Story Title:

There’s not much to say about the title. It’s simple and it talks about the story’s goal which was achieved in the end. I’m not saying that it’s not good, because it is in its own little way. You can opt to change it into something that can capture the reader’s interest with just one read or you can keep it as it is.

Graphics:

There’s not much to say about the title. It’s simple and it talks about the story’s goal which was achieved in the end. I’m not saying that it’s not good, because it is in its own little way. You can opt to change it into something that can capture the reader’s interest with just one read or you can keep it as it is.

Description/Foreword:

The description is written really well. Here’s an advice, though; try and write it not in paragraph form. Write it in this way: “In a bleak post-war age, genetic reproduction is cheaper and more reliable than the manufacture of the dolls. In certain segments of society, young men are now made and kept as slaves and pets, issued with a limited lifespan, chained in so many ways. But Taemin is different from the others of his ’batch,’ and when Minho comes into his life, he finds his true self harder to keep secret. There’s just one problem. Minho is the boyfriend of his owner Sunny… And acts of ual expression are forbidden for his kind.” Try and fix its layout in a way that can catch attention. You can put a graphic or just let the fonts do the attention-catching. This allows readers to be drawn to your story upon clicking it.

Characterization:

Big fan of SHINee here, especially of Minho and Taemin, so when I read the story, I was really surprised of the roles the both of them played. I like the intensity and characteristic