Chapter 2

Mechanical

The chills are almost painful on Jongdae's skin as the younger looking man's intense, glowing blue eyes stare directly back into his.

"You're awake," his soft voice comments. Jongdae tries to find useful words, but ends up just choking out, "Yeah."

The world stands still for what feels like a long time, and they remain frozen, eyes locked. It had been several minutes, and Jongdae's heartbeat still had not slowed down at all.

"Who are you?" Jongdae squeaked, still intimidated by the stranger's unique and stunning features.

But he just sat down calmly on an old fashioned couch, motioning for Jongdae to follow him in doing so on the chair across from him. Jongdae finally, reluctantly left the spot he had hidden in for an eternity to obey him, setting himself in the chair cautiously and never breaking eye contact with the mysterious boy.

"My name is Minseok, sir. You're probably wondering why you're here, and I can tell you. Through my window, I saw something abnormally large fall to the ground. So, out of curiosity, I went to see what it was. When I arrived, you were lying on the ground, and were obviously severely injured. So I took you here to treat you as there is no one else to do so. We are in the mountains after all, sir."

Jongdae turned his head to look out the window, seeing the place that he most likely fell from. He couldn't believe that this person had been able to save him after a fall from that height, but he was incredibly grateful.

"Thank you," he managed to tell him sincerely. Minseok nodded in acknowledgement, shutting his eyes momentarily to pair with it.

They continued to stare at each other. "Is something wrong, sir?" Minseok asked politely after a few long, silent moments. Jongdae almost said no, but it would be a lie.

"How exactly are your..." he trailed off, gesturing to his own eyes to signify he was talking about Minseok's. Minseok nodded steadily; he had been expecting his eyes to come up at some point, which means explaining something else.

"My eyes, yes. You see, sir, I am a robot. My creator loved blue eyes, so he gave me these," he explained, pointing to them.

Jongdae gaped at him. "You're...a robot?" he murmured slowly. How could a robot have cured him? And why did he seem so freakishly human?

"Yes, sir. My creator was trying to give me as many qualities of a real man as possible. His name was Luhan, and he designed me to breathe like a human, sleep like a human, talk, walk, all of the basic sensory details. He didn't design me to eat and drink though; I can produce food and water for my master but I do not eat or drink myself. Convenience, I presume. He was designing emotions for me when he died. He managed to add curiosity and responsibility to me before he passed."

The information hit Jongdae like a brick thrown at his chest. He had worked with machines for years now - he had always had an incredible aptitude for it - and a feeling of obligation started to steadily bubble inside of him.

Luckily, he had never had that much of a commitment to a certain place as his home, so making that place the cabin with Minseok wasn't going to be too hard for him. It's not like he had a way to get back home anyways.

"You know, I'm a machine expert myself. I could help finish you if you'd like," he offered to Minseok with nerves in his voice.

A chill seemed to travel through the air; Minseok had not ever spoken to, let alone had anyone work on him but his creator, but it had been a long time since he had passed, and it was about time Luhan's project was finished.

"Okay," Minseok agreed. "Should I show you his work space? You can get familiar with his tools before you start working on me."

Jongdae nodded in agreement, and as Minseok stood up he cautiously copied the action.

The short robot began to lead him to another staircase, but as his foot pressed down on the first step, no creaking sound was heard. Jongdae thought this was odd, but he shook the thought away, following him down into the basement.

When they reached the bottom, a huge experimentation area opened out in front of them. There was an operating table right in the center of the room, and various little stations scattered throughout. Jongdae noted that Minseok was obviously a very big deal at the sight of old projects strewn about the place, abandoned for the focus on the "robot with emotions".

He walked into the mess, beginning to pick up tools and study them, attempting to identify the use of each one.

"Do be cautious, sir," Minseok commented as Jongdae picked up one of the sharper of the tools to observe it. "Don't you worry about me," he mumbled back. From what he saw, he certainly had his work cut out for him, but the feeling of finishing something as big as this would no doubt trump the amount of toil it would require.

He was up for the challenge.

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writingwiener #1
Chapter 17: I'm shookith
qtp2tzelle
#2
Chapter 17: I don't know but I'm starting to pity Jongdae. He is in love with a robot. A machine. A programmed bundles of metal that looks like a human but doesn't feels what a human feels. What if somewhere along the way, Jongdae added Love as one of the emotions that Minseok would feel? Still even if Minseok feels every emotion that a human feels, he is still a robot. Programmed to be just like a human. And what if Jongdae meets the human Minseok? What if the human Minseok and Luhan are still alive(I'm not saying they are dead or something), and they fixed things up between them that is why Luhan abandoned robot Minseok? What will happen to robot Minseok then? It's hurting me. Oh my god.
Sooshi_luvs #3
Chapter 17: OHHHHH MY GOD. WHY ARE YOU ALWAYS SO GOOD AT ENDING THE CHAPTERS!!!

Honestly, this is one of the best fanfictions i've ever read. I hope that you'll continue this lol. Thanks for updating!!
JinjinMarshmallow
#4
Chapter 17: omg can't believe chanyeol died ERJGQJEOROGETOJG IT'S VIOLENT but fortunately minseok could go back to normal </3
i really wonder if : if jongdae explained to minseok what love is, would he understand ? i don't quite get why he is afraid to tell him :(
also i really wonder where he is going, i'm so nervous when jongdae isn't with minseok eirugbqeiut
abbieyen16 #5
Chapter 17: MMMMMMMMM GGGGGGGGGGUUUU MMMMMM AHHHHHHH I MMMMM HALEIWJDKWNSKAJENRLEJREND I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY
STUCK ON THAT CHAN U JUST GOT REKT BOI AHA
AND OMGGGGGGG WHEN MINSEOK IS ALL NERVOUS ITS SO ADORABLE AND JONGDAE WAS ALL LIKE 'Im me and im not going to leave u' AND I WAS LIKE 'ING FEELS JUST KISS ALREADY BE HAPPY BE ALL LOVELY DOVEY N ' AH GOD ING DAMN

XD its so gooooooooooooood i always get so FREAKIN EXCITED WHEN I SEE AN UPDATE AHHH!!! Kudos dear author kudos to u for never giving us lack luster chapters XD
safarisunset #6
Chapter 17: I'm trying to focus on the how affectionate Jongdae's declaration that he isn't like Luhan and that he's going to come back, but I'm really really curious as to what's going on with Minseok? Why does he keep sort blacking out and coming back without noticing what's happening at all? I wonder what else Chanyeol did when no one else saw him?? So many questions; thank you for the new chapter! <3
ayumu_lino
#7
Chapter 16: Happy (almost) second birthday to Mechanical! Yay!
dirkexotic #8
Chapter 16: this chapter really gave me a headache
Sooshi_luvs #9
Chapter 16: OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I was waiting sooooo long for this chapter and I was soooo sad at first and then soooo relieved and happy and omggg the ending of this chapter oh myyyy goshhhh!!!! Please update soon! I can't believe you almost killed Minseok!


"Perhaps you give me too much credit Jongdae. Ever stop to think who helped make me that way?"

OMGGGGGGGGGGGG I LOVE THATTTTTTTTTTT
Maddie12578
#10
Chapter 16: Omg. This is so good and I'm waiting for the next chapter. :)