Story Title:

Title for your story is unique, it's appeal to reader's eyes. It's very eye catching. It's as if theres two sides of Christmast;that's how I thought. But I love the title you choose, and you shouldn't change it.So there's nothing much to say in this section.

Graphics:

I will be direct and tell you that I don't like the poster at all. It doesn't attracting me and certainly not your readers; other readers would click it just because of the title but for the poster no. It's how to explain this? If you would added some effects, or some texture or blending. Than yes, I would liked the poster better. I would suggest you quickly to search for poster or you might lose your readers.

Description/Foreword:

There isn't much to say in this section. It was written perfectly short. That's a perfect way to atrtract the reader without writing a 'book' by this I mean a lot of authors write a very long and boring description. You did it perfectly. The foreword is perfection, it's very cliff-hanging by the point that I was 'frustrated'. So kudos for that!

Characterization:

At first I didn't understood quiet Hongbin's relationship with Ravi, but I understood that he is just a friend and that a person that Hongbin truly likes is Taekwon.I can see that Ravi playes a big role of a best friend that gives