Joongdok
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Story Title:
Nothing much to say about the title. It simply states the overall or main topic of the story, but at the same time it hides another main point that the readers will only know if they read the story.
Graphics:
Here’s a way to make your poster look interesting. Having the city of Seoul as the background is a fantastic idea. As for the photos about the city, it would look better if they stood in an opacitized form over the city, with Jongdae and Sujin’s faces being more dominant. It would come out looking like a silhouette over Seoul. The dark color motif is a good choice, but try to place the title in a more worthy place - either in the middle or below.
Description/Foreword:
Not much comment on the description. It looks good the way it is. No change needed or revisions. I’d say you did a great job with it. It’s snappy, brief, and it catches attention - something vital for fan fictions.
Characterization:
Great character descriptions, and by description, I don’t mean the one in the foreword. I am talking about how you described the characters throughout the story - emotion, thoughts, actions, physique. I like how you were able to display Jongdae as a serious figure in this fic; far from his usual roles as the prankster and laidback person in other and most fics. Same goes for the other characters.
Plot:
Crime-themed fan fictions are hard to write. You need
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