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Chapter 18: Yay! Hae realizes that he doesn't love Siwon, or at least he's starting to realize it! That makes me HAPPY! Well, see you next time! Fighting! ;)
Chapter 17: Ahaha, Hyukkie needs to learn how to say no. But really, kindness? LOL Anyway, you don't need to worry about the speed you update. In fact, you're one of the fastest fanfic writers I know. Sure it's short, but you update fast. Anyway, good luck and fighting! See you next time! =D
Chapter 16: "Oh i'll see you tomorrow! I'll see you..." i started mimicking donghae's voice. | Yay for jealous Hyukkie!
OMG HAE DON'T WANT TO DIE EARLY!!!!!! | Lol, so funny and cute.
MINNIE ARE YOU GONNA EAT THAT FISH!!!!!!!! YOU CANNOT! NEMO WILL DIE MINNIE!!! | Wae is Hae so innocent and adorable?! >.<
"Hey donghae! Wanna join us?" kyuhyun asked
"You sure?"
"Yea why not? HAHA"
"Cause i'm dumb?...."
"LOL PLEASE THERE'S ME IN THE GROUP" | This is just... *keyboard smashing and spazzing* Why are they like this?! XD
This chapter is all fluff and fun! Love it!
Chapter 15: Uhm, what exactly were Donghae and Siwon even doing? Well, I'm glad that Eunhyuk can actually admit that he loves Donghae, but too bad that he thinks that love isn't real. I hope Eunhae gets together soon!
Chapter 15: My favorite classic plot device is where the angsty would-be confessor, still not able to confess and risk his heart, is overheard talking about it to a friend by the person he holds a crush on. Then it basically writes the rest of the story itself.
Chapter 15: I think Hyukjae ignoring Donghae and looking depressed all the time might trigger the love for Hyukjae out of Donghae. Siwon is forever coming between them. Geez. Happy writing.
Chapter 14: Ah our own Ma-Siwon, ever the plot device in many a eunhae fic, from evil villain, to c-block, to just the competition, it's just not eunhae until eunsihae has it's play. Seriously, EunSiHae, it could've been a sub-unit :)
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