Hi again Akira! I didn't think I would get to Yumi and Rachel so soon after Miyeon but here we go. Also, as Yumi and Rachel are the next two applications to be reviewed, I hope you don’t mind that I am conducting them in the same review. I apologise in advance for the long review, but let’s get right into it.

I’m going to start with Yumi. First off, in the cheatsheet it states to please avoid faceclaims from IZONE as Produce 48 would have already aired by the time of International Idol season two, so please change Yumi’s backup faceclaim from Nako to someone else. In her trivia section, you mention that Sana is her favourite member of Twice, but as Sana is Mina’s faceclaim, could you please change it to another member of Twice? Also you mention that Yumi is attending an international school and normally my brain would go to thinking an English international school but I am unsure wether you mean an English one or Japanese one, so could you please clarify that?

In Yuma’s relationships, you state that Mina and Yumi are not allowed to interact on camera, but as U/IDOL will be hosting and helping to mentor the contestants of International Idol season two, I am sure there will be many times that they will have the chance to interact, so I would love if you could maybe add how they do interact while on camera and how that varies from the usual way they interact (if it does at all). Like are they constantly hugging or showing sisterly signs of affection or does Yumi hide away from Mina? I would love to know so I could get a better idea of how to write their relationship.

Other than that just Yumi is so cute and she seriously has me crying because of her cuteness. I absolutely love her and I love the variety your character’s have. It’s going to make writing each one of them so much fun! Anyway, let’s move on to Rachel now!

There is just one thing I need you to fix with Rachel and that is her back up faceclaim. Could you please change Rachel’s back up faceclaim to someone older? I feel like Vivi is a little too young to be seen as a ’90 liner.

If you fix those things I started for both Yumi and Rachel, I would be more than happy to accept them! Thank you again for applying with more characters!

Hello Akira! Thank you for applying to International Idol! Let's get into your review for Miyeon!

I'm so happy to see Miyeon again as I really loved her when you submitted her for U/IDOL! There are just a few things you have to add/fix before I can accept Miyeon. First off, could you please add the first season of International Idol to her pre-debut section? Could you please also add a song she could have sang within the audition as I am undecided wether I want to allow the contestants to just dance as opposed to also singing in their auditions for International Idol. Also in her interview section, as the interviews will be broadcasted, I would love if you could remove the use of the word , as I don't really think that would do anything good for the show and the support of Miyeon herself. Other than that, I am really like Miyeon and I am glad to see her again. If you adjust and add the things I mentioned, I would be more than happy to accept her!

OMG AKIRA. JIA WAS MY MISS A BIAS AND I STILL KEEP UP WITH HER TILL THIS DAY!