Losing

Love is a POEM (A Collection)

 

 

Losing

JYM017 September 11, 2010 

 

 Lots of my friends say I'm stupid

 An arrow shot my heart, the arrow of Cupid

 And the first man I saw was you

 You who I know will never be untrue

 

 

 And I was wishing, hoping, praying I was right

 So, since then, I've never let you out of my sight

 You looked at me and you gave me a smile

 I sighed and cried tears of joy for a while.

 

 But time passed by really quick

 I became blind, i became meek

 I waited for you, for you to love me

 I've waited long for this love to become "WE"

 

 But fate always has its ways.

 And I just walked past the lonely days

 I know you wouldn't be back

 I lost you, I lost my track

 

 Losing is one of the saddest events

 It's as if looking for your heart when you don't know where it went

 Everybody hates losing someone special

 Because it's like losing a wing when you're an angel.

 

 

 

 

It's sad when you lost someone. I lost him, his trust, our friendship. Oh well. How about you? Was it sad? Did you had a hard time letting go/moving on? That's life. It's just not fair, but you have to remember, someday, you'll be happy.

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whitelove
#1
and the chapter 7!!!
aww~its very...touched(?)
ughh,i can't explain it,but its totally good.
loneliness..I know its hurt.A lot.
whitelove
#2
Chapter 6!!! so meaningful! love it..
JYM017 #3
@minimac thank you so much ^_^
@misscharm thank you ^__^
misscharm #4
Hey, your poems are all awesome! Thumbs up. :)))
-ximini #5
This poetry is really beautiful. You have talent! :D
JYM017 #6
@whitelove aww thanks for the lovely comments :) and of course ^_^ you could make fanfics out of them :D thank you again ^_^
whitelove
#7
I love the poem at chapter 4..<br />
its..beautiful..^_^
whitelove
#8
your poems could make me got ideas for my fanfics~<br />
Do you mind it?<br />
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