Chapter 10

When The Sun Falls

 

The basket is filled with freshly rinsed vegetables and she thanks Taekwoon for his help. They both stand to brush off the dirt from their clothes.

"I will return in a few days, miss," says Taekwoon, hopping back onto his mount in a single fluid motion, "I never asked for your name, did I?"

"It's Snow White,"

"Snow White," he echoes with a smile, "very well. Until we meet again, Snow White," he dips his head in a slight bow and canters off. She gazes off into the tree line for several moments even after he disappears from sight, a foreign fire burning bright in her chest. 

"Your pulse is battering like crazy, try and relax," Jaehwan chuckles with her head tucked beneath his chin, "tell me about what you did today, darling," he inquires softly, "you know I like hearing that,"

She lets out a soft sigh and focuses on the darkness manifesting behind her eyelids.

"I did some gardening, your stag is becoming quite protective," she murmurs and can't help her smile. She hears Jaehwan chuckle.

"He's growing fond of you,"

She hums in response, feeling his broad shoulders against her back.

"What else?"

She decides to tell him. She was surprised as well when Taekwoon appeared, after all.

"A young man came by the riverside and asked for my name."

There's a breath of a pause as Jaehwan starts to run his fingers through her hair and she's relieved that he doesn't seem to be alarmed.

"That's rather odd," he muses softly, "not many come through this part of the forest,"

"We talked for quite awhile. He introduced himself as Taekwoon,"

The pause is noticeable this time, his fingers still.

"Prince Taekwoon came by?"

That gets her attention. She sits up, eyes flying open.

"Shhh.." flusters Jaehwan, laughing softly and places a hand on her shoulder, "lie back down, sweetheart. I didn't mean to startle you,"

He rearranges themselves to his liking, an arm draped over her waist and bringing her back to him.

"Prince?" she almost grumbles with a slight pout, earning another chuckle from Jaehwan.

"He's very wise. The sudden death of his father shook his entire kingdom and he came to the throne at a young age," Jaehwan muses, "he's practically already King with how well he handles his responsibilities,"

She hums again. No wonder he had been so soft spoken. A complex mind and a quiet soul.

"It's time to sleep," he says and that's the end of that. 

If Jaehwan is her moon, Taekwoon is the sun. As promised, he returns. He brings her gifts, rich fabrics and candied fruits that they share underneath the shade of the trees, enjoying the sweetness spreading over their tongues. He doesn't mention anything of his status, nor does she about knowing of such status, but regardless, they're comfortable.

They hike through the forest and discover a hidden lake tucked away behind rocky plateaus. When she tears the hem of her dress, he ties back the fabric with careful fingers and a quiet smile. The lake is a silvery blue, not knowing where sky ends and water begins. An eternal mirror.

His voice is different from Jaehwan's when he sings, all heart and spirit and letting it carry across the water as they sit side by side, a fresh change from hushed lullabies. They doze in the midday sun and eat a lunch of berries and dried meat that he brought with.

She's starting to love the day.

 

"He's spending a lot of time with you," whispers Jaehwan one night into the crook of her neck, "that's what my doves tell me,"

She feels a sudden pang of guilt, as if she's been having an affair. It was true, Taekwoon had been coming to see her almost every afternoon. Her heart twists.

"I'm sorry," she says, "it's foolish of me to get close to a stranger when you're doing so much to try and keep me safe,"

He settles closer, breath hot against her skin.

"I'm envious of him," Jaehwan murmurs. She turns to peak up at him through her lashes.

"Taekwoon has you all to himself during daylight. The only time I have with you is when you're asleep in my arms," he tells her softly with a smile and emphasizes his point with a fleeting touch down her side. Her cheeks burn and he apologizes with another chuckle, soothing words causing her eyelids to droop.

"But I enjoy it none the less, darling,"

 

Taekwoon offers to take her back to his kingdom.

"We have some superb vendors in town from out of country," he tells her, twirling a blade of grass between his fingers, "the street food is absolutely delicious, there's rice cake that I want you to try. I'm sure you'll love it,"

She wants to, she really does want to go see his home, but something tugs at her heartstrings at the idea of leaving the forest entirely. Leaving Jaehwan.

