DamnThatDubu's Review Shop :D NOT TAKING REQUESTS

Description

Hello ^_^ 

My name is DamnThatDubuand I am an author, but I am also an avid fanfiction reader. 

Throughout my exploring of shops, I have noticed that the reviewers are more reviewing as authors, and not as readers. Well, my reviews are going to be based on my thoughts as a reader, and not an author. 

Warning: I am much tougher of a reader than I am an author. 

If you want an HONEST review of every aspect of your story, look no further!

DamnThatDubu's request shop started: September 2, 2011

Navigation: 

Pending/ Completed Reviews: Chapter 1

Blacklist: Chapter 2

Foreword

Like every other shop, I do have rules. 

Rules: 

1. Put on something nice. 

2. Don't be nervous

3. Just be yourself. 

Heh heh.. kidding... get it? it was a joke ... ;___; Okay, I am a dork, and I do have a sense of humor, so just keep that in mind while reading. 

 

ACTUAL RULES: 

1. Please be patient. I am an Honors/AP Student, currently trying my best to get into an Ivy League, and you can imagine how much work that is. If you pester me, I do have the right to DENY your request. I'll usually get them done within a week. If I take longer than 3, feel free to pester me. 

2. Do not bash or badmouth me if you don't like my review. I took the time to do it, so be grateful. Even if you don't like your grade, I gave you an honest review, please respect that. 

3. Please at least place your  review or review link somewhere in your fanfic. Once again, I am busy, and I take the time to do this. I don't care if you give it a chapter, a place in your Author's note, or in your forward, just do it. I will check. 

4. Adding to rule number 3: CREDIT MY REVIEW. Please. "Credits to DamnThatDubu's request shop" won't take up that much space. 

5. I do review rated fics. But, just know that i would prefer not to. Not because it would make me uncomfortable, but because I will still grade using the same rubric, and if its just hardcore , it'll recieve a VERY low score. 

6. If you decide you DON'T want a review, PLEASE tell me within 48 hours. I don't want to waste my time for nothing. 

7. SUBSCRIBE. It's frustrating if I give you help and you don't even subscribe. 

8. After you've read and picked up your review, drop a comment!

9. Be reasonable with your chapters. If it's over 55, I will probably read the first 15 and then review your story. Don't complain if I do that. 

10. YOU ARE MOST DEFINATELY ALLOWED TO REQUEST REVIEWS FROM OTHER PEOPLE TOO. I know some shops say don't, but I'm perfectly okay with it haha

Break any rules, and you'll be landed on the blacklist. 

 

It would be helpful if you: 

1. Told me if English wasn't your first language. I won't judge the grammar as bad. 

 

DamnThatDubu's Request shop is currently a one man team! Please keep that in mind!

 

Rubric: 

Title:[- /5]

I will rate this on how eye-catching it is. If I were scrolling down through fanfics, would I click on this? 

Poster/Background [-/5]

ONLY ICLUDED IF YOU ACTUALLY HAVE A POSTER. Basically, does it do your story justice. 

Forward/Description [-/5] 

This is important, but isn't worth a lot. I know a lot of people have different styles of what to put in forwards, and I respect that. Basically, I'm judging on if I would still be interested after I've read it. 

Plot [ -/ 30]

This is the most important part. How original your plot is, how realistic your plot is, how much sense does it make. Would I be interested or bored. 

Writing Style [-/10] 

This isn't really a concrete explanation. Writing styles will ALWAYS varry, and I am judging on how well your style fits with the plot. 

Flow [-/15] 

Does your story go too fast, too slow, and again, does this part make sense. 

Characterization [-/15]

Are your characters really characters, or are they just there? I'm talking about their habits, and how well you explain who the characters REALLY are. 

Ending [-/10]

WILL ONLY BE INCLUDED IF YOUR STORY IS FINISHED. Does the ending make sense, or was it just too fluffy? I am pretty harsh on this part. 

Grammar/Spelling [-/10]

I am a total grammar snob. If I could make this worth 100, I would. Sadly, I cannot. This score is pretty self explanitory. 

