Me

by JYM017

April 3, 2012 10:26

She tries not to cry

But her heart can't take it

She tries not to scream

But the wounds are to deep

She tries to put on a smile

But it takes all her strength and tires her

She tries to hide it all inside

But it can't keep it any longer

She's tried

She's dying

She's barely holding on

But she wants to, she has to

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whitelove #1 Feb 4, 2012 05:44:51

and the chapter 7!!!
aww~its very...touched(?)
ughh,i can't explain it,but its totally good.
loneliness..I know its hurt.A lot.

whitelove #2 Feb 4, 2012 05:42:04

Chapter 6!!! so meaningful! love it..

JYM017 #3 Jan 29, 2012 03:53:35

@minimac thank you so much ^_^
@misscharm thank you ^__^

misscharm #4 Jan 28, 2012 07:56:13

Hey, your poems are all awesome! Thumbs up. :)))

-ximini #5 Jan 25, 2012 22:42:10

This poetry is really beautiful. You have talent! :D

JYM017 #6 Dec 19, 2011 09:49:09

@whitelove aww thanks for the lovely comments :) and of course ^_^ you could make fanfics out of them :D thank you again ^_^

whitelove #7 Dec 19, 2011 08:00:19

I love the poem at chapter 4..<br />
its..beautiful..^_^

whitelove #8 Dec 19, 2011 07:58:39

your poems could make me got ideas for my fanfics~<br />
Do you mind it?<br />
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