So she politely declines.

"Someday," Taekwoon says and looks out across the lake with that small smile.

 

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byuntaeken
#1
Chapter 13: aesthetical, heart-shattering, enchated, and indeed...more than just a fairytale.

i cried once again and fell in love with this pure and grand story. author-nim ily sm. reading it gave me a delightful and a rousing feeling. idk it was beautifully odd and well-settled. although it broke me. it was wonderful. its like u originally created SNOW WHITE mehehehhh. tbh this is my favored fic among all fairytale genres. this is legit.

i had sm to say but i think i need some time to cry MEHEHEHHHH
Amalya
#2
Chapter 13: Well this ended up being an interesting twist indeed. No actual showdown/conflict; no dwarves or small men (like the Disney version); and the added element of spirits and good sorcerers, but you still included some of the key points that make the story Snow White in its core. Well done with those changes and such. I like the realism of the heart pulled in different directions, and you twist the knife with the last chapter there, giving her one happy ending, but perhaps not the one she would have preferred.

I still have no sense of what Snow White actually looks like though. Other than beautiful. And I wasn't able to figure out why you used italics at some points but not at others. They felt rather random and actually confused me with the ambiguity of their purpose. *shrug* Other than that, I like how the brothers were essentially the huntsman and how Wonshik's apparent blood-thirst wasn't quite what it seemed at the surface. Despite the ending, your story very much does read like a fairy tale with things happening in such a way that the reader just has to accept that some things are the way they are or happen the way they do, but it's not a bad thing.

I found the ending to be bittersweetly abrupt and I am currently wishing for more resolution with the Queen, considering they're related (that was another thing that felt odd in the beginning), but overall, it's a good retelling of the tale. Nicely done and congrats for finishing it. Good luck with it in the other contest you've entered it into. ^_^
Amalya
#3
Chapter 4: Okay. So now the first few chapters make sense. I was absolutely confounded by how everything was playing out with the three brothers but this definitely ties all those questions together in a neat, but far darker answer than I would have hoped for. haha Go Sanghyuk for not being a cold-hearted... villain? I wouldn't exactly call the brothers that, since they are following orders but still. -_- Definitely off to an interesting start. Some of the italics in the previous chapters were a bit confusing since I wasn't sure who was speaking or who the speaker was talking to/about, but in general, the story is moving very much like a fairy tale. There's just enough description to make it clear and it has the somewhat lighthearted tone of the beginnings of a fairy tale itself. I still don't have much of a sense for Snow White herself - I get impressions from everyone around her but she's otherwise an amorphous 'beauty' as it were, but I'm hoping time will tell!

I did rather like that encounter with her and the Viscount in the beginning. Nice touch and a good way to approach a sometimes sensitive/uncomfortable topic. She handled it quite nicely, though I do wonder if that's the last we'll see of him. Anyway, onward to more to see what happens. I'm rather a fan of the original tale so I'm curious to know how you've twisted it. ^_^
rumourhasit12
#4
Chapter 13: ... Jaehwan <////////3
minyoungunnie #5
Chapter 13: My feelssss
Love this!
nemosmknimh
#6
Fairytales are usually happy.... but still i prefer yours....
It is full of emotion.... much better than usual Fairytales.
This is a well written tale. I love it
StarlightHeaven
#7
Chapter 13: Authornim you are the best..this story make me sad and broken. i just can't handle this feeling and it such a beautiful wonderful writing
Ever_Lasting_Friend
#8
Chapter 13: This was simply beautiful to read. At the last chapter I hit Previous thinking there was another chapter and then I got sad that it was over. I think I seriously need a sequel, because this was one of the best fairy tale stories I've read in a really long time. Really amazing writing!!
Andreacnushin
#9
ㅋㅋㅋㅋ This reminds me of my struggle with my two main biases in Vixx. I like Leo the most but Ken is always trying to creep up on him. I like the way you described their singing voices and their personalities. Great chapter!
Andreacnushin
#10
Chapter 7: This is really cute and interesting to read. I love reworked fairy tales and this is better than most I have read. I'm glad all the members of Vixx have been mentioned, except for Leo but I'm hoping he's the prince ;) You have a good idea going here, I hope you continue!