Chapter 8

Death and Destined Death
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"Guess what, Wizard? It's time."

"Time for what?!" The Wizard bellowed, nervousness and frustration clearly painted on her voice.

"Eh, you don't know? I thought you knew everything?" Hoshin asked sarcastically, taking advantage of the situation. He was burning in rage inside. When all the other kids talk about their mothers, he gets left out. Because of the Wizard who killed his mother. When all the kids go around bragging about their fathers, he has to keep quiet. Because no one likes his father. Why? It's the Wizard's doing. He has no friends, it's because of the Wizard. No one likes the kid the Wizard likes to pick on, no one likes the kid who doesn't have a mother, no one likes the kid whose father is known as a criminal in the land. He never got to live, because of the Wizard.

"Go away!" The Wizard screamed once again. Darkness had dawned upon them, and the Wizard had started creating a cloud over them, which expanded to look like a huge storm cloud.

"You shall die!" She screamed in her high-pitched, croaky voice, letting a lightning form and be thrown towards Hoshin with an unruly hand gesture.

"Hoshin, move!" Howon shouted from afar. He failed to follow Hoshin as fast as he should have when the younger ran out of the house without a notice.

Howon jumped on his son and they rolled out of the lightning's electric reach just in time. The Wizard had gone crazy by the time Howon managed to bring them behind a fallen piece of roof to work as a shield. He was hugging his son tight, afraid of losing his only family. That's when he heard Hoshin mumbling, "I wish for the first dead within her to die."

Howon heard the Wizard letting out an ear piercing shriek, a shout of agony, as an exposure of pain. He held tighter onto Hoshin, but the latter was focused on staring at the Wizard from behind their hiding spot.

"What are you doing, Hoshin? " Howon could not help but ask his son. He felt so dumb suddenly, as if the 14-year-old in his arms knew far more than he did.

"You said that the dead lives within her, that the dead adds onto her lifetime. I am giving the dead inside her the death they deserve. I am letting them free, and letting the Wizard feel the pain of each of their death. Her death is inevitable, but it's going to be slower than she is expecting it to be. " Hoshin's voice was ice cold as he said those words. Suddenly, the child staring at the pained and screaming Wizard looked like a grown up man to Howon, as if he grew up in the blink of an eye.

"I wish..

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 8: I loved how you wrote about death as a power and how the story came full circle, in the end. It tied up do well, and the emotion was great in it. Thank you for writing this. It was wonderful♡.
FrozenInside
#2
Chapter 8: Wait, I need more information! What happened with those kids Hoya and Bora? Is it just like a reincarnation of their souls so that they could get a happy ending or just two random kids that happened to have their names? Really sad with the end of the Wizard tho. I wish Hoshin had been able to see the soul of his mother or something like that haha. Besides that still really glad she died.
Anyway, this was a good story. I enjoyed it. It was a fun and quick reading. Thank you for writing it. :)
FrozenInside
#3
Chapter 7: Omg that ending sentence, I love it. It's like that gif of surprise motherers. Literally the best way to tell someone it's about to be really bad. I'm excited for this. So in the next chapter we'll see how she die and how hopefully Hoya and his son and included back in the society. Hopefully Hoya's power will comeback. My biggest hope is for Bora to come back but it seems like that won't happen ;-;
FrozenInside
#4
Chapter 6: Omg yes, once Hoshin said he could kill living beings just by wishing it I knew it was going to be useful because now they can kill the witch right ? It'll probably be difficult because Hoya will have to explain to his son why he should wish the witch dead. But she's so evil I'm sure it won't be to difficult for Hoshin to realize that everybody will be better off without her. I can't wait for her death
FrozenInside
#5
Chapter 5: Glad to see that you continued the story and completed it! :)
But omg this is so sad. I feel so bad for Hoya and his son. I wonder if it's really Hoshin's fault. Maybe he was also cursed by that evil witch! I literally hate her so much! I hope we'll learn what happened with Hoshin and how he apparently let a man died.
cellyne
#6
Chapter 8: thiis nice but i was expecting more of hoya and bora interaction and was expecting more about them since it was taged as hoyaandbora...

aside from that the plot is interesting though you should have placed a story about on how hoya and bora ended together... and should have placed a tag character death fatherandson fatherhoya and sonhoshin something like that (ok don't trust me on tags.. idk how to tags really)..
KaihleeLo
#7
Love here's an advice~ take off the infinite00hoya tag and tag them separately :D You may be able to get more readers that way~
myungsgirl #8
nice story..update soon..i want to know how howonie take his revenge..fighting..
meeno24315
#9
Chapter 4: Tis a journey of Howons that I want to follow!! I'm glad you're continuing this because there are still so many unanswered questions!
meeno24315
#10
Chapter 3: Omg nooo. Why did that happen?? :( not when I was looking forward to see their happy ending through it all!! :((