Chapter 5

Death and Destined Death
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Howon clearly heard the door creak. Someone was home and it could only be Hoshin. Why didn't he shout to notify his arrival like he always does?

He stood up from his armchair and walked to Hoshin's bedroom door, trying to peek in through the slightly opened door.

Hoshin sat on his bed with an unenthusiastic slouch, and his shoulders started slightly bobbing up and down after a while. Howon got what was happening. His son was crying. And he concluded how he didn't wish that thing to at all.

He invited himself in as he went and sat by the bedside. He knew Hoshin was aware of his presence yet decided to not look up, so Howon let the younger take his space. He sat there silently, staring at the ground as he heard his son's muffled sobs.

The first time Hoshin looked up was after about 3 hours. That was also the first time Howon looked at his son who looked more or less devastated, and guilty.

"Dad," He had called in his weakest tone, the tone Howon had never heard from his son. Hoshin was stronger than Howon, both physically and mentally. Hoshin was more charming than Howon ever was. Hoshin was more talented than Howon had been at his age. And Hoshin was cold, unlike Howon who never was. Despite all of it, Hoshin was calm, composed and wise like his father. But Hoshin never cried, Hoshin was never weak.

Howon pulled Hoshin closer to him and hugged his son, whispering, "What's up, buddy?"

Hoshin cried again, shocking and breaking

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 8: I loved how you wrote about death as a power and how the story came full circle, in the end. It tied up do well, and the emotion was great in it. Thank you for writing this. It was wonderful♡.
FrozenInside
#2
Chapter 8: Wait, I need more information! What happened with those kids Hoya and Bora? Is it just like a reincarnation of their souls so that they could get a happy ending or just two random kids that happened to have their names? Really sad with the end of the Wizard tho. I wish Hoshin had been able to see the soul of his mother or something like that haha. Besides that still really glad she died.
Anyway, this was a good story. I enjoyed it. It was a fun and quick reading. Thank you for writing it. :)
FrozenInside
#3
Chapter 7: Omg that ending sentence, I love it. It's like that gif of surprise motherers. Literally the best way to tell someone it's about to be really bad. I'm excited for this. So in the next chapter we'll see how she die and how hopefully Hoya and his son and included back in the society. Hopefully Hoya's power will comeback. My biggest hope is for Bora to come back but it seems like that won't happen ;-;
FrozenInside
#4
Chapter 6: Omg yes, once Hoshin said he could kill living beings just by wishing it I knew it was going to be useful because now they can kill the witch right ? It'll probably be difficult because Hoya will have to explain to his son why he should wish the witch dead. But she's so evil I'm sure it won't be to difficult for Hoshin to realize that everybody will be better off without her. I can't wait for her death
FrozenInside
#5
Chapter 5: Glad to see that you continued the story and completed it! :)
But omg this is so sad. I feel so bad for Hoya and his son. I wonder if it's really Hoshin's fault. Maybe he was also cursed by that evil witch! I literally hate her so much! I hope we'll learn what happened with Hoshin and how he apparently let a man died.
cellyne
#6
Chapter 8: thiis nice but i was expecting more of hoya and bora interaction and was expecting more about them since it was taged as hoyaandbora...

aside from that the plot is interesting though you should have placed a story about on how hoya and bora ended together... and should have placed a tag character death fatherandson fatherhoya and sonhoshin something like that (ok don't trust me on tags.. idk how to tags really)..
KaihleeLo
#7
Love here's an advice~ take off the infinite00hoya tag and tag them separately :D You may be able to get more readers that way~
myungsgirl #8
nice story..update soon..i want to know how howonie take his revenge..fighting..
meeno24315
#9
Chapter 4: Tis a journey of Howons that I want to follow!! I'm glad you're continuing this because there are still so many unanswered questions!
meeno24315
#10
Chapter 3: Omg nooo. Why did that happen?? :( not when I was looking forward to see their happy ending through it all!! :((