the voice in reality. First step towards the voice... he has to be alive.

Foreword

The story might be cliche for some people, because this came out when I was practicing for Cambridge 1119 exam, where I need to write something on the theme "SLEEP". Apparently my instructor likes it, though when I reread it it sounds a bit lame and old-man-like style. How would you view it? You have to read to find out! Dont forget to leave a comment! (I am super open for criticism, be it harsh or soft. trust me I won't get uncomfortable). If you like my story, please upvote, or subscribe if you wish to keep on track!

For updates, I like to play this milestones game, which means I would only update when certain number of reads or comments or upvotes or subscribes is reached.

For the first update, I'd lets set it like this;

View passed 50,

Comment passed 20

Upvotes passed 10

Subscription passed 5

When any of these miles stones is reached, I'll update!

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