Overall Enjoyment [-/5]

A lot of Reviewers make this worth more, but, its merely my opinion, so I wouldn't make it so harsh. If I like your story, you get a 4. If I loved it, you get a 5. Meh, you get a three. Oh dear- you get a 2. And if your story absolutely made me want to tear my eyeballs out, you get a one. Seriously, I doubt anyone will get lower than a three. 

Total [-/110]

 

And last but not least: Form! Just copy and paste this in the comment section~

Username: 

Story Name: 

Story link: 

Other: [This is where you would but the things on the "It would be helpful if" section]

Easy as 1,2,3 c: 

Comments

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SuperGeneration100
#1
aww its okay I hope everything will go well!!
Hwaiting!! ^^
amour-
#2
Username: alreadysmitten
Story Name: Past to Future ?!
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/142832/past-to-future-minhyuk-romance-sungyeol-you
Other: It would be helpful if you could help on how to improve my fanfic . ^^ . Gomawo ~
kidamazone #3
It's okay, take your time!<br />
Everyone has been busy too with school and probably haven't been able to update their own stories as much. xD
onewjjang #4
Hi thanks for your review.<br />
Thanks for the grammar checking too. I think I understand it better after writing for the second fic. But I really thank you for clarifying it all. :)<br />
Yeah, I do realized the SHINee character are really cliche. But as when I started these I didn't really think of that, so yeah, I tend to put in a lot.<br />
But I hope my 2nd fic is a better one. :)<br />
Hahaha, yeah too much twist. Too many ideas at the start of this fic.<br />
Oh i love NaNa's character too. I think I have the most fun writing about her. <br />
Yes, I will try to make any character much more interesting in the future then. :)<br />
I will not be discourage by it. I just need to brush up all the not so good thing in my writing. <br />
Thanks again for your time. :D
jonggggup #5
Username: annnjcifer<br />
Story Name: A Fake Paradise<br />
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/80168/a-fake-paradise-angst-bully-infinite-myungsoo-reality-woohyun-you<;br />
Other: thanks!
LubbyTaeminDonghae
#6
Username: MXRxCBeckah<br />
Story Name: No One But You<br />
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/87814/no-one-but-you-shinee<;br />
Other: none right now ^^
kidamazone #7
This is really random, but I love your signature. o.o XD <3
almightydubu-hearts
#8
Username: AlmightyDubu-hearts<br />
Story Name: Tangled with Fate's Web<br />
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/64871/tangled-in-fate-s-web-onew-romance-shinee<;br />
Other: English is my second language.. So my grammar isn't perfect ^^
MRSLEE #9
ohhh finally! haha i'm so happy knowing that you're done with your review of my story. hehe. okay, basically, you and my other reviewer kinda commented the same thing about the spacing of the letters for my title. and yeaah you both guessed it right. i find it more....stylish? LOL. i got a low mark for the grammar/spelling. oppsie that means i'll have to tamp down my laziness and read what i've written ages ago and correct them. oh gosh. i feel so terrible about this. i started writing this story last year and i don't like the idea of proof reading the same thing all over again so basically i'll just end up scrolling and re-read the new scenes i've written instead. :b my bad. but, you've no idea how happy i am knowing that you can relate to my story very well. to be honest, realistic/believable is what i've been trying to achieve ever since the moment i started writing this story. and about your question regarding to nichkhun's presence on the poster, oh well, he'll be playing kinda a big role in the story later. it's such a waste you didn't get the chance to read about him because to be honest, i love writing about him. thank you so much for taking your time to read my story and make a review. you just made my day. hehe.
SuperGeneration100
#10
Username: SuperGeneration100<br />
Story Name: Is It Real?<br />
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/71631/is-this-real-donghae-haesica-jessicajung-sifany-sunsun-supergeneration-taeteuk<;br />
Other: I might have some typos (Spelling errors) here and there. And theres only 4 chapters since i recently started :)<br />
Thanks! ^^