Story Title:

I did like the title. It seemed really common at first but after I read the story, I liked how you picked this title. Kris' Summer, since this story is about when Kris left which was in the Summer, I thought that it was really basic and not really exciting but like I said, after reading it, I thought it was quirky and quiet cute in the way. Summer can be referred as the girl he met and it's like telling the reader that it was someone he felt special towards and then after that in brackets was 'Goodbye Summer' which is him leaving her. I don't really know how to explain this well but it's mixing two things together yet they're the same such as Summer = season Kris left, name of the girl he met, Goodbye Summer = he's not going to return to where he met her after Summer, telling the girl he can't get attached to her. I liked how you planned out the title and I thought overall, it suited the story.

Graphics:

At first, reading the title and description, I didn't find the poster relatable to the whole story but when I actually read it, I felt like it did. It was summer yet the met at the night and that's what you're trying to explain thought the poster. The poster is simple and minimal and there's basically 4 things in the whole poster: Kris, Summer (April), the background and the title w/ the designer aka you. There's little things such as the triangle and possible filters but not really much happening which can be a good thing. I don't really think you could add anything onto that and it does describe the story well.

The cropping of characters aren't really done well but it's not very noticeable other than the legs and such but other than that, it's fine! I feel like you should get a background. Possibly a simple black with some navy blue mixed into it and have bokeh on it with the title but it's really up to you. I just think that if your story is quite angst, gore or sad, it should have some type of background to help create more of an atmosphere while reading the chapters if you don't put the poster within the chapter but it's really up to you. Many don't like having posters on their story and sometimes it's not really needed so it really depends if you want any background to be in the story! :D

Description/Foreword:

I liked how you did take a bit from the one shot and put it within the description or possibly the other way around but it did let us see into the story a bit. From