Nineteen

Month of Maia

Nineteen

 

Nineteen - one more than eighteen; nine more than ten; 19

Word count - 375

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He looked up to the sky which was turned into an angry red. The boy sighs as he looks around the deserted place. It was lively once. Now it was all in ashes; some places even still on fire. Taemin took a deadly grip of a hand full of ashes. His eyes were rough. He could think of nothing. He was beyond furious. How could they? This was his home. He was finally home yet it was all gone now. District 19 was now just a mere memory.

He didn’t miss his parents. He didn’t miss his siblings. He didn’t even have them to be truth. He was just an orphan boy. He just wanted to be home. He suddenly remembered something; someone to be exact. His green eyes focused on the ground; his body, shaking a little.

No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No, please, god, no.

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Taemin finally got a hold of himself. He’s got to. He slowly closes his eyes as he focused on some place he had in mind very intensely. White lights appear from his body just like he always practiced. He arrived at his destination faster than he thought he would arrive. Practice makes perfect after all.

The boy in white looked around; searching. His eyes then stopped at a particular place. It was none other the well he used to played at. He hurried there but to his dismay, he found nothing in the well. There used to be fresh water so clear that there was no need for further disinfection periods. He looked up as something wet touches his forehead. Snow. Everything was cold and dead, Taemin realized. There was no life in the area anyway. Gone; all gone. He might be gone, too.

How could he be so stupid? The administrators would do anything to get him. They would promise him anything, of course. But one thing for sure, they won’t stay true to the promise. The 12 year old Taemin was stupid enough to do stupid things to save his hyung. Taemin smiled bitterly. He was about to transport back to the big house when a warm breeze passes him.

He paused and inhaled his home’s air and-

“Taemin?”

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Namri’s corner: It was supposed to be longer, I swear. But the longer one was sadder than this and I’m not into angst these days. Besides, with SHINee’s comeback and all; my thoughts are scattered. The longer I wrote, the more nonsense would come out.

Ps: Taemin can transport, yes. (District 19??:: Lame, I know.)

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qiqoqi
#1
Chapter 4: Re read it again cuz i saw u link this on twitter. And how i wish there will be sequel to this. I love businessman ming.
TaemKay
#2
Chapter 7: Unexpectly , I hv found your stories.. kkk The part where they are kissing is so y...kk
Cephei #3
Chapter 10: I REALLY LIKE THIS!! I've been OBSSESSED with historical novels lately so you can only imagine my pleasure when I came across this update. I would love to see an expansion of this <:
5ever_SHINee #4
Chapter 9: Adorable gown !!!!! Wanna see Taeminnie like that ^^ keep updating sis i love those little things called love lol
Cephei #5
Chapter 9: THIS ONE WAS ADORABLE Of course Minho is the sweetest person on Earth until he's around Taemin and then he becomes this teasingly affection person and Taemin can't help but think Minho is a bully lool. Minho is such a sly dog - imagine Taemin's reaction when he realises that it's a couple photo shoot! As for a point of improvement, I would love to see more description. The dialogue is great, but what about Taemin's clothes and Minho's reaction? Is he wearing a pressed shirt, a pleated skirt that ends just above his knees and kind of makes Minho go wild? That sort of thing. Maybe you could describe Minho's neighbourhood, and how Taemin feels intimidated by Minho's house (if that is in his character). Your prose is wonderful to read, so don't be afraid to slow down and share details with readers ^__^ Cheers! (and yaaay shinee!! maybe we'll see more 2min fics on aff too!)
qiqoqi
#6
Chapter 8: uwa uwa uwaaaa it's so cuuuteeeeee. uuh taeminnie. you're such a great author but why there is not much subscriber?
canarydreams
#7
Chapter 8: Yea~ why stop there when you can add an additional steamy scene loljk. Anyway, regarding the chapter entitled "Repair"... I was surprised to learn that they're both robots. You update fast too. :)
5ever_SHINee #8
Chapter 6: Why you stopped here
CarrotOmNomNom
#9
Chapter 5: This is so cool :o it would be amazing as a chaptered fic. The entire concept is so intriguing and I can only imagine how amazing the entire backstory would be.
5ever_SHINee #10
Chapter 4: Of course they r legends lol rest well sis :)