Used To Be

Used to be

JYM017 August 28, 2010 at 11:26am

I saw him with his girl yesterday

I just looked at them, come what may

My heart felt pain that I can't bear

I can't live without him, I swear!

He held her hand and kissed it lightly

She hugged him very tightly

My heart sank from my tears

He used to be the one who vanished all my fears

He was inches away from me

Still he seemed so far

We used to be the perfect couple

But now, he has someone new in his heart.

First poem is up ^_^ What do you guys think about it? It's so short, isn't it?

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whitelove #1 Feb 4, 2012 05:44:51

and the chapter 7!!!
aww~its very...touched(?)
ughh,i can't explain it,but its totally good.
loneliness..I know its hurt.A lot.

whitelove #2 Feb 4, 2012 05:42:04

Chapter 6!!! so meaningful! love it..

JYM017 #3 Jan 29, 2012 03:53:35

@minimac thank you so much ^_^
@misscharm thank you ^__^

misscharm #4 Jan 28, 2012 07:56:13

Hey, your poems are all awesome! Thumbs up. :)))

-ximini #5 Jan 25, 2012 22:42:10

This poetry is really beautiful. You have talent! :D

JYM017 #6 Dec 19, 2011 09:49:09

@whitelove aww thanks for the lovely comments :) and of course ^_^ you could make fanfics out of them :D thank you again ^_^

whitelove #7 Dec 19, 2011 08:00:19

I love the poem at chapter 4..<br />
its..beautiful..^_^

whitelove #8 Dec 19, 2011 07:58:39

your poems could make me got ideas for my fanfics~<br />
Do you mind it?<br />
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