Story Title:

The story’s title practically tells the main point of the story. I see no need to change it because despite its simplicity and forwardness, it’s not boring. If ever you choose to change it though, I recommend a title that involves the story’s aspect on romance and pranks.

Graphics:

Not applicable.No poster/graphic

Description/Foreword:

The description is too short. To be able to leave an impact, I advise a description that doesn’t just point out the main plot of your story. I think the one statement is a great ending for your description though. ^^ Just add a little more intro before it and it will be good to go.

Characterization:

Okay, first things first. I’m new to this characters because I’m not really a fan of iKon, but despite that, I simply love them in this story because of their cuteness. I like Jinhwan a lot (I’m not sure why) and I find Junhoe adorable. I like their roles and how Jinhwan expresses himself via his thoughts and internal conversations. Jinhwan reminds me of some female manga characters I have read a while back and its quite fun to read a story wherein the boy portrays somewhat feminine traits and thoughts.

Plot:

The story’s plot is quite simple and something that you might have read from past, different stories, but the fluff and flow of events ma