Choi Kangji

Kwon Joon

han juliet

Ming's Comment: Thank you so much for applying Fei^^ Ugh the face claim you picked is so beautiful>< Now, shall we headover to the review? Overall, I really like how her family played a huge role in shaping who she is as a person. I really love the fact that she uses facial expression to communicate when she lost her voice XD I just found that quite unique XD Your background is very detailed and I love how you put North's character in your app too ouo One thing I found that's quite unclear is, who is Jiwon? loool i dont recall a character like that but if youcan just clearify that then its fine. Another thing I'd like to point out is the year your character was born in. the cheatsheet says age 16-18 and what I meant is year 97-99 (i guess it was my mistake for not making this part clear) but if you could just change the year then you would be fine^^ That's all I got to say, you'll be put under pending until North does her review but please to fix the things I mentioned above^^ Thank you~~~

North's Comment: Hai! Thanks for fixing those mistakes. I no longer see a problem with your app. There is one thing though, if she's born in 1997, her age would actually be 18 and not 17. But other than that, I really see nothing wrong with your app. I smiled when you included Joon into your app. I find this a little funny actually since he's not really approachable type. Well, that's all for now. Great job on your app! You will be now put under accepted :)

Ming's Comment: Hello 28th ssi^^ loool please fill in your info at the top XD I know you were tired but just pop that in so I can call you your name instead of 28th XD Shall we move on to Sakura then? At first I thought she was gonna be jap just cause of her name but later I found out that shes not and why she was named that way XD. You did an amazing job in the background area and I could see how her father's wish became something that will motivate her in doing flute. I have two thing I would like you to add after you get enough rest. The first part is for you to elaborate more on her nagative traits. I would like specific traits for her negative sides instead of just saying she gets mad at other etc in one small para. Just like your other personality traits, I would like you to talk more about them. As of right now, she's 99% positively driven which makes her kind of like a mary sue. You can keep some of her rebellious trait from when she was small into her personality now. Either way, please add more to that areas. The second and last thing Id like you to add is please add her father and grandma to the family section. I know they passed away but I would like to know how they interacted in case we write a scene where she talked about her life with them in more detail. That is all and you'll be put under pending after you add those informations and after North does her review^^ Thank you for applying!!!

North's Comment: Heyyy! Thanks for applying! I really like Sakura but honestly, like Ming has described, she's more like a Mary Sue character. Not enough flaws! For example, you called her rebellious in her bg but you must elaborate! How was she rebellious? What did she do that was considered rebellious? Also, in her family or friend section, please add Plum in there as well along with her father, grandfather and grandmother. Pets are a big influence on people's lives and I would like to know how Plum influences hers. However, all those negative things aside, I must say that I enjoyed reading her bg and her choice of style. It was very well thought out and detailed. See, I love when people are specific so AWESOME JOB! 
Yeah, so, until you fix up your app, you will be put under pending. 

Ming's Comment: So the first thing I did here is chang the picture of Sehun cause i did not like the one before XD ( sorry North) but anywayyys, THANK YOU so much for applying as a male! It's always a joy to have a male applicant cause we always get girls first XDDD so yeah thanks ouo I really like his name...its like so beautiful XD. Han seems like a nice character to write about and I could see him being an actual close friend with my chara if he is chosen (positively yes) and I would like to say i love you for picking bass because thats my instrument in my school too XD BASS SECTION FTW! I def see no problem with his personality and background as they areperf but I would want you to add something to him. Could you possibly add something that this boy is really bad at? Because as of right now, I see him being smart, can play instruments, and he is just good at most things. So i would love it even more if you do add something he is bad at. Other than that, everything is good! Thank you for applying! You'll be put under pending after you added that little thing^^

North's Comment: Heyyyy Yuri! Thanks so much for applying! For some reason, I was really looking forward to Han. He's your typical narcissitic rich kid so I really really like him. I loved how specific you were and how much detail you have incoporated, making it so much easier for me to understand him. If he gets chosen, I'll have SO MUCH FUN writing about him alongside Ming. I think he, Kangji and Joon will become pretty good friends. BTW, nice choice of instrument, the double bass is truly a beautiful instrument. I like how he choose the bass completely through his own interest and desire. Also, you had a really nice balance in his personality regarding his positive and negative traits. You're app actually turned out pretty well written for someone who's first language isn't English. I don't actually see anything wrong with your app so far so good job. But you will be put under pending until Ming does her review. Maybe she spot something I missed in your app (?). But great job! I really enjoyed reading about him. Oh yeah, nice face claim. It really suits him :)

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