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Vigilante
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"They're coming out of the woodwork," the police chief said, looking more haggard than he had yesterday.

"Potential victims of Kim Seunghwan's?" Sehun asked.

The three of them were standing in the tiny police station, as officers hurried around them, either heading in to handle the citizens waiting to talk to someone, or heading out to run down leads. The police chief had woken Dabin and Sehun that morning, asking them to come to the station.

"Do cases follow you wherever you go, or is this an anomaly?" Sehun had asked once she hung up, then pulled her on top of him and made them half an hour late.

"Yeah," the police chief said now, gesturing to the packed station. "Not all of them are reporting Kim, of course. Most are here because they heard the rumours. Honestly, I think Ok Jaeshik wanted to be overheard when he told you. Otherwise, no way would he have announced his theory in front of the town's biggest gossip, who apparently heard him telling you."

"Maybe he wanted to help, but was afraid of violating patient confidentiality. This might be his way of trying to break the silence," Sehun suggested.

She knew what Sehun wasn't saying—that Jaeshik was afraid if he came directly to the police chief, he wouldn't be taken seriously. Especially when Jaeshik refused to name a victim.

"Maybe," the chief muttered. "One other thing I can tell you? The note left on your condo was legit. That was definitely Kim Seunghwan's blood. I wish we'd found prints on it, too, but we’ve got nothing on that."

Dabin frowned, even though she'd suspected it. She didn't share her next thought—that the most likely person to have known her involvement when the note appeared was a police officer.

Instead, she went back to what the chief had said about Kim's victims coming forward. "Some of the claims seem legitimate?" Dabin assumed that from the grim expression on the chief's face. If Kim Seunghwan was his friend, the situation had to be a particularly hard.

"The stories match up too well to be fabricated. There were some rumblings when his body washed ashore, but I thought it was just people making wild guesses because of what was written on him. We couldn't find a thread of evidence to substantiate the claims. We investigated," he said defensively. "But now?" His shoulders slumped.

"Do any of them look good for the murders?" Sehun asked.

"I don't know," the chief replied. "I believe it all happened when he was coaching Little League. He coached for six years, and he stopped about five years ago. He didn't want to quit, but we had a semi-pro guy retire down here and volunteer to take over. Obviously, the town wanted that, so he wa

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ikoniieyxz
#1
Chapter 8: This is honestly so good, I'm glad I'm stumbled into this link, upvote!
darkangle #2
Chapter 8: this story is so intense I looove it wish we had more of this cuz damn it is so good also i would love to se some fluff between sehun and dabin ❤️
KimHyeJoo #3
Chapter 8: INTENSE WOW
affinityy #4
Chapter 8: THIS WAS SO GOOD !!!
Srrc19
#5
Chapter 8: Though it was less of sehun and oc. It kept me hooked. This surely deserves more than what it has got! By the way his dilemma got me here❤
penguinninja #6
Chapter 8: Just read this on the bus journey home. Twas short but I really did enjoying it. I think you started to mold the characters well but obviously not fully developed because it's only 8 chapters long. That being said a part 2 would be great ^^
angry_spoon #7
Chapter 8: Most writers couldn't pull off a murder investigation in just eight short chapters but you manage to do it absolutely splendidly authornim ^.^
nona_96
#8
It was a fun and refreshing read! Good job <3 I'm gonna check out if you have more stories now :)
shesamytheu
#9
Chapter 8: Awww it's already the end >< To be honest, I am quite disappointed since I was hoping for more actions and suspense. I think that revelation came out a bit bland as well and it didn't make me feel like "bruh!!!!! so it's the wife". Maybe it's because there was no strong foreshadowing or misdirecting from the previous chapters?

Though, I think that this is a really good story! The thing that I love the most is your writing--holy , your sentences are simple and precise; I love them so much! This is only your first try and I know that you can do better, better, better in the future! <3