Chapter 3: If you could tone down the swearing please? It's alright to use those words to emphasize emotion but I suggest you use them sparingly and not too concentrated in one scene, so that when you use them, they can be very effective in expressing extreme dialogues or scenes. ^~^
Other than that, I am so excited for Seungcheol to meet the Yoons! I feel like he'll be met with disaster lmao good luck on your summer internship, seungcheollie~ don't hit on your boss lol
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