Who are you?

JYM017 April 03,2012 11:20 pm

Tell me

Tell me all your problems

Show me

Show me all your bruises

You're beaten up badly inside

You're heart is bleading

You're trying not to cry

Can you still handle it?

Can you handle it?

The sharp stabbing pain?

Their lies? Their promises?

Everything.

Please stop smiling

please stop saying excuses

You said you wanted to be you

But why aren't you... you?

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whitelove #1 Feb 4, 2012 05:44:51

and the chapter 7!!!
aww~its very...touched(?)
ughh,i can't explain it,but its totally good.
loneliness..I know its hurt.A lot.

whitelove #2 Feb 4, 2012 05:42:04

Chapter 6!!! so meaningful! love it..

JYM017 #3 Jan 29, 2012 03:53:35

@minimac thank you so much ^_^
@misscharm thank you ^__^

misscharm #4 Jan 28, 2012 07:56:13

Hey, your poems are all awesome! Thumbs up. :)))

-ximini #5 Jan 25, 2012 22:42:10

This poetry is really beautiful. You have talent! :D

JYM017 #6 Dec 19, 2011 09:49:09

@whitelove aww thanks for the lovely comments :) and of course ^_^ you could make fanfics out of them :D thank you again ^_^

whitelove #7 Dec 19, 2011 08:00:19

I love the poem at chapter 4..<br />
its..beautiful..^_^

whitelove #8 Dec 19, 2011 07:58:39

your poems could make me got ideas for my fanfics~<br />
Do you mind it?<br />
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