Death and Destined Death

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What are you scared of the most? Admit it, you are scared of death if not anything else.

 

"You can deal with death?" He was often asked.

"I can send death further in time." He would answer.

"That's it! It's an amazing ability!" An excited answer would make it's way to his ears.

"But that's just death. I can't deal with death when it's destined to kill a man. I can only deal with death. Not destined death." He would answer once again. No one got what he said though. He either saved a man from falling down the building or just saved a kid from drowning in the water. After all what he did for people, his words never made sense anyway.

Foreword

 

 

 

 

I am using this story to enter the contest We've Got the POWER!

 

This story is mine and plagarism will not be tolerated. Because if you plagiarise, it will turn out to be better than mine and people will not read my story. So have mercy on this poor soul! ><

 

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 8: I loved how you wrote about death as a power and how the story came full circle, in the end. It tied up do well, and the emotion was great in it. Thank you for writing this. It was wonderful♡.
FrozenInside
#2
Chapter 8: Wait, I need more information! What happened with those kids Hoya and Bora? Is it just like a reincarnation of their souls so that they could get a happy ending or just two random kids that happened to have their names? Really sad with the end of the Wizard tho. I wish Hoshin had been able to see the soul of his mother or something like that haha. Besides that still really glad she died.
Anyway, this was a good story. I enjoyed it. It was a fun and quick reading. Thank you for writing it. :)
FrozenInside
#3
Chapter 7: Omg that ending sentence, I love it. It's like that gif of surprise motherers. Literally the best way to tell someone it's about to be really bad. I'm excited for this. So in the next chapter we'll see how she die and how hopefully Hoya and his son and included back in the society. Hopefully Hoya's power will comeback. My biggest hope is for Bora to come back but it seems like that won't happen ;-;
FrozenInside
#4
Chapter 6: Omg yes, once Hoshin said he could kill living beings just by wishing it I knew it was going to be useful because now they can kill the witch right ? It'll probably be difficult because Hoya will have to explain to his son why he should wish the witch dead. But she's so evil I'm sure it won't be to difficult for Hoshin to realize that everybody will be better off without her. I can't wait for her death
FrozenInside
#5
Chapter 5: Glad to see that you continued the story and completed it! :)
But omg this is so sad. I feel so bad for Hoya and his son. I wonder if it's really Hoshin's fault. Maybe he was also cursed by that evil witch! I literally hate her so much! I hope we'll learn what happened with Hoshin and how he apparently let a man died.
cellyne
#6
Chapter 8: thiis nice but i was expecting more of hoya and bora interaction and was expecting more about them since it was taged as hoyaandbora...

aside from that the plot is interesting though you should have placed a story about on how hoya and bora ended together... and should have placed a tag character death fatherandson fatherhoya and sonhoshin something like that (ok don't trust me on tags.. idk how to tags really)..
KaihleeLo
#7
Love here's an advice~ take off the infinite00hoya tag and tag them separately :D You may be able to get more readers that way~
myungsgirl #8
nice story..update soon..i want to know how howonie take his revenge..fighting..
meeno24315
#9
Chapter 4: Tis a journey of Howons that I want to follow!! I'm glad you're continuing this because there are still so many unanswered questions!
meeno24315
#10
Chapter 3: Omg nooo. Why did that happen?? :( not when I was looking forward to see their happy ending through it all!! :((