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Vigilante
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"Let me get my gun."

"What?" Dabin turned back to Sehun, who was unlocking the door of their condo, carefully holding the knob with the hem of his T-shirt in case the killer had touched anything on the door.

"I want my weapon. You should get yours, too, and then we'll go talk to the police again."

"Maybe we should just call them," Dabin suggested. "Let them see the note at the scene. Actually, there they are!" She ran toward the trail coming up from the beach, waving at one of the police officers she'd seen earlier.

He was built like a boxer, but his skin was unmarred, and only tanned. Although his face drooped with exhaustion, he held himself stiffly.

"Special Agent Seo," he said. "What is it now?"

She wondered how many of the policemen standing around the scene earlier today had heard her title. Her enthusiasm fading a little, she told him, "There's something you're going to want to see."

She led him back to the condo, where Sehun was waiting, his weapon holstered over his shorts, and holding hers out. She tucked it into her waistband, feeling ridiculous, as the police officer eyed her warily.

"This was here when we got back." She pointed at the open door.

The man stepped slightly inside and then his expression got even more brooding. "What does it mean? You should understand this more than anyone."

"He's referring to my past," Dabin said. "The fact that I tried to make sure the person who took Hana went down. Only this guy's idea of taking someone down means dead."

"That's pretty convenient."

"A killer stabs a note into my door and you say it's convenient?"

"You wander into the crime scene, claim it's a revenge killing, and then the killer happens to put a note on your door suggesting the same thing?"

"I don't think that's quite what the note's saying," Dabin replied. "I was after justice, not revenge."

"What exactly are you suggesting?" Sehun demanded, taking a step forward. "That looks like blood. How about you get it processed and find out if it belongs to your victim?"

The police officer moved back, his hand slipping over his weapon.

"And you should see whether your victim was ever connected to an NIS or police case," Dabin added.

"We told you, Kim Seunghwan's an upstanding citizen."

"Well, maybe he was clear

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ikoniieyxz
#1
Chapter 8: This is honestly so good, I'm glad I'm stumbled into this link, upvote!
darkangle #2
Chapter 8: this story is so intense I looove it wish we had more of this cuz damn it is so good also i would love to se some fluff between sehun and dabin ❤️
KimHyeJoo #3
Chapter 8: INTENSE WOW
affinityy #4
Chapter 8: THIS WAS SO GOOD !!!
Srrc19
#5
Chapter 8: Though it was less of sehun and oc. It kept me hooked. This surely deserves more than what it has got! By the way his dilemma got me here❤
penguinninja #6
Chapter 8: Just read this on the bus journey home. Twas short but I really did enjoying it. I think you started to mold the characters well but obviously not fully developed because it's only 8 chapters long. That being said a part 2 would be great ^^
angry_spoon #7
Chapter 8: Most writers couldn't pull off a murder investigation in just eight short chapters but you manage to do it absolutely splendidly authornim ^.^
nona_96
#8
It was a fun and refreshing read! Good job <3 I'm gonna check out if you have more stories now :)
shesamytheu
#9
Chapter 8: Awww it's already the end >< To be honest, I am quite disappointed since I was hoping for more actions and suspense. I think that revelation came out a bit bland as well and it didn't make me feel like "bruh!!!!! so it's the wife". Maybe it's because there was no strong foreshadowing or misdirecting from the previous chapters?

Though, I think that this is a really good story! The thing that I love the most is your writing--holy , your sentences are simple and precise; I love them so much! This is only your first try and I know that you can do better, better, better in the future! <3